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Common
Types of Renku Sequence
description
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Introduction
This article describes the core features of some commonly
written types of renku sequence and gives a personal appraisal of each.
Elsewhere in Renku Reckoner the section Schematic Guides carries a series
of ready-to-use templates designed to facilitate composition. These
schemas may help to illuminate the comments below. Accordingly there are
links adjacent to the principal section headings.
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The
Kasen - 36 verses - a description |
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The
name Kasen means 'Poetic Immortals' and refers to the Chinese and Japanese
practice of creating ideal groups of thirty six artistic forbears. Prior
to the establishment of the Basho school formalised linked verse was generally
written as one hundred or fifty verse sequences. By the time of Basho's
death the majority of haikai sequences were Kasen.
The structure of the
Kasen reflects earlier practice in that it is based on the number of writing
sheets (kaishi) needed to record the poem. The Kasen requires
two folios. The six verses of the preface (jo) comprise the front
of the first folio. The initial twelve verses of the development movement
(ha) are written on the back of the first folio. A further twelve
verses of the development movement cover the front of the second folio,
and the six verses of the finale (kyu) are recorded on the back. It should
be noted that some renku theorists, writing in English, distinguish between
the two halves of ha, referring to the first half as 'development'
and the second as 'intensification'. No such distinction is made in Japanese.
Elsewhere in Renku
Reckoner the article The Seasons of Renku discusses many aspects of the
way in which seasons appear and are distributed in a renku sequence. Here
it is sufficient to say that in the Kasen spring and autumn predominate
over summer and winter by a ratio of approximately 5:3. Spring and autumn
verses each appear in clusters, typically of three, but which may extend
up to five in a row. Summer and winter verses appear typically in pairs,
however they may extend to a cluster of three, or be represented by a
single verse at a time. Frequently a given seasonal cluster will cross
the boundary between one folio face and the next.
Other than for poems
begun in spring, over the course of a poem the 'major' seasons of autumn
and spring will each make two distinct appearances, whereas summer or
winter may be represented by a single cluster. For poems begun in spring,
that season will make three separate appearances. The fixed topic
of spring blossom appears twice, in the penultimate position of the first
folio back [verse position #17] and as the penultimate verse of the sequence
[verse position #35]. These verses are never treated as the more generic
topic of flower. The positions themselves are effectively set; very rarely
are they anticipated or delayed.
Moon appears as the
principal topic at or around the penultimate position of the preface [verse
position #5], at or around the seventh position of the first folio front
[verse position #13], and at or around the penultimate position of the
second folio front [verse position #29]. This latter is always
autumn moon, whilst a second autumn moon verse generally appears in the
preface.
Love appears as a
pair of verses somewhere in the mid section of both faces dedicated to
ha. Basho tended to minimise this topic whereas others of his
school would give it greater extent, allowing it the full run of classic
emotion inherited from medieval renga, from unconscious attraction, through
consummation, to disillusionment - with all the attendant danger of descending
into narrative extension.
The special compositional
characteristics of hokku, wakiku, daisan and ageku were central to the
technical development of the Basho school and are honoured by contemporary
writers of Kasen renku. Elsewhere in Renku Reckoner the article Beginnings
and Endings examines these verses in detail. Similarly the article A Dynamic
Pattern explores the meaning of the expression jo-ha-kyu. |
The
Kasen - 36 verses - an appraisal |
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Though
he is known as the father of haiku the Kasen renku and haibun [mixed poetry
and prose] were Matsuo Basho's preferred vehicles for expression. It therefore
comes as no surprise that the Kasen is rather good.
Given the level of
misinformation and misunderstanding surrounding renku in the English speaking
world, particularly the fallacy that it espouses the perpetual search
for novelty, it is worth dwelling briefly on some of the salient features
of the Kasen. Seasons recur. They may appear for up to five verses in
a row. There are two spring blossom verses. There are three moon verses,
two of which are generally autumn. Love appears as a fixed topic twice,
potentially for an extended run. These factors make nonsense of the assertion
that the principal motor of renku is absolute diversity. The structure
of the Kasen clearly demonstrates that fine writing has more to do with
periodicity and interlocking cycles, with tonal control and evolution.
And there's the rub.
New or occasional writers of renku who have not yet refined their skills
in these matters may find the Kasen simply too long. Without clear vision
and leadership the twelve verses of a development side can rapidly become
amorphous. The Kasen too takes time to complete. In the case of remote
composition, by surface or email, the number of exchanges necessary to
arrive at a full text may be so great as to cause the poem, or enthusiasm
for it, to founder.
But the Kasen was
and is essential to the development of all aspects of excellence in renku.
A person who limits themselves always to the shorter contemporary forms
is unlikely to develop the highest level of artistry that the genre permits. |
The
Han Kasen - 18 verses - an appraisal |
Han
Kasen means Half Kasen. The Han Kasen is simply the first folio of a Kasen
considered as a piece in its own right. With the exception of sequences
begun in spring, seasonal distribution is identical to that of a full Kasen.
