Summary:
I'm sinking lower than low in this chapter, making all the boys strip down
to their knickers. Keep a
straight face,
and have fun.
Disclaimer:
This story is based on characters and situations created and owned by JK
Rowling, various publishers
including
but not limited to Bloomsbury Books, Scholastic Books and Raincoast Books,
and Warner Bros., Inc. No
money is being
made and no copyright or trademark infringement is intended.
Author's
Note & Dedications:
Warning:
I meant to give you a rest, and end this chapter with no cliffhangers,
but it just came out too long. This one
is probably
as bad as the one in the previous chapter.
Krum Do I Love?
by
yael
Chapter
8
Birds
of a Feather
"- Kedavra,"
Voldemort finished. A brilliant green flare left the tip of his wand. It
travelled with lightning speed
towards Harry.
Before anyone in the room could make out its exact form, it hit Harry's
chest.
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"How much further do we have to go?"
"I don't know
exactly, but we can't be very far." Remus pushed aside a thorny plant just
to walk into the spikes of
another. "Do
you need to rest, Lee?"
"I don't want to cause a delay," answered Lee, his words barely heard over his wheezing.
Remus stopped
and looked at him. "You're not going to be much good in the final confrontation
in this condition." He
scanned their
surroundings for a piece of ground bare of spiky rocks and thorns. As he
couldn't find any, he chose a
small area
clear of the flesh-tearing vegetation, and began kicking away the larger
rocks. "We have been walking for
five hours
straight and you're not used to that." Seeing the miserable expression
on Lee's face, Remus tried to think of
something
nice to say. "I could certainly use some rest as well. Let's just sit for
a few minutes." Lee's grateful face told
him that he
had said the right thing.
To his surprise,
Remus did not have to drag Lee back to the road. After only a very short
rest, Lee stood on his own
initiative,
looking refreshed and ready to leave. Remus was very pleased with him.
He reminisced over his previous
missions.
If this had been Sirius, I'd have had to threaten him with terrible
curses before he'd have gotten up.
As it happened,
the place they chose for their respite had probably been their last opportunity
for it. A mile further into
the hostile
terrain, Rita Skeeter's house came into view. The winter's mid-day sunrays
shone over the house, making
the melted
snow on its roof sparkle like diamond powder.
Remus chose
a large rock and signalled Lee to crouch behind it. He positioned himself
behind a sibling boulder. Every
time Lee had
tried to take a peek in the direction of the house, he had received angry
glares from Remus. On one
occasion he
had even received a small flying pebble, which caught him on the nose and
made him see black spots for
several minutes.
The pebble finally made him take the hint and just lie back and wait for
Remus to assess the situation.
Lee watched
Remus' every motion with great care, hoping that his slightest grimace
would tell him what he was seeing.
He was absolutely
right to assume that. Only minutes later, Remus' pale and stunned face
had given him a good hint as
to what he
saw. He opened his mouth to ask for details, but Remus raised a shaky finger
to his mouth as a sign to be
quiet. He
began making his way away from the cabin, beckoning Lee to follow him.
The two only
stopped when they were safely away from the house. By then, all the patience
Lee had practiced since
early morning
was beginning to disintegrate.
"Why are we getting away from Skeeter's house?" Lee demanded the minute he felt he was allowed to talk again. "I thought that was our target."
"That was our
target," answered Remus, "But we need to rethink our strategy." He looked
at Lee's expectant eyes.
The boy was
very young. Too young to get into such a battle, too young to die. "There
are Death Eaters in the house."
"So what?"
said Lee with a touch of over-confidence. "We have the element of surprise
on our side. We could take
even three
or four of them." He recognised Remus' downcast expression. "Each," he
added with more hesitation.
"Even if we can take four of them - each - that won't be sufficient."
Lee was beginning to appreciate the size of problem. "How many are there anyway?" he asked.
"I can only
estimate," said Remus grimly. "I'd say around fifty. I don't know if there's
a single dark wizard in this
country who's
not there. They're having a bloody convention!"
