Summary:
Ron and Draco were left in a less than comfortable position, but don't
worry! Harry is back and he's
armed with
a - feather?
Disclaimer:
This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK
Rowling, various publishers
including
but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books,
and Warner Bros., Inc. No
money is being
made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Author's
Note & Dedications:
This chapter
is for Dr. Simon Branford (Aka Pigwidgeon_owl_friend_of_Hedwig)
and Benjamin Gryffindor
(Aka Jaffa),
who are willing to answer my endless questions.
The end of
chapter 8:
With another
successful curse, Draco's vision had begun to blur. Ron's shouting had
stopped, and so had the flashes
that had previously
shot past him, aimed at Ron. He barely managed to ward off two more curses
when the third hit
him in the
head, and he knew no more.
Krum Do I Love?
by
yael
Chapter
9
The
Powers That Be
"Harry! Something's
going on up there!" Hermione wriggled out of his arms and sat bolt upright,
pointing at the ceiling.
Her cheeks
were flushed, and her hair ruffled, but she seemed to have forgotten her
previous activity, and gave her full
attention
to the continuous sound of blasts that shook their dungeon prison.
She watched
Harry sit up as well, looking somewhat disappointed. "I think that Ron
and Draco may be in trouble," she
said in an
attempt to shake him out of his dazed state. That worked better than she
had expected. Harry jumped to his
feet and approached
the dungeon door. The little Seeker on his boxer shorts jumped to attention
as well. He watched
with interest
as Harry unsuccessfully tried the doorknob.
"It's locked," he said, no surprise in his voice.
"Try using this." Hermione held out the battered phoenix feather she had found in his robes.
Harry took the thing that was more a stalk than a feather and tried to stick it in the keyhole.
"Not like that," scolded Hermione. "Use it like a wand."
Harry gazed
at her and then at the object in his hand. It was nothing more than a crooked
twig with a few red and gold
threads hanging
from it. "This is not a wand," he said in a sombre voice.
"Harry, you
used it to ward off the Avada Kedavra curse! It doesn't get more magical
than that." Hermione almost
shouted the
words. The explosions heard from above them came at a nerve-wracking rate.
"Just try it," she implored.
Harry pointed the remainder of the feather to the door, and without much conviction said, "alohomora".
Nothing happened.
"You see, it doesn't work. This isn't a wand."
"Of course
it won't work if you don't believe it will. Remember how long it took you
just to transfigure a match to a
needle? You've
got to believe you can do it."
Harry remembered
his first Transfiguration lessons well. Hermione was the first in the class
to make that magic work.
He was the
last. Well, next to last. There was also Neville. He just hadn't believed
he was really a wizard. He raised
his hand with
the thread-decorated straw and pointed it at the door. "alohomora,"
he said in a manner as effective in
its quiet
manner as an approaching tsunami.
The door flew open, taking the guard who'd been standing outside with it.
"That was lucky,"
Harry said, stepping over the unconscious masked guard. He noticed that
Hermione wasn't with
him, and wheeled
around in search of her. He thought she was the one in a hurry.
"Er - Harry,"
Hermione said from the inside of their open cell. "You'll probably want
to put your robes back on before
we charge
to the rescue."
Harry turned
deep scarlet. Better than to have found out later, he told himself,
but that wasn't much consolation.
He took his
robes from Hermione and pulled them over his head. The clotted blood made
the front of the robes stiff
and rough
against the skin of his chest. At least they were no longer wet.
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"Padfoot, are you sure you're all right?"
"Yes, Mummy."
"Sirius. I'm not joking." Arabella stepped in front of him, blocking his way. "You don't look too good."
"Don't make me stop," Sirius moaned. "Do you have any idea how hard it is to get started again after I stop?"
"Then don't. Stay here," she practically begged him. "We'll get the kids and come back for you."
"You've heard
what Remus said about them having some kind of gathering. You're going
to need me if you want to
get the kids
out."
"You will be in no condition to help us!" She was annoyed to the verge of shouting. "We will be getting into hostile territory any minute now, and then we'll have to carry you!"
"You will not
have to carry me," Sirius growled. He pushed Arabella aside and resumed
his laborious walk. He
mutely cursed
Snape, gritting his teeth against the pain. Why couldn't he have come
in a moment earlier, before
the guard
shot his legs? It was just like Snape.
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Harry led the
way with Hermione close on his heels. They ran up a steep staircase that
seemed to drag on forever.
They eventually
emerged into the side of a corridor. Harry stopped short, unable to decide
which way to go. He
kept jumping
in one place, adrenaline rushing in his veins.
"Left!" called
Hermione, and ran right past him. He followed suit, and almost ran into
her back when she stopped in
front of a
heavy oak door. "Here," she gasped. "This is the lounge that's attached
to the ceremonial room. I think the
explosions
were coming from here."
Harry gave
her a dumb look and made an effort to listen. So did she, but the blasts
that shook the entire construction
had now stopped.
Harry touched the door with his feather residue. "Alohomora," he
whispered.
The door opened
with a bang, revealing two figures sprawled on the floor, surrounded by
an inconceivable number
of Death Eaters.
There was no mistaking the pair on the ground. Red hair on one, platinum
blond on the other. Some
of the Death
Eaters were pointing their wands towards those two, but most of them turned
to face the opening door
and had their
wands aimed at Harry and Hermione.
Harry drew
back and hid behind the wide doorframe. Hermione was cemented to the spot,
and so he dragged her
with him.
He propped his head against the wall and gave the stalk in his hand a bemused
look. "There are too many
Death Eaters
there to fight off with a straw."
"A phoenix feather."
"Whatever. At least Voldemort isn't here."
Hermione winced at the sound of the name.
Harry dared
a peep into the room, and used the opportunity to release a curse inside.
"It seems that Ron and Draco
gave them
quite a fight. There's a group of hurt Death Eaters in the corner, and
I just saw another one being dragged
there." He
shot another almost blind curse into the room. "This thing actually works,"
he said, amazed, raising the
battered feather.
"Of course it works."
Two Death Eaters
came running out of the door and got a taste of Harry's curses point blank.
They both fell to the
floor, unconscious.
Hermione bent
over to examine them. "They're alive, but barely," she said. She picked
up the wands the two were
carrying,
keeping one and handing Harry the other. Harry took it with thanks, but
pocketed it, and kept the feather
ready. He
offered Hermione an embarrassed smile, but she gazed at him gravely. "Harry,
what curse did you use
on them?"
"The stunning curse," Harry said, a little surprised by the question. "Didn't you hear me?"
"As a matter of fact, no," stated Hermione. "You didn't say anything."
"Sure I did."
Harry stepped over one of the bodies and released yet another curse into
the room. Two more Death
Eaters came
running out, and met the same fate as the first two, only now Hermione
had a hand in it. "Didn't I?"
Harry asked,
beginning to doubt his own sanity.
Hermione only stared at him.
Harry took another peek into the room, but this time no curse left the tip of the feather.
"What happened?" asked Hermione.
"It's - he's
-" Harry stammered. A loud explosion shoook the building, and then another
and another. They were all
coming from
inside the room. Harry stepped in front of the open door, and just stood
there, watching.
"Are you mad?"
Hermione hissed at him, but she noticed that he remained standing, unharmed
for several seconds.
Has he
become immune to all curses? she wondered. As she thought that, a few
more explosions were heard,
and she was
sure Harry wasn't responsible for any of them. Not that she thought he
wasn't capable of creating a
full-scale
explosion. By now she was willing to believe practically anything about
him, but he just looked too stunned
to have done
so.
She stepped
up beside him and bathed her eyes on the sight in the room. Many of the
Death Eaters were now lying
on the floor,
taken completely out of action. The others faced a small group that were
coming through the room's
other door.
Hermione understood Harry's expression. The invading group was composed
of Sirius Black, Remus
Lupin, Lee
Jordan, Arabella Figg and Mundungus Fletcher. The latter two she'd met
on yet another one of Harry's
brushes with
death. The five were giving the remaining Death Eaters a living hell.
Harry snapped
out of his state of shock and joined the fight, and so did Hermione. With
their help, the battle was
soon over.
Six of them rushed to the prone figures of Ron and Draco. They were bleeding
horribly, but were still
alive. They
were hit with so many concurrent reviving spells that their bodies jumped
as if they'd been galvanized.
As Arabella
tended to their wounds, Harry looked around for Sirius. He let out a strangled
scream when he finally
found him.
Sirius was lying by the door, blood pooling under his legs and his entire
body limp and seemingly lifeless.
Arabella followed
Harry's frenzied dash with her eyes. She felt a chill going through her
when she saw what it was
that made
him shout. Somehow, she wasn't surprised. She knew Sirius couldn't hold
on with his wounds. She was
amazed that
he'd managed to get this far and even help with the battle.
Arabella sighed
and fastened the bandage over Ron's arm, taking measure of his new Dark
Mark in the process.
That was his
last visible gash. Draco was already on his feet, searching woozily around
the room, but there was no
sign of either
his father or Saitaina. Arabella gently turned Ron over to see that she
hadn't missed any wounds.
When she felt
he was reasonably fixed, she went over to Harry and Sirius.
Sirius had
somehow managed to regain semi-consciousness, and was foolishly trying
to sit up. Arabella pushed him
back to the
floor, not being very gentle about it. Harry jerked forward and caught
Sirius' head just before it hit the
flagstones,
as Sirius lost consciousness again.
Arabella removed
Sirius' blood-soaked bandages and applied new bandages to his legs. That
helped stop the
bleeding.
Harry knew Arabella was very familiar with medical spells. "Why don't you cure it with magic?" he asked.
"That's a curse
wound. I need to know the exact counter-spell to stop it." She sighed.