For poems begun in spring the distribution is adjusted to ensure that all
seasons feature at least once. The single blossom verse, the two moon verses
and a representative run of love verses would all be expected to appear
in their typical locations. Skilled writers might attempt to draw the dynamic
feel of 'kyu' into the closing portion of the poem. |
The
Han Kasen - 18 verses - an appraisal |
Why
would anybody want to listen to half a symphony, or view half a sculpture?
Whilst it may be completed relatively rapidly The Han Kasen is so ugly
and unbalanced that it barely serves as a practice piece. Its manifest
deficiencies have been a principal factor in the search for more satisfactory
short forms over the course of the last several decades. |
The Triparshva - 22 verses - a description
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The three movements
of the Triparshva comprise six, ten and six verses respectively. Each
movement expresses a core component of the jo-ha-kyu dynamic pattern:
preface, intensification and finale. Two distinct seasons appear in each
movement. Seasons do not straddle the movement boundaries. Autumn and
spring verses tend to appear in clusters of three. Winter and summer appear
singly or in pairs. The special compositional characteristics of hokku,
wakiku, daisan and ageku are always respected.
The Triparshva has one blossom and two moon verses. The
final movement closely resembles the final face of the Kasen. The Triparshva's
sole blossom verse is therefore spring blossom, appearing in the penultimate
position. Note that this topic is never the more generic one of flower.
However - in addition to the historic cherry and plum - blackthorn, apple,
pear and hawthorn blossom are all considered appropriate.
The close of the Triparshva's second movement is likewise
similar to the close of the third face of the Kasen, autumn moon given
prominence at or around the penultimate position. The location of the
Triparshva's other moon verse further recalls the Kasen, being typically
situated at verse #5 of the preface. This 'secondary' moon verse always
takes a season other than autumn.
Love appears as a cluster of three of four verses somewhere
in the middle of the second movement.
The first and last of this cluster tend to be written as usher-of-love
(koi no yobidashi) and end-of-love (koi banare) respectively. They therefore
approach the topic indirectly.
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The
Triparshva - 22 verses - an appraisal
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The
Triparshva is an excellent vehicle for exploring and expressing the techniques
and sensibilities typical of the Basho school. Both preface and finale
are the same length as those of the Kasen. The fixed topics of moon and
blossom appear in familiar contexts, encouraging a classical approach.
At ten verses the
single development movement is long enough to achieve extended tonal and
dynamic effects. Love has sufficient space to develop without the risk
of becoming dominant, and there is room for discretion as to where it
appears.
With its twenty two
verse six-ten-six structure the Triparshva has sufficient extent to sensibly
permit ideas of renku as mandala - a poem that contains all things - whilst
still being compact enough to facilitate remote composition, via email
for instance. In short, the Triparshva is very hard to fault. Persons
who do not have the time, space, confidence or inclination to compose
a Kasen should seriously consider the Triparshva. |
The
Nijuin - 20 verses - a description |
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The
folio structure of the Nijuin reflects that of the Kasen. It therefore
divides its twenty verses between four faces or sides, each identified
with an element of the jo-ha-kyu dynamic pattern. These sides are considered
as preface, development part
one, development part two, and rapid close, occupying four-six-six-four
verses respectively. Each season features once, except for sequences begun
in spring, in which case spring both starts and ends the poem. Spring
and autumn verses tend to appear in clusters of three, winter and summer
have one pair each. Seasons
do not straddle the movement boundaries.
The Nijuin has two
moon verses, one of which is always autumn. Except for sequences begun
in spring the final face closely resembles the final face of the Kasen,
spring blossom therefore appears in the penultimate position. For sequences
begun in spring the topic of blossom often features in either hokku or
wakiku, in which case it is absent from the finale. Blossom is generally
treated as the traditional cherry or plum. The
special compositional characteristics of hokku, wakiku, daisan and ageku
are always respected.
Love may appear twice
as a pair of verses midway on each of the two sides of development/intensification
(ha). Alternatively love may appear once only as a cluster of
three verses midway on either of the sides, in which case the
first and last will tend to be written as usher-of-love (koi no yobidashi)
and end-of-love (koi banare). |
The
Nijuin - 20 verses - an appraisal |
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A feature
of the renku renaissance underway since the latter half of the last century
has been the search for new types of renku sequence that are shorter than
the Kasen yet reflective of its general aesthetic characteristics. The
popularity of the Nijuin is proof that its originator, Meiga Higashi,
was successful in this quest. The Nijuin is clear, unambiguous, and effective.
There are some drawbacks.
The preface can feel a little truncated as it is crowded with verses each
having special compositional characteristics: hokku, wakiku, daisan and
close. The division of the twelve verses of ha into two six verse
sections may well mirror the symmetry of the Kasen but it does tend to
limit the scope for extended tonal and dynamic effects. However these
criticisms are marginal. Experienced writers will find ways to overcome
them, whilst new and occasional writers of renku will benefit from the
Nijuin's ease of assimilation. |
The Shisan - 12 verses - a description
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The Shisan is a twelve
verse sequence consisting of four movements considered analogous to the
folio faces of the Kasen: preface; development part one; development part
two; and rapid close. Each movement, comprising three verses, features
one of the four seasons. As with all formal renku the poem begins in the
season current at the time of composition but, unusually, then follows
the natural calendar.