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Harry felt
the curse hit his chest with a burning singe. He felt its echo inside his
chest like a Ping-Pong ball trying to
escape. He
saw the golden thread connecting his chest and Voldemort's wand, and saw
the golden cage forming
around them,
carrying the two high into the air. Harry now knew how it felt to be hit
by the golden beam of the Priori
Incantatem
ancient magic, how it was to have the other side in control of the cage,
to see your own spells reoccur,
and it was
not a pleasant experience.
Out of his
very chest, being born inside the folds of his robes, came the shape of
a broomstick - a Firebolt carrying
two young
men. It was flying very fast, and yet, it stayed hovering above Harry's
head at exactly the same spot.
Subsequently,
came the unconscious form of someone who was unmistakably Hermione. Something
new was
beginning
to blossom from Harry's chest right after her, but at that second, Voldemort
chose to break the link.
They both fell
to the ground. Harry fell ungracefully on his back, still surrounded by
the two shadows of his spells.
Voldemort
landed on his legs, roaring with rage. "How dare you escape my curse again!"
he screeched. "crucio!"
His wand pointed
mercilessly towards Harry's helpless form. He held it towards him for very
long, letting Harry's
anguished
screams help regain his own twisted mental balance.
Finally, the
Dark Lord was able to relax his facial muscles and remove the cruel grimace
that was plastered on his
face for long
minutes. Some time later, when Harry's screams could no longer be heard,
and his body had stopped
twitching,
he lowered his hand as well.
Harry remained
lying on the flagstones, almost motionless. His ribs kept rising and falling
in a non-rhythmical and all
around pathetic
manner. Voldemort gave one of the Death Eaters around a quick squint. "Take
him to the secured
dungeon cell,"
he commanded.
Snape felt
the Dark Lord's glance burning on his skin. "Yes Master," he said. He bowed
deeply to him, and then
heaved Harry's
limp body, loaded it over his shoulder and took it with him through the
hearth's burning green flames.
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Taking Harry
out had done wonders to Voldemort's confidence. Before Harry was removed,
his presence was well
felt in the
room. Now, it absolutely consumed every dark corner. He also seemed to
have grown an inch taller. He
had started
ordering his minions around.
In a matter
of minutes, there were a dozen Death Eaters aligned in front of the hearth,
Ron and Draco among them,
waiting to
use the tagged floo powder to get to Ron's initiation ceremony. Ron himself
was trembling with fear, trying
his best to
come up with some plan that didn't end up with him dead or carrying the
Dark Mark. So far, all his plans
could be categorised
as either of the two unappealing options.
Lucius Malfoy
was at the head of the line. He stood, getting last-minute orders from
his Master. "I will see you there,"
concluded
Voldemort with a hiss.
"Master, please have the honour to be the first to step into the fireplace."
"No Lucius, I will apparate there." He started walking towards the door of the hut.
"I'm sorry, My Lord, I think the ceremonial chamber is blocked to apparation."
"Are you questioning my abilities, Lucius?"
Ron could feel Draco wincing by his side.
"No Master
-" Lucius Malfoy got down on his knees. "I am truly sorry My Lord -" He
grabbed the rim of
Voldemort's
robes and kissed it. "I didn't realise -"
"Of course
you didn't," said Voldemort in a voice as calm as the centre of a hurricane.
He raised his wand, and
with a swift
motion lowered it onto Lucius' jaw. Lucius' lip split, and blood trickled
all over his robes, soaking his
collar. The
side of his face swelled and shone vivid red. It looked like there was
a good chance his jaw was broken.
Lucius, however,
ignored the blood and the obvious pain. He got up and took back his place
at the front of the line,
the remainder
of his chin set to the front. He led the others one by one through the
flames, concluding with Ron and
Draco.
They emerged
in a large yet unremarkable room. It had plain plastered walls and was
completely unfurnished except
for the plain
wooden fireplace through which they came. Ron was somewhat disappointed
by the lameness of the
place. "Is
this it?" he asked Draco in a low whisper. The dispassion was noticeable
in his voice.
"This is just the transition room," Draco whispered back. "Wait."
Ron waited.
The flames behind his back made a menacing hissing sound, swelled, and
then spat out Lucius Malfoy,
who had seemingly
used the few seconds alone on the other side to heal his bruised face.