"It's not a very sophisticated
curse. If
he would just lie back for a few hours, it'll go away on its own." There
was a great deal of anger in her
voice. "Come
on, help me put him on one of these couches." She took Sirius' legs and
waited for Harry to grab his
upper body.
They loaded Sirius onto a leather lounge by the fire, making sure his legs
were raised. Harry sat by
him and waited.
He rubbed his scar as a useless remedy against the bothering ache it seeded
in his head.
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A very slight
movement disturbed the stillness of the room. A small, hunched figure moved
slowly in the shadows
toward what
seemed like the darkest area, right at its centre.
"It is done, Master."
Something moved
inside the dense blackness. Something even darker than the room. There
seemed to be someone
in there,
someone tall and not entirely human. The darkness was pouring out of his
sheer existence. "Good,
Wormtail.
Did you do exactly as I ordered?"
"Yes, My Lord.
They have all escaped. They suspect nothing. They think they did it on
their own powers."
Wormtail's
face could not be seen, but the smirk was well heard in his voice.
"Good."
"It was easier
than we expected, Master. Potter and the girl managed to escape their cell
without our help. All we
had to do
was to get out of their path."
"Oh, really?"
The words were accompanied by the sound of gritting teeth. "Maybe this
was too easy." The master
paused, perhaps
to consider. "I do not want them to think we are weak. Send some of my
minions after them. Order
them to aim
especially at the Potter boy. Make him hurt, but make sure he isn't killed."
"Who should I send, My Lord? We have lost quite a few of our numbers in this display."
"Have we?"
asked the master, sounding truly bored. "That hardly matters. Soon, Potter
will turn to our side, and
then there
will not be a single wizard or witch in this country who will fight us.
Now go."
Wormtail left
the room the same way he came in, facing the same direction. He made a
point of never turning his
back to his
master. One could never know.
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Arabella sat
down by Harry, watching Sirius with a concerned expression. "He should
have been up by now. He's
been out for
nearly two hours. I think we have the entire floor cleansed of Death Eaters
by now. Maybe he's lost
more blood
than I thought." She placed her hand on Sirius' forehead, pushing his hair
aside, and wiping the sweat
off his brow.
"Don't worry," Harry calmed her. "I've placed him under an enchanted sleep."
"Enchanted sleep? Why?"
"Well, you said he needed to rest," said Harry matter-of-factly. "He wouldn't have had his rest otherwise."
"True," agreed
Arabella. "But I think you can remove the spell now." She moved away from
Sirius, allowing Harry
some room
to cast the spell.
"What's that in your hand?" she asked, as Harry casually pointed what was left of the phoenix feather at Sirius' chest.
"That?" Harry said, a bit embarrassed. "Er - It's a wand core. Don't worry, it works just fine. Ennervate."
Sirius opened
his eyes. He met Harry's gaze and grabbed him by his left arm with brutal
force. Before Harry realised
what was going
on, Sirius used his other hand to slide up Harry's sleeve. Harry's Dark
Mark was exposed, causing
him to wince.
Sirius let go of Harry hand as rapidly as he had grabbed it, and closed
his eyes.
"Tell me I didn't just see that," he breathed.
"I have no idea how it got there," Harry bemoaned.
Sirius was
so surprised that he opened his eyes to give Harry an incredibly incredulous
glower. "Oh, really?" he
mocked.
"This is why
I came here in the first place," Harry tried to explain. "I want to find
out who did this to me, and why.
And I want
to know how I can get this removed." He stared straight into Sirius' dark
grey eyes, trying to appear as
believable
as possible.
"Good," said
Sirius with a touch of cruelty in his voice. "In that case, you're coming
to Dumbledore with me. If
anyone can
do anything about this, he can."
Harry knew
there was no chance he was going to Dumbledore with this. Not at the risk
of being expelled. But the
expression
on Sirius' face suggested that now was not the time to argue about it.
He gave Sirius a noncommittal
nod and moved
slightly aside. He was pushed further away by the approach of Remus and
Mundungus.
"Hey Padfoot,
finally decided join us?" scoffed Remus. "Or did you decide to park on
the leather couch for the
night, like
in the old days?"
Sirius chortled. "This does resemble the old common room, doesn't it?"
Harry looked
around, surprised. This was nothing like the Gryffindor common room. There
were no green lamps
and silver
snake-shaped decorations in there. Also - "There are no leather couches
in the common room. There are
overstuffed
purple couches," he told Sirius.
Remus and Sirius
exchanged uncomfortable glances. "There are, mind you," came a voice from
behind Harry's back.
He turned
to see Draco standing there, looking somewhat fragile. "In the Slytherin
common room, that is."
"Yes, but Sirius wasn't in Slytherin, was he?" Harry said, refusing to accept the evidence that indicated otherwise.
Sirius' face fell. "Didn't you know Remus and I were in the same house?" he asked sadly.
"I did, I thought
he was a Gryffindor too -" Harry trailed off. The implication of Sirius'
grave expression was beginning
to sink in.
"You didn't
really think there was a place for a werewolf in any house but Slytherin?"
mocked Draco. He seemed
extremely
cheerful at the idea that he, Harry's nemesis, had more in common with
Harry's beloved than Harry
himself.
Harry was so white he looked like he was about to collapse. "My father too?"
Sirius and Remus nodded in accordance.
"And my mother?" Harry stammered. "I thought she was a Gryffindor."
"She was,"
said Sirius, as if happy to give Harry a straw to hang on to. "That's why
your parents got together only in
their last
year. Didn't you know they were Head Boy and Girl together?"
"That, I did know. But what does that have to do with anything?"
"You can't
have both Head Boy and Head Girl from the same house, can you? That wouldn't
be fair to the other
houses."
"That should have told you that they're not from the same house," jeered Draco with unhidden glee.
Harry stepped
away from the group. He needed time to consider the new information he
had just been given. "Why
couldn't he
have been a Ravenclaw?" he muttered under his breath. He sat hard on yet
another one of the leather
couches in
the room and sulked.
Harry was so
consumed in his thoughts, he didn't even notice the masked wizards who
stole into the room and
spread about
it. None of the others noticed them at first either.
In a very rapid
motion that took Mundungus completely by surprise, Sirius rammed him out
of the way as he
jumped from
his leisured position on the sofa. He readied his wand as he did so.
Every eye in
the room followed the sudden red light from Sirius' wand to its white-masked
target. Lethal curses began
flying around,
produced by numerous wands and one thing that was once a feather. In an
instant, the small quiet space
had turned
into a battle-zone and evil had the upper hand.
The curses
hit every object in the room - people, chairs, walls, one even hit the
fireplace, causing it to produce thick
yellow smoke,
but mainly, the curses hit Harry. He fought them off well, and had much
help from Sirius and Hermione
who both stood
abreast of him, but there were over a dozen Death Eaters who were completely
concentrated on
hurting him,
and they were reasonably successful.
Harry was brought
down to his knees, which matched Hermione's position. Her legs had surrendered
to a vicious
curse a moment
earlier. Sirius gave them a grim glance, and came to a decision. He still
had the package he had
taken from
Snape along with the map. He took it out of his pocket and opened it. As
he had suspected, the package
contained
Floo powder.
"Take a pinch," he instructed both Harry and Hermione. "Go to Diagon Alley. The rest of us will be right behind you."
Harry hesitated
for one brief moment, and then took the powder. Hermione followed suit.
On wobbly, hurting legs,
they approached
the fireplace. It was still oozing thick smoke from the curse that had
hit it. He let Hermione go first
and watched
Sirius approach the others with the small bag, as she disappeared in the
flames. He threw his own dose
of powder
into the hearth and stepped inside. As clearly as he could manage, Harry
said, "Diagon Alley."
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Harry stepped
out of the fire, almost knocking into Hermione as he went. Hermione knew
better than to stand in the
way when someone
was using Floo powder, nevertheless, she stood stock still, dumb with shock
and disappointment.
The room they
were in looked identical to the one they had just left, minus the occupants.
They hadn't reached their
desired destination,
but at least this room was empty.
Ron came out
of the fire, successfully smacking into Harry. Harry took a forced step
forward, and fell with Ron on
top of him,
as Draco came out of the hearth and bumped into both. He just managed to
avoid tripping as well.
"If you're
quite done making out," Draco indicated Ron and Harry, "you might consider
getting as far away from here
as we can."
"We're waiting
for the others," said Harry. He heaved himself off the floor and brushed
his robes. That was quite a
pitiable motion,
considering their shabby condition.
"They're not
coming," Draco stated dryly. "Let's go." He turned towards the door, but
was stopped as Harry grabbed
the hem of
his robes.
"What do you mean, they're not coming?"
"I saw the
fireplace explode as I left it. They can't use it." Draco brutally released
his robes from Harry's hand. "As
I said, they're
not coming."
"Maybe they'll use another fire to get here." Harry tried to maintain some hope.
"They can't,"
said Draco. His voice now had turned from mere cold to utterly cruel. "If
you haven't noticed, we're not
in Diagon
Alley, despite what your dear godfather suggested. Each fire is set to
one destination only. The one we used
was set to
here. Any other fire they use will take them someplace else." He started
for the door again. "That is, if they
manage to
get to another fire."
For an instant,
Harry thought that he couldn't care less. They were all Slytherins, after
all. He felt horrified by that
thought, and
immediately drove it away. Of course he cared. They weren't any different
just because he had found
out something
about them. Sirius had saved his life enough times to prove that he was
no less brave and chivalrous
than any Gryffindor.
He possessed these qualities just as much as he possessed the cunning and
slyness of the
Slytherins.
And Harry loved Sirius. With all his heart. Even if he was a - the thought
was unbearable.
Harry followed
Draco out to the hall. The far wall was decorated with a small window.
Outside was completely
dark except
for a few hovering points of light. A more careful look revealed these
to be the tops of several turrets
and towers.