Typically spring and
autumn are each represented by a grouped pair of verses, winter and summer
by one apiece. However for sequences begun in winter or summer the convention
that verse two (wakiku) should take the same season as verse
one (hokku) is often observed.
The customary fixed
topics of moon, blossom and love each make a single appearance, love extending
to a grouped pair of verses. Because of the wealth of precedent and association,
moon and blossom will tend to appear in their classic seasonal settings,
autumn and spring respectively, though this is not a requirement. Some
authors also choose to treat blossom in the more generic sense of flower.
The word Shisan
has several layers of meaning. At a primary level it may be read as 'shi',
meaning 'four', and 'san' meaning 'three'. When written in Chinese
characters 'shi' (or 'tamawari') may be taken as 'a
gift from a higher place', and 'san' (or 'bansankai')
indicates a 'banquet' or 'formal meal'. For all its compaction therefore
the Shisan is nonetheless an invitation to observe the finer points of
style. Accordingly the Shisan respects the tonal and topical imperatives
of the jo-ha-kyu dynamic pattern and honours the special compositional
characteristics of hokku, wakiku, daisan and ageku. |
The Shisan
- 12 verses - an appraisal |
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What
happens if you try to compress the vast scope of the Kasen into such a
short space? You fail. In fairness this is not really what the Shisan
attempts. But it does propose four movements phrased according to the
principles of jo-ha-kyu and in this there are conflicts.
It is extremely difficult
to establish the calm tone of the preface (jo) when all three
constituent verses - hokku, wakiku and daisan - have special compositional
requirements of their own. This is nowhere more apparent than for the
third verse (daisan) which must at once 'break-away' from the
more tightly paired hokku and wakiku, whilst conveying a sense of pause
to mark the end of the preface.
By dividing into threes
the Shisan also obliges both the first part of the development movement
(ha part one) and the finale (kyu) to open with a short
verse (tanku) - a marked contrast to the normal practice of beginning
each movement with the apparently more authoritative long verse (chouku).
At first sight the
adoption of the natural calendar may appear to be a welcome simplification.
In practice it becomes considerably more difficult to establish a tangible
non-season gap between seasonal clusters as there is a tendency for the
mind to impute chronological references to the interstitial verses even
where none are intended. For some the fact that spring blossom can no
longer be relied upon to provide a graceful exit is also a drawback.
But the difficulties
should not be overstated. The Shisan can be the vehicle for taught and
finely structured writing as long as the temptation towards baroque intricacy
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The New Shisan - 12 verses - a description
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The
New Shisan is identical to its parent except that the seasons do not follow
calendar order. A typical layout may easily be arrived at by reference to
the article 'The Seasons of Renku and their distribution' elsewhere in Renku
Reckoner. |
The
New Shisan - 12 verses - an appraisal
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The particular
difficulties inherent in adherence to the natural calendar are discussed
above. It is certainly the case that persons new to composition may find
it easier to avoid extended narrative or logical progression if they adopt
this variant. |
The Junicho
- 12 verses - a description |
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The
Junicho or Twelve Tone is a ‘single sheet’ poem that disregards
all formal separations. Typically
spring and autumn are each represented by a grouped pair of verses, winter
and summer by one apiece as, for sequences begun in winter or summer,
the convention that verse two (wakiku) should take the same season
as verse one (hokku) is frequently disregarded.
The Junicho allows
for a single bloom verse; this may appear in any season and be blossom
or a generic flower. The poem likewise contains a single moon verse that
may also appear in any season. Love will be represented by a grouped pair
of verses that may appear in any position, but are unlikely to constitute
the very beginning or very ending of a poem.
The particular compositional
characteristics of hokku and ageku tend to be respected whilst those of
wakiku and daisan may well be discarded. The topical and tonal exclusions
common to the opening movements of more traditional types of sequence
are ignored. |
The Junicho
- 12 verses - an appraisal |
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The
Junicho is the most flexible of all formal types of contemporary mainstream
renku and pays least regard to precedent.
The name 'Twelve Tone' recalls
Hauer and Schönberg and is taken by many as an invitation to consider
each verse as a distinct pitch or colour.
It
would be unfortunate though if the inference is drawn that the Junicho
is composed of 12 separate verses, each of which seeks to be as distinct
as possible. The musical analogy reminds us that there must be elements
of coherence to balance those of divergence; the pursuit of diversity
at all cost is likely to result in a poem that is harsh and uninflected.
Though
they may be shorn of much classical precedent the fixed topics of moon,
flower and love are none-the-less present, as are the conventional seasons.
One could
argue therefore that far from being the most open form of renku - and
therefore ideally suited to persons new to the genre - the Junicho is
in fact highly challenging and best approached with an awareness of precisely
those sensibilities which it has, at first sight, eschewed.
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