He found a place beside
Ron and Draco,
and waited with them.
A short and
somewhat plump Death Eater entered the room through one of its many doors.
Without looking at the
other assembled
wizards, he reached a bare wall and stood in front of it. Ron recognised
the Death Eater immediately.
Although he
was wearing a mask, and his head was covered with the hood of his unrevealing
black robes, Ron had
no doubt in
his heart as to the man's identity. He had spent too many years with him
to forget. Even if he had assumed
the form of
a rat during those years. It was Scabbers - Wormtail - Peter Pettigrew.
Ron's ex-rat
raised a silvery hand and placed it on the wall in front of him. The mumbled
words of a chant reached
Ron and Draco's
ears. Thin, deep purple circles started forming around the silver fingers,
surrounding the hand with a
purple glow.
As the chant proceeded, more and more circles formed around the hand, growing
wider to include a
large portion
of the wall. When Pettigrew had stopped chanting and removed his hand,
there was a large magenta
puddle decorating
the wall.
Peter Pettigrew
stepped into the puddle and disappeared from their sight. As they did with
the hearth earlier, the other
Death Eaters
formed a single file line, each waiting his turn to pass through the glowing
puddle. Ron and Draco tried to
join the line,
but were stopped.
A Death Eater
unknown to them held both their arms. "You cannot go in, not just yet,"
he told them. Both boys paled,
afraid that
their intentions had been discovered. The dark wizard seemed oblivious
to their reaction. He led them to
side room
and ushered them inside. "Get dressed," he ordered. "I'll wait for you
outside."
The room was
just large enough to contain two wooden chairs, one very big wardrobe and
the two boys, standing
uncomfortably
close to one another.
Draco opened the wardrobe's heavy wooden door, not too carefully.
"Hey! Watch it," cried Ron. "You almost knocked me out with that thing."
"Oh," said Draco, unimpressed.
Ron gave him
a glare, but that, too, went unnoticed. He was about to continue reproaching
Draco, when he noticed
his open mouth
and wide eyes. He followed his gaze into the wardrobe, and his own jaw
dropped as well.
The wardrobe
was almost empty. Almost. Two full body suits were hanging in there, including
black trousers, black
robes with
silver serpent-shaped buttons for closing the front flap, black socks and
black shoes. Each outfit came
complete with
a white Death Eater's mask. These were very clearly left there for them.
There was also no mistake
which robes
were intended for which of the boys. Ron and Draco exchanged amazed looks,
and with some effort
due to the
dimensions of the room, changed places.
Draco started
to loosen the many strips that held his multi-layered silk robes. Ron watched
him, first with dread, and
then with
submission. That's not so bad, he tried to tell himself. I've
changed in the boy's dormitories many times
before.
He shrugged, and pulled his ragged hand-me-down robes over his head.
"Nice pants," commented Draco, as Ron reached for the wardrobe.
Ron blushed.
He was wearing his dancing fruit boxer shorts, enchanted to change the
fruits with the change of the
season. Right
now, they featured apples, strawberries, and little white mice. Ron suspected
that the mice were the
works of his
older twin brothers.
Ron hurried
to put on the new robes, noting that Draco's pants were made of black silk
- a perfect match to his
former robes.
For the first time in his life, Ron felt completely comfortable in his
clothes. They were exactly the right
size, as if
they were tailored especially for him. The fabric felt smooth and caressed
his skin like a gentle lover.
Draco was already
trying to pull up the trousers, a job that was made difficult by his frequent
pauses to scratch his
shins. "This
material is rough and itchy," he complained. "I hate it." His whining stopped
abruptly as one of Ron's
elbows mistakenly
hit his bare back. He grabbed Ron's arm, knowing that the fault was on
the crowded place, and
still feeling
vexed.
Ron had stopped
trying to fix the buttons of the robes, and turned to Draco, following
the pull on his arm. "I'm
sorry," he
mumbled. Something about Draco's uncovered chest made him choke. Draco
was quick to drop Ron's
arm. He didn't
even bother to use the opportunity to make snide remarks at Ron's expense.