As many as five of them were visible through the narrow window. Harry wondered
how many more
this construction
held. They were obviously inside a very large castle.
Draco turned
his back on the sight and opened another door, leading deeper into the
castle. "Malfoy, you're going
the wrong
way!" Harry called after him. "To get out, we have to go that way." He
pointed at an unremarkable green
door by the
window.
"Unless you
want to walk all the way home, we need to get brooms first," sneered Draco.
"This is the way to the
brooms chamber."
He kept going in the same direction.
"Oh yeah?" Harry called after him. "And how would you know that?"
"I've been here before." The tone in Draco's voice indicated that he didn't want to say anything more about it.
"Right." Ron grimaced in mock disgust. "We almost forgot you're one of them."
"I was." said Draco heavily. "May I remind you that my own father just tried to kill me?"
"Well, I would
too, if you were my kid." Ron pretended to shiver of the sheer thought.
"But I would have done so
much sooner."
Surprisingly, Draco didn't lunge at him. He just stared grimly.
"That was really
cruel, Ron," said Hermione. She moved to put her hand on Draco's shoulder.
"Forget about it,
Draco. Your
father only did what You-Know-Who had ordered him to. He's an evil Death
Eater -"
"I'm a Death Eater too, mind you," Draco cut her off rudely. He moved away from her touch.
"He is," said Ron, without any glimpse of courtesy he'd ever been brought up to employ.
"So are you!"
Hermione shouted. She pulled Ron's sleeve brusquely up, exposing his arm
to the shoulder, and on his
forearm, was
his new vivid Dark Mark.
It was Harry's turn to glower. "Ron!" he breathed.
"Oh, what are
you staring at?" Ron redirected his assault to Harry. "You've got one just
like it. So now there are two
of us who
need to get this thing removed." He strode after Draco, who was gaining
distance from the group.
Harry took Hermione's hand, and the two of them followed.
A few curves
and turns later, Draco came to a stop in front of an ordinary-looking beech
door. "The brooms are
kept here,"
he announced succinctly. Harry reached for the doorknob. "Don't touch it,"
Draco ordered haughtily.
"Why not?"
Draco plucked
a hair from Ron's head to loud protest and dropped it on the knob. Harry
would have never guessed
that a single
hair could create such an explosion. It hissed angrily and threw red and
yellow sparks in all directions.
"Thanks," Harry said, thinking that it could have been his hand. "So how do we get it open?"
"We need a password."
"That's nice," said Ron. "And what is it?"
"I have no idea."
"Great. I must say, Malfoy. This is certainly one of your most cunning plans ever."
"Shut up, Ron."
Hermione was beginning to get annoyed with Ron's bellicoseness. True, Draco
was no angel, but he
had done absolutely
nothing to provoke Ron since they got free, and Ron was being plain nasty.
"I think that if we all try to spell the door open together, it could work," Draco suggested.
Hermione approached
the door, wand ready in her hand. Ron and Harry took pattern by her. Draco
snickered
when he saw
Harry's beaten feather. "What's that, Potter?"
"Shut up, Malfoy.
It works just fine." Harry glared at Draco, knowing that Draco had a good
reason to mock him.
"On the count
of three. One, t-"
"Wait!" Draco
stopped him. Only then Harry noticed that he still hadn't produced his
wand. "It's not that simple.
"There's another
protection on this chamber. If we break open the door, an alarm will go
off."
"But you just suggested that we break it!" cried Ron.
"And I still
think we should," Draco said quietly. "But we need to be prepared. We have
to get in, get the brooms
and get out
as quickly as we can. With any luck, we'll be out of the castle before
the guards get here."
"And if we don't get lucky?"
Draco shrugged. He pointed his wand at the door, and waited.
"One, two, THREE!"
All four of them shouted "ALOHOMORA!" as one.
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Sirius watched
the fireplace explode a second after Draco stepped into it. He didn't hear
the boy give the destination
command, and
was extremely concerned that he didn't make it. They would have to check
the smoking rubble for a
body, but
that would have to wait. Right then, he had too many Death Eaters to worry
about.
Mundungus etded
his way towards Sirius, sporadically firing curses as he progressed. The
moment Harry was gone
through the
grate, the Death Eaters became a degree more interested in the rest of
them. Mundungus was careful to
avoid the
curses - those produced by the Death Eaters, and those Sirius had created.
"We need to
get out of this room," he breathed as he reached Sirius. "Find another
fire and Floo ourselves to a more
civil
place."
"What about
Draco Malfoy?" Sirius demanded. He knew the answer to that question, but
wanted someone else to
say it.
"You don't
know he's here." Mundungus pointed to the ruins, providing Sirius with
what he needed to hear. "Even if
he is, we
can't afford to stay here just for a body, or we'll have more than one
body to worry about."
Sirius turned his back to the fight, and pointed his wand at the collapsed grate. "Wingardium leviosa," he bellowed.
"You can't be serious," muttered Arabella from her hiding place a few feet away. "This rubble must be- Wahh!"
She cut off
her reproach as several tons of heavy blocks rose into the air. Even the
Death Eaters stopped throwing
curses and
watched in awe. The raised rubble remained hovering for a few seconds and
then collapsed back in
great thunder.
"I didn't see
any body," panted Sirius, beads of sweat popping on his forehead and rolling
down his temples. "Did
you see anything?"
Mundungus shook his head, the ability to speak still lost on him.
"Good," said
Sirius, "Then we should go." He jumped to his feet and raced out of the
room before the Death Eaters
fired the
first curse at him. The others followed suit quicker than the Death Eaters
could react. The first curses shot
their way
hit the room's rapidly closing door, guaranteeing everybody's safety.
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The wards on
the door must have been extremely powerful, because it barely rotated on
its hinges. Yet, that was
enough. It
was no longer locked. Unfortunately, the alarm was set off. The walls all
around them lit up with a weird
azure light
produced by thousands of previously invisible tiny torches. The light became
a darker shade of turquoise
the closer
it was to them, pinpointing their exact location.
Draco kicked
the door open the rest of the way. Sparks shot from the wood, but he seemed
unharmed. "Death
Eater boots
were designed for nasty jobs," he explained as the other three fixed puzzled
stares on him.
The open door
led to a spacious room. The walls were all lined with brooms of the top
class. Harry didn't waste
any time.
He walked straight to the Firebolts Mark Kappa, took one of them, and stepped
outside. Hermione was
right behind
him, carrying an identical broom. Draco took a bit longer to join them,
but he eventually did, another
Firebolt Mark
Kappa in his hands.
"What kept
you?" Harry asked, somewhat irritated. The turquoise light had grown stronger,
and distant footsteps
could be heard
with vivid clarity.
Draco opened
his mouth to defend himself, but frowned before the first syllable escaped
his throat. "Where's
Weasley?"
he asked instead.
Harry whirled
frantically. Ron was there, struggling to release another one of the state-of-the-art
brooms. Harry
ran inside
to help him. He grabbed the broomstick and pulled vigorously along with
Ron, but the broom wouldn't
come free.
He snatched at another Kappa at random, but despite Ron's help, it remained
stubbornly in place.
Thinking that
the Kappas might have been enchanted, Harry rushed to a different section
on the room, and tried
to release
a broom from there. It was a simple, faithful Nimbus 2001, but it came
free, and that was the most
important
quality he needed in a broom right then.
"Here!" he
shouted at Ron. Ron saw the two brooms in Harry's hand, and rushed to him.
Harry handed him the
Kappa and
kept the Nimbus for himself. They could hear shouts from outside the room.
Some of the voices
belonged to
Draco and Hermione, but not all.
Without thinking,
Harry mounted his broom and zoomed out of the room, missing the door by
mere inches. The
images that
came into view were of Draco and Hermione pushed to the hallway wall, huddled
there by a group
of threatening
Death Eaters. He bent over the handle and rushed into the group of dark
minions like a well-aimed
bowling ball
into the standing pins. And the Death Eaters fell like bowling pins. Not
severely hurt, but momentarily
out of action.
"Come on!"
Harry shouted at the others. Ron and Draco had already managed to get on
their brooms, and
Hermione was
just getting there, making an obvious but vain effort not to shiver too
violently.
Harry led the
way, flying through the castle corridors, the other three close on his
tail. They passed several Death
Eaters rushing
towards the origin of the alarm, unaware that the cause of the alarm was
coming their way.
Unfortunately,
one of these Death Eaters managed to grab the twigs of Hermione's somewhat
wavering broom.
He skied several
feet along the hall, holding on to the tail of her broom, until he managed
to make her drop off of it.
Harry heard
her scream and the thud of Hermione's body hitting the flagstones shortly
after it. He rounded his
broom almost
in place, barely missing Ron and Draco who zoomed past him, and then he
retraced their route. He
saw a masked
wizard raising his wand above Hermione's head. He prodded his broom and
jammed the Death
Eater hard
in his mid-section. With nothing to stop his trajectory, the Death Eater
was tossed the entire length of
the hallway,
skidding the last few meters of the way on an unrecognizable part of his
body.
Harry brought
his attention back to Hermione, who had staggered to her feet. "Are you
able to ride a broom?"
Ron and Draco
had joined them. They both offered her concerned looks.
Hermione nodded gingerly.
"Are you sure? We can ride together," Harry suggested. That sounded like a good idea for more than one reason.
"That'll just
hold us back," Hermione refused reluctantly. She mounted her broom and
rose to match the height of
the three
hovering boys.
"You shouldn't
ride in the back," Draco stated dryly. "I'll ride last, and Weasley will
ride before me. You should be
second, right
after Potter." Then he added with a mutter, "I wish there were more of
us."
"Are you done arranging us?" snarled Ron.
"Yes, I am," said Draco. His eyes lit with a dangerous grey fire that suggested he should be taken very seriously.