He returned to putting
on clothes,
no longer complaining about the fabric.
When the two
were fully dressed and shod, they opened the door back to the transition
room. As he promised, the
Death Eater
was waiting for them outside. "Put on the masks," he ordered.
Draco placed
the mask on his face with an experienced hand. Ron followed suit. They
walked with the wizard up to
the purple
glow, at which point he placed torches in their hands, and beckoned them
to walk through before he did.
An incredible
sight unravelled in front of them as they went through. They had entered
a round arena, enclosed by
tall black
walls. The walls were so black that it was hard to tell exactly where the
room stopped and the walls began.
In the middle
of the room was a large green marble altar. It was decorated all around
with snakes and other creatures,
all made of
pure silver. There was a girl lying on the altar, very tightly strapped
to it. Her arms were stretched above
her head so
violently that she had trouble breathing without dislocating a shoulder.
Ron gasped as he recognised the
girl as Hermione.
Ron looked
up. The walls seemed to go on forever. The ceiling was not visible, but
it had to be there, since the room
was very hot.
The Death Eater who accompanied Ron and Draco entered the room. From this
side, the purple portal
looked like
an ordinary door. However, after the last wizard stepped inside, the opening
seemed to have vanished.
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The door to
their cell opened with no previous warning. A masked wizard stepped inside
- a Death Eater. He was
carrying a
tray of food in one hand, and held his wand ready in the other. Sirius
rose to his feet, preparing to jump the
wizard. Not
taking any risks, the Death Eater mumbled a curse. A jet of grey light
came shooting out of the tip of his
wand, hitting
Sirius' legs. Sirius fell on the flagstones, unable to sense anything but
the pang blowing where the curse
had hit. A
second later, the dark wizard fell, too, sending the food tray clattering
to the floor.
Severus Snape
stepped into the cell, his tiny eyes running to all directions inside their
sockets like scared little black
mice. He picked
up the Death Eater's fallen wand and tossed it to Mundungus. "Unbelievable,
how you managed to
overtake him
all by yourself" he exclaimed. "You should get out of here now,"
he added in a low whisper. "The
house is almost
empty. There are nine guards left, including me and him." He prodded the
stunned Death Eater with
the toe of
his boot. "Your wands are in a desk drawer in the room right above you."
"Where are Harry and Hermione?" asked Arabella.
"They're not here any more," Snape answered curtly. "I'll draw you a map."
The pain in
Sirius' legs began to subside. He was able to see again beyond the cloud
of blinding agony. The sight
that penetrated
his brain via his eyes surprised him. He looked at Snape. "You did this?"
he grumbled.
Snape nodded.
"You could have done it before he hexed me," groaned Sirius through gritted teeth.
"Yes, I could have," agreed Snape. He went out of the room, leaving the three to make their plans for escape.
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Including Ron
and Draco, there were about fifteen Death Eaters in the room. They all
stood in a circle around the
green and
silver altar. Hermione made no move except for her laboured breathing,
and Ron seriously doubted she
was conscious.
Voldemort stood
by the altar, scanning the circle around him. His sudden silent appearance
made the dark wizards
gasp. Some
of them looked like they wanted to run away, but didn't dare. With the
dark lord, by his feet, appeared
a large, intimidating
snake.
"We are here
for a very festive occasion," began the Dark Lord. His hiss, albeit very
low, was well heard by
everyone in
the room. "Today, a young wizard from one of the ancient wizarding families
is about to join our ranks."
Ron's stomach
lurched when he realized he was the wizard in question. "Come to me, boy."
Voldemort raised his
hand, signalling
Ron to approach him. When he was in arm's reach, Voldemort closed his fingers
around his wrist
with the clamp
of a steel-vice.
"I know you
all have doubts littering your loyalty," continued the Dark Lord as he
held Ron close to him. "You all
saw the Potter
boy today refuse to die once more." He viewed the gathered wizards one
by one, making them all
cast their
eyes to the floor in fear and shame. "But you also witnessed him get a
taste of my rage." The hissing
became a roar
like an approaching hurricane. His eyes shone with yellow ardour. "He is
not resistant to all curses.