Ron took the suggestion and assumed his designated position. He had to admit, if only to himself, that it made sense.
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"What now?"
asked Remus. He was the last one to step out of the fireplace, and assumed
the others had already
formed a plan.
"Look around for the children, I assume?" Sirius answered, sounding a tad hesitant.
"This isn't
Diagon Alley, if you haven't noticed," said Arabella. Despite her attempt
to sound sure of herself, she gave
the impression
of being rather frightened.
"Too much for one day?" said Sirius softly, placing an arm around her shoulder.
Arabella wanted
to sneer at him, but couldn't find the strength to do so. She just sighed.
"I don't think the kids are
here," she
said. At least, she hoped they weren't. She looked at the dark walls, bearing
snake-shaped reliefs that
seemed to
suck every bit of light in the room. They also looked like they were moving,
but every time she focused
her eyes on
a single serpent, it seemed to freeze, while at the edge of her vision
others still moved.
Bronze brackets
also designed as snakes held torches all around the room, but there was
no fire in them. Arabella
wondered if
they ever harboured real fire, or if they were placed there just to evince
the lack of it.
"I don't like the thought of the kids running around a place like this," Arabella said. "I think we should go find them."
"I'm afraid
we need to find ourselves first," Sirius said grimly. He looked around
him, but stopped at a creaking
sound. He
turned his head along with the others towards the door from which the sound
came. The door opened
slowly, until
it showed the wizard who was struggling to open it. The wizard held in
his hands a large cauldron,
from which
sickening purple vapours were rising. He was pushing the door with his
back, having both hands on
the cauldron,
and thus had his back turned to the room. When the door was sufficiently
open, he turned, and saw
the five intruders
watching him with their wands drawn.
Despite the
fact that the wizard's hood was drawn back in a casual manner, he was wearing
a very formal white
mask. "A Death
Eater," Lee muttered, hatred creeping into his voice. The Death Eater stopped
to consider his
situation
for no more than a second. Then he hurled the cauldron as far in their
direction as he could manage, and
dashed out
of the room.
Purple splashes
sprayed them all. Sirius and Lee, who stood closest to the door, absorbed
the most liquid. They
watched the
purple smudges, as if waiting for them to eat through their clothes and
their skin, eventually realising
that the worst
that had happened was that their clothes needed a good wash. Sirius exchanged
looks with
Mundungus,
and seemingly they had both reached the same conclusion at the same time,
as they both sprinted
out of the
room, shoulder to shoulder.
The Death Eater
was easy to track - there was a trail of purple droplets leading to him.
It took two turns of the
corridors
before Sirius and Mundungus cornered him. The terrified dark wizard backed
up against a wall, dropped
his wand and
raised his hands in surrender. "Please don't hurt me," he snivelled.
"We won't," growled Sirius. "We just want to know where we are, and how we get out of here."
The Death Eater eyed them suspiciously. "If I show you, you'll let me go?" he asked.
"Yes," promised Sirius.
"All right,
I have a map of the fortress." The Death Eater reached into the inner pocket
of his cloak, mumbling
something
unintelligible under his breath and pulled out a wand. The tip of the wand
was shining with a hex as it
appeared in
his hand.
Without thinking,
Sirius grabbed the wizard's hand and pulled it up forcefully. The curse
hit the ceiling of the
corridor,
and showered them with a mixture of shimmering sparks, dust and plaster.
One large chunk of stone
dropped from
the ceiling and hit the Death Eater's head, sending him cascading to the
floor.
"I think his neck's broken," said Mundungus after examining the fallen wizard.
Sirius cursed
with feeling and kicked the prone body lying on the flagstones. "I shouldn't
have dropped a house on
him," he muttered.
"But it seems
that he had a map after all," added Mundungus, pulling a folded parchment
from the dead wizard's
pocket. Both
he and Sirius smiled. Mundungus unfolded the map and the two of them watched
the markings intently.
"Hmmm," said Sirius.
"Hmmm," Mundungus repeated after him.
"I think we'll be giving this to Moony soon."
"My sentiments exactly."
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The four brooms
advanced persistently in the pitch dark, led by a relentless Draco Malfoy.
Draco had insisted that
he knew the
way even, and especially, during the night, and that they had to get as
far away from the dark-dominated
areas as they
could. And so, they flew until the first cold rays of the sun made the
crack of dawn.
Hermione looked
down as soon as there was enough light to see what was beneath them. She
noticed, with some
horror, that
they were flying over a forest, only inches above the tallest trees. To
her great relief, Draco pointed his
broom downwards
at the first forest clearing they reached.
"Where are we?" Harry asked the instant his feet touched the ground.
"The Forbidden Forest," answered Draco.
"The Forbidden Forest!" squealed Ron. Images of the last encounter he had there floated in front of his eyes.
"At least we're
out of You-Know-Who's backyard," Draco said coldly. ""We can rest here
for a while and then
head back
to school, we're only a few hours away from there."
"I'm not going back to school," Harry declared in a voice that dared anyone to argue with him.
Hermione ignored
the warning. "Of course you are," she said, sounding a lot like Professor
McGonagall on her third
explanation
of the same Transfiguration process.
"No!" Harry
said defiantly, and then lowered his tone back to normal. "Look," he tried
to explain, "between the
accident with
Cho, the article in the Daily Prophet, and the fact that I do have the
Dark Mark." He stopped to steady
his voice
before going on. "If I go to school now, I'll be kicked out before I have
a chance to say two words."
"I think Dumbledore will give you a chance to explain," Hermione said, still sounding didactic.
"Maybe," doubted Harry. "And then he'll send me off. I'd rather come with some proof."
"Like what?" Hermione challenged.
Harry sat down
hard on the nearest rock. He put his head in his hands, but perked up after
a moment. "The
Pensieve,"
he said. "If I bring it with me, it'll prove that I'm still on the right
side. Then, Dumbledore may be more
willing to
listen to my version of the story."
"What an amazing idea," Draco intervened with a jeer. "Too bad you don't have it."
"He's right, Harry," Hermione added scornfully.
Harry seemed
to be offended by her mocking tone. "Then I'd better get it," he said with
a voice an octave lower
than normal.
"I'm sorry,"
Hermione said very genuinely. "I don't think that's such a good idea. We
now know who snatched you.
It was You-Know-Who.
And if he's got the Pensieve, then there's really nothing we can do about
it."
"I'm with Harry,"
Ron interrupted. "I don't see any other way to prove I didn't want this."
He exposed the fresh
mark on his
left arm. "You-Know-Who can't be guarding it himself all the time, he must
have it somewhere, having
a few Death
Eaters to watch over it."
"We can take a few Death Eaters," Harry joined in.
"You're unbelievably
conceited," Draco put in. "How can you say that without even blinking?
Do you really think
you're invincible?"
"He took the
Avada Kedavra curse twice!" Ron jumped to Harry's defence. "And from the
darkest wizard in the last
hundred years.
You-Know-Who can't touch him!"
"I don't -" Harry tried to interject, but the heated argument was out of his hands.
"He was lucky,"
Draco told Ron in a voice colder and sharper than an icicle. "He had a
core matching
You-Know-Who's
wand."
"He didn't have it as a baby!"
"You don't know that!"
Hermione sat
down by Harry and watched the two boys fight. She allowed her head to rest
on Harry's shoulder as
he placed
his arm around her waist.
"If you had that core, you'd still be dead!"
"No I wouldn't! The feather's what saved him. Not some amazing magical power!"
"Oh, yeah? Wanna bet? I say he has twice your MQ!"
"You're on," Draco said with a sly smile.
"Oh, no," Harry murmured.
"I didn't mean
'twice' literally," Ron retracted, making Draco smile wider. "But I'm sure
his is higher than yours. I'll
put a galleon
on that."
"Why not make it ten galleons?" Draco suggested. "Oh, I'm sorry, that's your dad's yearly income, isn't it?"
Harry was quick enough to jump off his tree-trunk and grab Ron from behind before Ron could punch Draco.
"Do me a favour,
Harry," Ron spat the words. "Take this MQ test and show the arrogant Death
Eater how much
better than
him you are."
Harry shook his head, his mind racing in an attempt to think of a convincing counter-argument.
"We'll all do it," Hermione said. "Just like we planned to before - everything."
Harry felt outnumbered. "All right," he relented.
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The map showed
no less than twenty-six fireplaces and zero exits. Each of the fires had
a direct link to some place
or other,
all sounding as horrible as this place.
"Where does this fire lead?" asked Mundungus, placing the tip of his wand on the map.
"This? Hmmm... nocens oculus," Remus answered absentmindedly.
"Is that good?" Lee asked, trying to conceal his excitement.
"Not particularly. It means 'evil eye'"
"Oh. How about this one?"
"Bone Fragments."
"And this?"
"Blood bath."
"This is rapidly turning into something extremely frustrating."
"Yes it is," agreed Remus, scanning the map for tiny grates they might have missed.
"What does this one say?"
Remus followed Arabella's pointing finger. "Nothing," he said.
"Nothing?"
"Yes. It says absolutely nothing about where this one is leading."
"Then I think this is the one we should take."
"Maybe what's beyond it is so terrible they couldn't even write it?"
"Worse than - what's this one? 'Flesh tearing rotatiing blades'? Somehow, I doubt it."
Remus looked
at the faces around him. Sirius looked indifferent, Lee was trying to control
his tremor as Mundungus
and Arabella
both agreed on the unmarked fire. "All right, then," he said. "It's this
way." He folded the map to show
only the relevant
section of the castle and stepped out of the room.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Harry smiled
to himself. It was unbelievable that despite everything they'd been through
in the last two days,
Hermione had
managed to keep her notes about the weight each of them should lift. Draco
was just getting ready,
flexing his
fingers and wiping his wand on the edge of his robes. Hermione muttered
the last words of a spell, and
something
appeared between Draco and the rock he was supposed to lift. That something
looked like a distorted
bright blue
squid with the figure zero carved on one of his arms.
"What is this?" Harry asked.
"This is a
very precise timer," Hermione explained. "It sends tendrils to everything
involved in the measuring. It'll
start the
timer when the rock leaves the ground and stop it when it is down again."
She turned to Draco. "Is that all
right with
you?"
"Looks like a perfectly standard timer to me," Draco said.
"All right then, begin when you're ready."
Draco took
a few more seconds, aiming his wand at the rock and then lowering his hand
several times. Eventually,
he pointed
his wand at the rock and kept it there. The rock began to tremble and after
a few shaky attempts, left
the ground.
Harry watched the timer as the digits changed - three, four, five - Draco's
hand began to tremble with
effort - eight,
nine - beads of sweat appeared on his forehead. Harry had never seen Draco
sweat before, not even
when playing
Quidditch on a hot day - twelve, thirteen - his entire body appeared to
be trembling from the muscle
tension, but
his face remained completely emotionless - fourteen - the rock also began
to shake violently - fifteen - the
rock dropped
to the ground with a thud, stopping the digits tendril on one-five-point-one.
Draco collapsed beside it,
panting heavily.
Draco lifted
his eyes to the timer and would have jumped if he had the strength. "Fifteen
point one seconds? An MQ
of a hundred
and fifty one? That's impossible!" he bellowed. "I couldn't have lost an
MQ point. This timer is defective!"
"Relax," Hermione scolded him. "You know there's an error margin. Two or three points here and there don't count."
"All right, then if Potter has less than five points advantage, it counts as a draw."
"Beginning
to get scared, are you?" said Ron. His eyes weren't smiling as much as
his mouth. Draco's score was much
higher than
he had anticipated.
"Just making sure I don't lose on a technicality."
"Ron, you're next," Hermione stopped the argument before it became heated. "I've adjusted the weight for you."
Ron was much
worse in disguising his effort than Draco was. Ron never had a problem
sweating, and by the time the
counter reached
seven, his robes were drenched. At nine, both he and the rock were trembling
so hard, that Harry considered taking cover, in case Ron lost control over
the rock and sent it zooming their way. The rock crashed to
the ground
a few seconds later, stopping the timer on one-three-point-eight. Ron,
despite sweating heavily, remained
on his feet,
his hands leaning against his knees as he was gasping for air.
"A hundred and thirty eight," drawled Draco. "Not bad for a Gryffindor."
"Oh, shut up," Ron panted.
"I'll go next," Hermione said. "Do you want to check that I've set the weight correctly for my age?"
"No, I trust you," Draco offered. Not a dash of his previous drawling could be heard.
Without much
pre-arrangement, Hermione stepped in front of her rock, and lifted it with
her wand. She dropped it
before her
muscles began to shake, stopping the timer on one-one-point-two. She sat
hard on the ground exactly
where she
had been standing.
"A hundred
and twelve is not bad for a Mudblood," Draco said, offering Hermione a
hand up, and ignoring her glare
at his choice
of words. "But I think you can do better. You hardly even tried."
"It's between
you and Harry," Hermione said, neither confirming nor denying Draco's observation.
She took his
outstretched
hand and kept holding it even when she was on her feet. "I'd better set
the weight for Harry," she
whispered.
She reluctantly let go of Draco's hand and set to work on the rock.
Harry swallowed
hard. In less than a minute, his magic would be put to the test. What if
the Dursleys had been able
to stomp the
magic out of him as they had intended? What if he scored lower than average?
He didn't care about
Ron's bet
as much as he was afraid that he would be utterly humiliated.
"Are you ready to show Malfoy what you're made of?" Ron asked as the two of them watched Hermione work.
"Not really."
"Don't worry," Ron placed his hand on Harry's shoulder. "You'll walk all over him."
"How does it feel?" Harry asked. "I mean, when you're holding the rock up, what is it like?"
Ron hesitated,
not knowing if he should tell Harry the truth and frighten him, or let
him find out on his own and then
have a nasty
surprise at the most crucial moment. He decided to go with the former.
"Difficult," he said. "Like trying
to lift Hagrid
without magic. Those almost fourteen seconds felt like fourteen hours."
"Oh," said Harry, not putting much feeling into the word.
"Ready!" Hermione called to them.
Harry assumed
his position and raised his wand. He tried to clear his head of the frightening
thoughts of a glorious
failure. He
made the rock hover in the air without much effort. That's not so bad,
Harry smiled to himself prematurely
and then felt
his body jolt with the attempt to keep the rock steady. He tried to watch
the timer from the corner of his
eye, but that
only made him almost lose control over the rock. His back began to ache,
and drops of sweat fell from
his forehead
and singed in his eyes. He fought the urge to wipe his glasses, which were
covered with steam. Ron was
right - this
did seem like a very long time. Every bone in his body was shouting to
him to let go of his wand and let the
rock drop.
He knew he wouldn't be able to hold on for much longer. He made a final
effort to make the rock hover
even higher,
so it would take more time to hit the ground, and collapsed to the forest
floor, allowing the rock to fall
freely.
Harry had expected
the others to talk about his score, but dead silence hit his ears. He lifted
his eyes to the timer,
afraid of
what it would show him.
If it's less than nine point five, I'll just
die of shame, he thought. Three digits
were carved
on the tendril - one-zero-zero. Harry breathed in relief. Average. He had
held for ten seconds, and he
gave it his
best effort. He was now officially an average wizard. He didn't know why
that made him so happy, but
couldn't help
but smile.
The others
still looked stunned. "Why are you staring at me?" Harry asked merrily.
"Haven't you ever seen a
completely
normal, average wizard?"
"What?" Hermione stammered.
Ron's response was a dull "Huh?" and Draco said absolutely nothing, but he looked a tad paler than normal.
Harry looked
at the timer again. There was something very odd about their responses.
Were they so deeply
disappointed
they had lost the ability to speak? The timer still showed the same result.
Nothing too extraordinary
about that,
except that it was the lowest result among the four of them. "WHAT?" Harry
cried, frustrated.
"It's the -" Hermione began and trailed off.
"You held -" Ron didn't manage a full sentence either.
"Weird," Draco made his contribution.
"So what,"
Harry said, beginning to suspect that maybe he'd scored below average after
all. "Ten seconds is fine
by me."
"Ten?" Hermione shrieked.
Draco fell to the ground laughing, holding both hands to his stomach.
"Not ten,"
Ron said, looking incredulous. "A hundred. You held it up for a hundred
seconds. There is no such score.
This is a
physical and magical impossibility."
The colour
drained from Harry's face. So much for being normal. He looked at
the timer again. There were still
only three
digits on it. "You're wrong," he held on to a straw. "See, it says ten.
- ten point zero."
"Harry, there's
no decimal point," Hermione said in a very sympathetic tone. "And anyway,
we've watched the
counter progress,
it went through all the numbers until it reached the hundred. There's no
mistake."
"Are you sure the weight was correct?" Harry insisted.
Hermione nodded
her head, but was moved aside by Draco. He pointed his wand to the rock
and made it levitate.
The timer
was reset, and commenced a new count. After six seconds, Draco made the
rock land and wiped his
forehead with
his sleeve. "The weight's just fine," he said. "It's you. Something is
terribly, terribly wrong with you."
"Shut up, Malfoy," Hermione said angrily. "Harry's fine. He's just a little different."
From then on,
without Hermione as a mediator, she, Ron and Draco lashed into a heated
argument about Harry's
ability and
whether or not he was abnormal and needed to be kept locked up for his
own safety. Harry ignored
them. He found
a nice flat boulder at the rim of the clearing and sprawled on it, ignoring
the loud voices of the
others. Just
the complication I needed in my life, he thought before dozing off.
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"Mundungus
and I will go first, Arabella, you'll come after us, and Moony, you and
Lee will go in last." Sirius gave
the orders,
still feeling light-headed with the ease with which they had made their
way here. They'd only had two
incidents,
and neither was much of a challenge. "Just don't take too long," he went
on. " Get in right after Arabella
leaves, there
may still be some Death Eaters in the vicinity."
Sirius handed
the small pack to Remus, taking some Floo powder out of it first. He put
his hand on Mundungus'
shoulder as
he tossed the powder into the hearth. They both stepped in, stating "Diagon
Alley" very clearly, just in
case the fire
wasn't pre-set to anywhere in particular.
They stepped
out into a very familiar office, to very familiar people waiting for them
with their very familiar wands
pointing to
their very important body parts. A moment later, Arabella walked into their
backs, followed by Lee and
Remus. The
three joined them in a group gape.
Sirius blinked first. "Headmaster?" he ventured.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By the time
Ron and Draco stopped fighting and managed to convince Harry to get off
his boulder, it was already
high noon,
and none of them had any sleep or food for nearly a day.
"Are you willing to go back to Hogwarts now?" Draco asked impatiently.
"No," Harry said with finality.
"I don't care
what you MQ is, you're acting like a grown baby!" Draco lost his cool.
"You have no idea where the
Pensieve is,
and what's worse, you don't know who or what is keeping it there. You'll
get us all killed with this
stupidity."
"You are more
than welcome to relieve us from your presence, Malfoy," Harry fumed, drowning
out whatever it was
that Hermione
was trying to say.
"You know very well that I won't let Hermione wander off alone with you two Death Eaters." Draco drawled.
The idea was
so funny, that despite his deep melancholy, Harry burst into a big laugh,
accompanied by Ron and
some chortling
from Hermione.
"What's so funny?" Draco blinked at them.
Harry turned
serious almost as instantaneously as he had began to laugh. "You," he told
Draco grimly. "You're the
only real
Death Eater here, and you'll come to rescue her from us?"