Soon, we will
break the spell that temporarily protects him against this one specific
curse." His slit-eyes regained
their red
dullness. "But now, more pleasing events are at hand."
Ron felt himself
being pushed towards the altar. Hermione looked up at him. Apparently,
she was not unconscious,
just very
still. "You were sly enough to provide us with this Mudblood," Voldemort
complimented him. Hermione's
eyes were
two brown pools of caramel - sweet and slightly scorched. There was no
pleading in them, just deep,
primal fear.
"You will now have the honour of casting your very first Avada Kedavra
curse on her. Then, you could
become one
of us."
Ron looked
at him, shaken. So it had come to this. Either he would kill Hermione,
or he'd refuse and get killed
himself. It
was a difficult decision, but one he was prepared to make.
Voldemort misinterpreted
his hesitation. "Don't be afraid, my boy," he said, grabbing Ron's wand
hand and helping
him aim it
at Hermione. "Nobody expects you to make it on your first attempt. Just
give it your best try. You can
make as many
attempts as you like, she's not going anywhere." He released a dry chuckle.
Ron relaxed
a bit. If he wasn't expected to be able to master the curse on his first
attempt, then there was no reason
he shouldn't
fail on his following attempts as well. All he had to do was pretend to
be tired after failing enough times,
and ask to
try again tomorrow. Then, they'd have the night to figure out what to do.
Ron aimed his
wand at Hermione. His hand, that was very steady up to this moment, started
shaking. Not big, wavy
quakes that
would raise Voldemort's wrath. Just tiny shivers that made the wand tip
create minute circles over
Hermione's
navel. "There are other things I'd rather do with her," he muttered.
"Unbelievable,
this Mudblood!" squealed Lucius from his place in the Death Eaters circle.
"She's got my Draco
infatuated
with her as well."
The stare Draco
had fixed upon his father for letting out his secret could easily compete
with the dangerous glare he
himself received
from Ron.
Voldemort's
face split up in a condescending smile. "So both youths want to play with
her a little." He stalked over
to Hermione
and gave her an appraising look. Hermione shut her eyes against the hideous
view. "Yes, I can see why
our future
generation finds her attractive." He placed a long, pricking finger on
her forehead, and moved it slowly
towards her
chin. Hermione felt as if he was slicing her face in half with an icicle.
When he reached her chin, he
jabbed his
finger under it, making her tilt her head backward as much as the neck
strip allowed, which was, actually,
very little.
"Very well,"
he said. He turned to Ron, forcefully grabbed his left arm, and without
further warning placed his wand
on Ron's forearm,
hissing the words of an ancient spell. "morsmorde corpus sculper".
Ron had a sensation
he had never felt before. A wave, which was comfortably warm and stimulatingly
cold at the
same time,
was formed where the wand had touched him, and was rapidly spreading all
over his body. He shivered
slightly.
He closed his eyes and allowed the pleasant wave to pass before remembering
where he was and whom
with. He shivered
again, for a different reason.
Ron had seen
the Dark Mark on Draco, Harry, Snape and a few others during their stay
among the Death Eaters.
The mark felt
almost familiar now, and still, seeing it branded on his own arm had a
strange effect on Ron. More
than anything
right now, he feared his mother's reaction to the new development.
Voldemort had
lost interest in Ron. He mumbled a spell over Hermione. In response, the
metal straps that held her
pinned to
the altar all popped open. They were instantly replaced by thin ropes,
which tied her wrists and ankles
together.
He signalled one of the larger masked wizards to approach. "Put her in
the cell with Potter," he commanded.
"He won't
come around for a long time."
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"Four down, five to go."
"You're counting Snape?"
"We need to get through him as well."
"But surely he won't put up a fight."
"Don't bet on it," muttered Sirius bitterly. "And anyway, we have to stun him too, or they'll suspect him."
"You're right."
"And we need to beat him up. You know, to make it look real."
"We didn't
need to beat up this one." Arabella pointed at the last fallen guard, who
was left behind them as they
moved along
the corridor.
"Well, we don't
mind if they'll suspect him, do we?" moaned Sirius. "But we do care what
happens to Snape. Believe
me, it's for
his own good."