"I'm not the
only real one here," Draco replied. "May I remind you that you almost killed
Cho because your Dark
Mark made
you do it?" Ron looked from Draco to Harry with shock. He noticed that
Harry wasn't moving to
contradict
him. "Don't look so stunned, Ron," Draco went on with his lashing. "What
kept you in the brooms room,
huh? Can you
honestly tell me that your mark didn't cause the delay?" Ron lowered his
eyes and stared fixedly at
his dust-beaten
shoes.
"And I think
that the fact that my father tried to kill me proves I'm no more one of
them than any of you," he
concluded.
"We've heard
enough 'my daddy tried to kill me' whining for one day," Harry said. He
was angry, he was depressed,
he was fed
up with Draco raising the subject over and over, and he wasn't thinking
straight.
"Well it didn't bloody happen to you!" Draco shouted at Harry.
"No, it couldn't have happened to me," Harry said in a voice that could freeze Prometheus's fire.
Draco realised
what he had just said, and winced, but didn't take it back. "We still don't
know where to start looking
for your precious
Pensieve."
"Actually,
I may be able to help with that," Hermione managed to squeeze in a word.
The rest of them gaped at her.
"I brought
a book with me," she began searching her kit bag, eventually drawing out
a yellowing tome. "It's about
finding magical
objects, oh, and retrieving them," she added.
Harry peeked
at the title over her shoulder. The peeling golden letters on the cover
read, 'Finding Magical Objects,
Oh, and
Retrieving Them'. Harry blinked and turned his attention back to Hermione,
who was in mid-sentence,
explaining
her plan.
"- and after
you have the key to the object you're looking for, you can lock the amulet
on it, and it'll take you to the
original object.
Simple."
"Oh yeah, and how will you create the key?" Draco sneered at her.
"It's Dumbledore's Pensieve. I'd say that's pretty unique," Hermione retorted.
Draco's shoulders
sagged. "All right," he said, "But if we get to it and it turns out it
is too heavily guarded, we forget
about it and
return to school. All right?"
The other three nodded, some more enthusiastically than others.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ginny sat by
Cho's bed in the infirmary. She had told Viktor to take a break, a suggestion
which he had accepted,
mainly because
Cho had gone to sleep. Ginny had been spending much of her time here since
Cho had come around
two days before.
A year with Harry, who had always had a soft spot for Cho, had made Ginny
develop warm
feelings for
the older girl as well.
Cho was thrashing
her arms in her sleep. Ginny used a moist cloth to wipe the wet hair off
her forehead. This seemed
to have a
relaxing effect on the sleeping girl. She kept caressing her face with
the cloth a while longer.
"This is extremely nice of you," said a man's voice, coming from behind her back.
Ginny jumped,
first with a start, and then with great elation. "Lee!" she called, rushing
to hug him. "What are you doing
here?" She
took a step back and examined him critically. "Except for your hair, you
seem fine," she declared happily.
"Have you
found Ron?" Before he had a chance to answer, she sealed his mouth with
a kiss.
"Hmmm... yes and... hmmm... no," Lee murmured in between kisses.
"What do you mean?" Ginny looked worried as she let go of him so he could answer her question.
"We've found
him," he said, "But then we've lost him again. He used Floo powder to go
through a fireplace, and the
fireplace
was set to a certain location and we don't know what that location was."
Ginny's expression darkened. "Why didn't you go after him?" she asked.
"We couldn't. The whole construction collapsed right after Malfoy went through."
"Malfoy?" she shrieked.
"Draco Malfoy.
It seems that he and Ron were working on some plan to get Harry and Hermione
out, and the plan
went horribly
wrong."
Ginny's head
was swarming with questions. "Working together? Malfoy? Get them out of
where?" What where they
doing there
in the first place? How did
you get here? Where is - hmmm"
She shot question
after question until Lee had no choice but to shut her up with a kiss.
Lee released her gingerly, only
to kiss her
again as she opened her mouth to continue the flood.
"If you keep... mm... asking questions... mm... I will just have... mm... to go on kissing you."
"That... mm... will be... mm... terrible."
Their kisses
became increasingly passionate. Ginny stumbled to the infirmary bed beside
Cho, dragging Lee with her.
She had intended
to sit on the bed, but almost instantly found herself lying on her back,
pressed under Lee's weight,
her legs still
touching the floor, but only barely. She knew he had a lot to do with getting
into her current position, but
couldn't remember
exactly what, and also, she couldn't care less.
Lee's stubble
scratched the delicate skin on her neck as he worked his lips downwards,
one hand caressing her rich
hair and the
other holding her waist, pressing them even closer together.
Ginny tilted
her head backward and failed to stop a tiny moan from escaping her lips.
This is the way life should
always
be, she thought. There is nothing more important than this. Or is
there. One very plausible option popped
to her mind.
"Ron!" she cried. She sat bolt up right, pushing Lee away from her. "Where's Ron?"
"Right," said
Lee while willing his heartbeat back to normal. He tried to push his dreadlocks
backwards, completely
forgetting
that he didn't have them any more.
"And what happened to your hair?" Ginny added with a grimace.
Lee told her
everything from the moment he went up to Dumbledore's office to the moment
they found themselves
back at the
same office, leaving out the fact that Ron now had the Dark Mark.
Ginny tried
to make sure she understood everything. "So Professor Snape notified Dumbledore
that his office was
linked to
You-Know-Who's network, and all the professors were waiting for you there?"
"Yes."
"And what did they say when you came out instead of Death Eaters?" she asked as she glanced at the sleeping Cho.
"They thought we were Death Eaters disguised with Polyjuice Potion."
"And they held you at wand-point for an hour?"
"No. Apparently
there are strong spells that make it last for longer. Sirius took Veritaserum
to prove to them that
we were really
us."
"Really? Sirius took Veritaserum?" Ginny had a wicked smile. "Tell me what he said."
Lee matched
her smile. "When I left, he was just busy declaring his undying love to
Arabella." Lee laughed at his
mental image.
"You should have seen him try to gag himself."
Ginny thought
that was rather romantic, and told him so, to which he responded with a
steamy kiss. A tawny owl
that landed
on his shoulder stopped them from taking this kiss any further.
Lee took the rolled up parchment from the owl, who fluttered his wings twice, and disappeared through the window.
"It's from
Oliver Wood," Lee mumbled as he read the note. "He says he went to see
Percy about standardisation for
racing brooms."
Lee stopped talking in order to read on. "He encountered something in the
Ministry. He wants to
show it to
me personally. He asks that I Apparate to his place right now."
Lee put the letter down. "Ginny, this sounds serious. I have to go."
"I don't like this. Let me come with you."
"You can't. You don't have your Apparation licence yet. From his letter, it sounds urgent."
"You're right.
You should ask Professor Lupin to come with you." Lee looked hesitant.
"You went with him when he
needed help,"
she pressed on. "And you know you can trust him."
"All right!" Lee raised both hands in the air. "I'll ask him," and he kissed Ginny one, long, lustful kiss and left.
A few minutes
later, when Viktor Krum stepped back into the infirmary, he found Ginny
just as he'd left her, gently
wiping Cho's
face, looking only a bit more flushed than he remembered.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It took Hermione
no more than an hour to prepare the amulet, and would have taken less if
the others hadn't insisted
on helping
her. It pulsed in a soft silvery light pointing eastwards, and that's where
they were going, heading towards
one of the
less travelled trails of the forest.
A mere moment
before the group passed there, Neil Ward crossed the path, wearing nothing
but his knickers,
on which,
embroidered in golden threads, was a flying Ford Anglia. The car, suffering
from a severe
tree-fixation,
was utterly intimidated by the woods. It was unsuccessfully trying to hide
in the silk lining of
Neil's
knickers. All this did not concern Harry, Draco, Hermione and Ron, as they
arrived a moment too late
for the
spectacle. They did, however, encounter the creature that was making Neil
escape unclad through the
woods.
[A/N: Relish the moment, because this is the last piece of underwear you'll see in this fic]
The four of
them stopped in mid motion when they spotted the creature. It was standing
in their path, indifferent to
their presence.
Draco shifted his weight uncomfortably. The white creature noticed the
movement and turned to face
them.
Hermione made
a visible attempt to conceal her smirk. Ron and Harry made no such effort.
They snickered happily
at Draco's
embarrassment, until the furry thing jumped on Hermione.
"Augh! Get it off me!" she cried. "It's hurting me!"
"Oh, come on, Hermione," Harry laughed. "It's just a ferret."
"But it's biting
me!" She shook her arm vigorously, but the little white creature held on
with its teeth and refused to let
go of her
finger.
Draco came
from behind her and put one strong hand around her waist. With his other
hand he held her arm steady,
so she could
no longer shake it, and then led it slowly towards the ground. The minute
the creature's legs touched the
ground, it
released its grip on Hermione's finger and dashed towards the trees. They
could hear it gaining distance,
crunching
the forest's vegetation under its feet.
"You all right,
Hermione?" Draco asked after the two of them straightened up again. He
still held her in the restrictive
manner he
used before, and raised her bruised finger to eye level. "You're bleeding."
"It's nothing,"
Hermione said, well aware of his proximity. A whiff of carnations and mint
filled her nostrils as she pulled
away from
his arms. She held her breath for as long as she could, not to let go of
the scent.
"Are you sure you're all right?" asked Harry, giving her a concerned look, while flashing a glare at Draco.
Before she
could answer, the ferret emerged from between the trees and stared at them
from a few feet away. She
and Draco
made a small, strangled sound.
It took Ron
and Harry quite a while to convince the other two that the little ball
of white-yellow hair was harmless.
They had to
admit that they, too, were annoyed by the fact that it followed them, but
they were willing to pay that
price to see
Draco acting hunted.
During the
daylight hours, Harry kept a distance from the rest of the group. The argument
they'd had in the morning
still echoed
in his head. Then, the sun dropped behind the trees, and shortly after,
it became so dark that they had to
light up the
tips of their wands to see the trail.
Several times
Harry found himself alone in the woods with only the ferret's pink eyes
to keep him company. Each
of these times
he felt a cold hand squeezing in his chest before he managed to catch up
with the group. "What do you
say we stop
for the night?" he suggested the next time he spotted them.
The other three
agreed immediately. They were all pushed beyond exhaustion, and were just
waiting for someone
else to bring
it up first. They sat at the edge of a clearing and had small rations from
the dry food Hermione so smartly
brought with
her and then turned to arrange a campsite. Ron and Draco used large stones
to create a circle for the
circle-ward
charm, while Hermione worked to clear the inside area. Harry just sat with
his back to a tree-trunk, his
legs folded
to his chest and his head resting on his knees. He kept his eyes closed,
shutting the rest of the world
outside his
mental self.
A small light
shone over his head and forced Harry to open his eyes and look up. The
holder of the lit wand was
hidden in
the shadow, but his voice was very well heard. "Don't you think the all-mighty
wizard should help move
the rocks?"
Draco sneered.
Harry lifted
his wand and made a few stones fly in the air and join the forming circle.
This act won him the worst
look of contempt
he ever got from Draco.
"That's great,"
he drawled. "I think you should form the rest of the circle the same way
while I go look for water."
He turned
his back to Harry, trying to decide which way to go.
Harry heaved
himself from the forest floor with some effort. His heavy heart seemed
to have added weight to the
rest of him
as well. He gently pushed Draco from his way, as he moved towards the circle,
and then it happened.
A black sphere
swallowed the two of them. It was the same sphere that had isolated them
from the rest of the world
twice already.
Harry pulled his hand away hurriedly. The sphere only faltered, but remained
intact. He could feel the
fear that
filled Draco magnifying his own sense of horror. Draco's inside chill poured
into the sphere, and with the
lack of warmth
from Harry's side, the temperature around them was rapidly dropping.
What now? he thought to himself.
We try to
move apart and see what happens, I think, he heard Draco's voice in
his head. His eyes opened wide
and met Draco's
silver sneer. Yes, Potter, I know what you're thinking and might I add,
I never knew you felt
that way
about Finch-Fletchley.
"What way?"
Harry grumbled out loud. He wasn't even thinking of Justin. He was trying
very hard not to think about
his last time
alone with Hermione. As always in such cases, this was the only thing he
could think about.
I see,
Draco thought in a manner that made Harry's blood curdle. He took a step
back to where the sphere did not
exist, causing
it to shatter. Only when it was gone did Harry realise he had felt Draco's
presence inside his head. At
least he was
sure the other boy could no longer hear his thoughts. Immediately, he was
able to stop thinking of
Hermione.
Draco's eyes
were still boring into his soul as he said, "I'd better search for that
water now." With a blink of an eye
he was gone.
Harry trudged
towards Ron and Hermione, only to hear Ron stating that he would go look
for water. Harry didn't
bother telling
him that Draco had gone with that intent as well. "Step out of the circle,"
he ordered Hermione in a low
voice.
Hermione seemed
like she wanted to say something but rethought it when she saw Harry's
state. She simply moved
away from
him and stood by an already built section of the stones setting.
"A little further," Harry said.
Hermione took
a few more steps back, until Harry signalled her that she was far enough.
He raised his wand and
began moving
the stones around the campsite. At first, he only raised a few of them,
sending them into a little odd
dance, but
soon the dance developed to a full scale tornado that was centred around
Harry.
When the storm
quieted, and the cloud of dust finally sank, Hermione couldn't recognise
the place. White stones
created a
perfect circle a foot tall, surrounding a completely clear patch of grass
with Harry standing in its centre, his
hair and cloak
grey with dust.
She stepped
over the new circular fence, wanting to reach him, but before she had both
her feet inside the patch she
saw Harry
collapse to the grass. She ran to him and held her lit up wand above his
head, afraid of what that outburst
of magic might
have done to him. To her relief, as she sank to her knees beside him, he
held out his hand and touched
her. He was
alive.
Harry propped
himself on his elbows and pulled Hermione to him. Hermione was tired and
worried and did not
resist. She
buried her face in his chest and made herself comfortable. She felt his
hand playing with her hair, separating
each tendril
and smoothing it, only to make it jump right back when his hand reached
its end. At some stage, Harry
placed his
other hand around her shoulder, but she was only half-aware of that, as
she had fallen asleep.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The boy sat
on a fallen tree trunk a few hundred yards from the camp. He looked around
him to make sure he was
alone, when
he saw the little ferret watching him. He smiled a crooked smile and continued
his scan. Aside from the
pesky creature,
he could see no one.
He pulled up
his sleeve and looked at the vermilion mark on his forearm. The snake seemed
to slither out of the skull
as he rolled
his hand from side to side. He played with it a little before pressing
his finger on the mark.
The mark immediately
turned black. The boy twisted his face with pain, but he kept at his preparations.
He gathered a
few twigs
in front of him, and with his wand, set fire to them. The Dark Lord's head
appeared in the flame, turning it to
a bright shade
of green. The boy kneeled and bowed his head before the presence of his
Master.
"Yes," Voldemort said impatiently. "What do you want?"
The boy raised his eyes timidly. "My Lord, I have interesting information for you concerning Harry Potter."
The head in the flame perked up. "Talk," he ordered.
"I saw him
take an MQ test, master. His score was -" the boy hesitated, not knowing
what was the best way to break
the news.
"Extremely high, My Lord."
Voldemort's
serpentine face looked even more sinister as he smiled. "I suspected as
much," he said. "All the better.
More force
to us when he switches over to our side." He noticed the boy's distress
and added, "How much did he
score?"
The boy lowered his eyes and his voice shook as he said, "A thousand, Master."
Voldemort's
smile faltered. "A - thousand?" he hissed, astonished. "That's -" he looked
for the right word, but couldn't
find one.
"Unusual," he settled eventually for the most suitable option. "This makes
it even more crucial that the boy is
turned."
"I'm doing everything I can, Master," the boy said hurriedly. "It is complicated -"
"I do not want to hear excuses!" The Dark Lord said in his shrill voice. "Use Aude Centeno to help you."
"Who?" The boy forgot to state his submission.
"Me," said
a feminine voice by his ear. The boy turned to look. Where the ferret had
sat, there was now a beautiful
girl, a year
or two older than he was. He blinked at her. "Didn't you suspect I was
an Animagus? The way I stayed
around you
all day?" she sneered at the boy, who only shook his head.
"Do you understand what needs to be done?" Voldemort addressed both his minions.
"Yes Master,"
they answered in tandem, and the boy added, "Get Harry Potter to kill someone,
and leave the rest to
you. It will
be done, My Lord."
"Good," approved
Voldemort. "And preferably, he should kill that Mudblood he is travelling
with. That will make his
conversion
so much easier."
"As you wish, My Lord."
The smile returned to the Dark Lord's hideous face. "I thought you fancied her," he said, testing the boy's reaction.
"I did, My Lord, but I don't any more."
"Very good," Voldemort was pleased with the response. "Is there anything else?"
"Just one more thing, Master," the boy said hesitantly. "How is Saitaina Moricia?" he slurred.
"Not dead,"
Voldemort said, and fading from view he added, "Yet."
A/N:
So, who is it? Could it be one of the boys travelling with Harry? Ron?
Draco? Or maybe there's someone else
who's following
them around? Viktor Krum? Dr. Simon Branford? <G> Find out next chapter
(or not. *mwhehehe*)
All right,
for nine chapters, I've taunted you with the pairings. No more. I've made
up my mind, and in the next chapter
you're going
to find out who's Hermione's chosen one (yes, she is the one who
makes that choice, and about time that
she does).
I'll use this and the few remaining chapters to toy with you concerning
who's about to die. You will fear for
practically
every one of the main characters. If this gets too nerve wrecking, drop
me a note.
The 'thank
you' section is becoming rather long, and I can't even begin to describe
how grateful I am about it. I've tried
to make it
easy for you to find your name, so you don't have to plod through the entire
section for your bit.
First and foremost,
the ones who give writing FanFiction a meaning - my wonderful betas (by
order of returning my
mail <G>):
The insightful
April who made me rewrite half the chapter, Pippin
(Amanita Lestrange), who jumped in
when I thought
I was deserted, and had me re-write the other half, Isabella, who
will call herself ferret-girl from now
on, and does
wonders to my confidence, Jeralyn, who turned out to be a professional
(I'm using forced labour now),
Parker,
who can read my mind, and always knows what's behind my typos.
Banana_Republic:
Well, no cliffhangers this time. I didn't kill Draco or Ron this time,
but that means nothing. I like
writing adventure/mystery
more than romance, but this story is mainly romance. Well, I'm still learning.
Hermione
Granger Weasley: Oh, you're waiting for the chapters. That's so sweet.
I'm sorry to have kept you
waiting even
longer this time. The rest of the chapters will be posted more regularly.
Well, it's hard to resist the H/H
charm when
most good authors write H/H stories.
Saitaina
A. Moricia: You've got so many reviews dedicated to you! Only two tiny
references to you here (your
official protest
was registered <G>) but I promise more of you in chapter 11.
Icer:
I'm glad you liked it. I place the '***' in the middle so you can take
breaks. :)
LunaLuv:
thanks for squeezing me in :). I hope you're release from your captors
(i.e. grounding parents) soon.
Well, Ron
and Draco would have kissed in the closet if this was the slash version.
There was definitely something
between them.
:) Voldemort is a sad, sick person. Glad you caught that! Don't apologise
for not reading the story.
It's for your
enjoyment. Read it if you want, not because you have to!
Harry Shipper:
Well, I have to admit your review left me puzzled. I'm extremely flattered
that my writing caused
you to be
so excited, but you'll have to repeat the request after you've taken a
few deep breaths. :)
Lana Mavi:
Hmmm...I'm not telling who gets Hermione's heart. That's in the next chapter.
There were a few hints
in this chapter,
but then, again, you can't really trust my hints... :) Well, you got your
wish. No cliffie here. Next time,
though...
reader:
I'll step on it. :)
Danika:
Ooh, you have no problem killing off almost anybody! :) Well, you'll find
out soon enough who it is/they are
(never said
I'm going to kill only one). It seems only common courtesy to answer notes
people leave off for me. :)
Kit:
I'm glad you still see it as soap. Go read AngieJ's 'Trouble in Paradise'.
Amanita
Lestrange (Pippin): Well, you're also in the beta credits, but as fro
your review - the feather was planted
there long
ago. I'm glad you liked it. :)
Ginny Love:
I've completely lost track of your names, sorry! I'll still be very happy
to get your picks. Just don't have
my head off
for what I did here. I know it wasn't very conformist <G>.Saitaina was
very happy to hear that she's got
a "kick -
ass villain name" Lol! My Simon not only grovels. After what he said about
my daugher, plus his odd review,
he's going
to do a lot more in the following chapters. You have to make up your mind
- do you want Harry 'whacked'
or do you
want Harry/Draco slash? :) I'll make you a deal - for every ten picks you
get me, I'll write two pages of
whatever ending
you want, just for you. How's that?
magical*little*me:
Wow, your's was the third review that called me to kill Ron! I didn't know
he was that unpopular.
I kinda like
the idea of Ron/Hermione, but not in this fic.
Heather
Michelle: Well, I couldn't kill Harry. Not like that, anyway. No promise
there...
Lizzy/Tygrestick:
Hey! Glad you joined us over the HP_FanFiction list! I'd like to hear why
you don't like Ron. Is
that because
he's between Harry and Hermione in the canon?
~*Amanda*~:
If Draco is beginning to grow on you, that's good enough reason to kill
him. You're the last one left
with me in
the we-hate-Malfoy fortress. Don't give up on me! BTW - You now officially
hold the record for the
shortest review
ever. :) What's the matter? FF.net giving you a hard time? Thanks for making
repeated attempts.
~Indy~:
Tanks for taking the time to review!
Elyssa:
Hmmm... you certainly have an original view point. A Viktor / Hermione
/ Draco triangle... Odd, very, very
odd... Latest
I've seen from Cassie, was a H/D, but not the H you'd like :).
Landry
Anne: Thanks! If you like D/H so much, you have a lot in common with
Sanna, who writes these stories.
She's also
the listmom of hp4ever, which is mainly a collection of D/H stories. You
might want to go there.
diddly
day: thanks! I hope you liked this one too. The three remaining chapters
will be out in a more regular manner.
Elle:
You've read good R/H fics? Where? I want some too! The only good R/H I
know is TiP, and that's not really
R/H either.
There are plenty of D/H. Just go to Sanna's page. You'll find all the needed
references there. Anyway,
D/H is definitely
an option here.
Crystal
Music: Er... when the chapter ended, Draco was about to die because
he tried to save Hermione. I'm not
sure he could
care for her more than that. <BG> H/H is also still an option. Next
chapter this issue will be resolved.
Mwalimu:
I'm always so happy to see a review from you. It's a little celebration!
You've got the ability to point out
both the strong
and the weak points. Very, very helpful. The type that was corrected was
Parker's doing. I've had
horrible mail
problems, and I stupidly thought she gave up on me. Her beta managed to
get through a few minutes
after I posted
the chapter. The improvement you see is not me - it's the increasing number
of betas I work with.
Thanks all
the same!
RatheraMutemwiya:
You're disappointed Harry's alive? Oh, dear. Well, he might still die in
this fic. It is also
possible both
Malfoys survive this story, although I'd be very happy to rip them apart
in "real" life <G>. My Lucius
is not a child
abuser. He is a womaniser, but aren't all man? :)
moi:
well, you got me thinking. The chapters are very similar in length, and
I'm not going to change this, but there are
plenty of
'***' - places where you can take a break. After all, I don't read other
author's long chapters in one sitting
either *shudders
at the thought of sitting in front of the computer for the 11 hours it
took to read the wonderful DS13*
Sarah:
If you feel so strongly about all of them surviving this story, you might
want to stop reading at this stage
<VBEG>.
The name of the chapter *is* 'Birds of a Feather', which indicates Ron's
Dark Mark - just like the other
heroes. It's
also a pun on the phoenix feather, but, well, you don't have to like my
humour. I realise that the names
I give don't
always make sense (where's Krum?) but I like them :)
Phyllia:
Thanks! Not having a ship is the right way to read this story <G>. I'm
glad H/H works for you, I hope I can
make other
ships work as well (no hint here, I could mean Ginny/Lee, Krum/Cho, etc.
etc.)
///:{D:
(that can't be your real name! <G>) Well, of course I'd kill Death Eaters
here, but that's hardly worth a
warning, is
it? One or more of the major characters is going to die. Makes me really
sad, but that's the way it is.
GinnyPotter:
Well, I have considered what Ron's death would do to Harry. Have you considered
what Harry's
death would
do to everybody else? I'm not saying I'm going to kill either of the two
(not saying otherwise, either). I'm
just saying
- be prepared for every possibility. I yyou haven't enjoyed any H/H fic,
then you haven't read Cassandra
Clair's fics.
She's a fantastic writer, and you should give her stories a go. Oh, and
feel free to get that off your chest.
Your rant
really makes me smile. You know I'm a R/H at heart. You don't like Lee's
new haircut? He got it just for
you! Actually,
he's in all these chapters just because I needed a good excuse to get him
the haircut you requested!
You make a
good imitation of a 'normal' review <G>.
Ebony AKA
AngieJ: Thanks! I turned beet red reading such compliments from an
English teacher! So, what's
'Anglophone'?
<G>. Was glad to provide you with the H/H scene, and I can't wait for
TiP8. Where is it? Where is it?
Burrow
Gurl: No cliffhanger here. I'll give you a rest for the duration of
one chapter. :) I'm very married, to a
wonderful
guy, so no problem finding a Valentine. Better luck next year! Actually,
we both spent the entire day
listening
to the news about the casualties in a terrorist attack that morning, but
I woke up the next morning to a
mailbox full
of reviews, so I felt a little better :).
Silence
Unheard: Thanks! No promise about the H/H thing, though.
heidi tandy:
Hmmm... I don't know if my Lucius is as evil as yours, but he's not a nice
guy, that's for sure. :). The
transitions
are not easy. I think half of my writing time is spent of the last paragraph
of each scene. Yours gives the
impression
of being smooth too. You can say that again about my speed :). I still
have 48 pages of SoC7 to read
while I wait
to see if anyone removes me from AuthorAlert (one just has, this morning
:( ). Where do you keep your
Evil!Lucius
list?
Draco Skywalker:
I forwarded your review to Saitaina, and she liked it very much :) She's
mentioned in this
chapter, but
she'll be back big-time in chapter 11.
Unicorn
Chick: I love Ron. At least I think I do. And I hate Draco... I'm confused,
I think. Or maybe not? It seems
that almost
anyone who reads this story wants Ron dead. Well, good thing there's no
vote on this one. Not saying that
Ron'll survive,
just happy in general.
stark-raving-loony:
Oh dear. I had you confused with someone else, who offered to beta via
e-mail. I only found
that out when
I sat to write the 'thank you' section. Oh, I can't believe I could've
had another beta for this chapter,
and missed
my opportunity. Your e-mails were extremely funny and helped restore my
mood after I've had a horrible
flame, but
I thought you were joking! Grrr... I will definitely send chapter 10 to
you. Thanks, and sorry. As for your
question -
Harry will have to face Voldemort, because none of them is dead yet. I
don't know if it'll happen in this
story... All
right, I know, but I'm not telling. :) As a beta, you'll read about it
a week before anybody else <BG>.
me, myself,
and(no, not Irene) I: That's a great contra to the flames I got for
the long chapters. I'm glad you
represent
the other side. :) No cliffie this time, but embrace yourself for the next
chapter. The improvement in the
English is
just an illusion created by the increasing number of beta-readers this
story has. These days, wherever I go,
there's a
line of exhausted beta-readers behind me :)
Al:
This may sound a little pompous, but I think that if my English is improving,
it's mainly because I read your stories.
I think that
the way you have with words is unmatched in fanfic world. It's true poetry,
but in the good sense of the
word <G>.
Stop apologizing when you can't read a story! If you enjoy it, great. If
you have better things to do, well,
then do them.
I forbid you to go on strike! I can live without 'Snitch!' (although I
don't want to, if I have a choice in
the matter)
but I need my regular fix of ToT. I have the UK version of the books. Using
a UK spellchecker is so
much easier.
Closer to canon, too (yeah, as if the spelling in the canon-consistency
problem with this fic). What was
stolen from
you was the 'longest review award' idea, not the award. You never had that.
You did have a longer
review than
Mwalimu's but Ginny Love beat you both. You're right about Voldie and the
DE. I see them as a well
organised
terrorist organisation - sort of a small military. Oh, this is long. I
do hope you read this section :)
Just me:
short and sweet. Only three more chapters to go. I almost always finish
a job I've started. Just takes a
while. :)
Auri:
no cliffie here! See? I kept my promise. Next time there will be one, though.
Emma:
Hermione/Ron, Ginny/Harry are the right canon ships, but I don't think
it'll work here. Sorry!
Hopeshelovesharry
/ R
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