"I think this is it," whispered Mundungus. He stopped in front of a door painted fluorescent yellow.
"Well, open it. You're the one with the wand."
"alohomora"
"Padfoot, Don't just walk into a room, check it first."
Sirius ignored
her warning. The room looked deserted enough, and there was no sign of
wards. He circled the only
desk in the
room, and reached for the drawer. "Wow!"
"What?" Arabella
and Mundungus could not conquer their curiosity before Sirius' stunned
expression, and jumped
to his side.
"Wow!" they called concurrently.
There were
wands in the drawer. Nothing unusual or impressive about that. It was their
number that caused the trio
to stand there
with their mouths hanging open. The drawer was magically enlarged to contain
more than its physical
volume. It
was very deep and the wands stood in it, held in thin rectangular boxes.
Thousands upon thousands of
wands, all
peeping from the top of their boxes.
Arabella put
her hand inside and began moving it an inch above the tips of the wands,
waiting for the familiar tickling
sensation
of her wand. It took several minutes, but eventually she found it tucked
in the depth of the drawer.
Mundungus
was next. It took him approximately the same time to find his wand, which
was the one closest to them.
When they
both held their wands, Arabella and Mundungus cleared the way for Sirius.
Sirius took a step back, held
his arm stretched
forward, and said, "accio wand". His wand jumped out of the drawer
and placed itself in his palm.
"Show off," muttered Arabella.
Sirius gave
her his most charming smile. "Let's go," he said. "We still have five dark
wizards to overtake before this
house is cleared."
"Four."
"Four to overtake and one to beat to a pulp."
Arabella wanted
to protest, but Sirius chose that moment to launch into the parlour and
attack one of the three
Death Eaters
that were standing there. Arabella and Mundungus were not caught by surprise.
They were used to
Sirius lashing
out the second he recognised the enemy. They shot out right behind him,
sending impeding curses at
anything that
didn't run away fast enough.
The three death
eaters put up a reasonable fight, which gave Snape and the last guard time
to respond to the racket
that was well
heard all around the house and join the struggle against the three escaping
prisoners.
Several minutes
later, Arabella went between the fallen guards, waving the smoke away from
her and assessing their
condition.
Much of the furniture in the room was stunned senseless. Beside this damage,
there were four guards in
deep coma,
and one in deep coma who was sprouting tiny dog-shaped hair marks all over
his face. "Sirius Black!"
she exclaimed.
"What have you done -" she stopped her scolding very abruptly.
Her attention,
as well as the others' was directed to the main door of the house. Very
quietly, the three spread along
the wall beside
the door, waiting to see if the noise coming from behind it was a real
person, or just a figment of their
imagination.
No more sound could be heard. They were about to declare themselves insane
when the door suddenly
blew clear
off its hinges and fell a few feet away from the portal with a loud crash.
The three jumped
in front of the open doorway, their wands pointing forward ready for action.
The two wizards in
the door also
had their wands drawn, prepared to put them to immediate use.
Sirius cut
the curse he was creating in mid-word. He let his wand drop an inch lower,
and cleared his throat. Then in
a more hesitant
tone, he asked, "Moony?"
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It took her
the better part of an hour, but finally, Hermione was able to loosen the
ropes around her wrists. With a
violent pull
she removed the remainder of the rope and turned to attack the ones binding
her ankles together. There
was urgency
in her motions, despite the fact that she'd been at it for so long, and
though she knew there was no real
emergency.
Harry had been lying there, motionless, from the moment she was thrown
into the dungeon, and there
was no reason
his condition would change now.
She tossed
aside what was left of the ropes after her relentless assault, and scooped
Harry into her arms. He was
completely
limp, and with the lack of his cooperation, he was also quite heavy. She
laid his head in her lap and
hugged him
to the best of her ability, as if trying to shield him from the rest of
the world. The tension that was building
inside her
during the time she was wrestling the binds burst out in a series of body-jerking
sobs. She tightened her
arms around
Harry's motionless body, seeking comfort in her own act of vain protection.
Something unexpected
made Hermione's weeping cease. She sat completely still, trying to feel
it again. Sure enough,
it came -
the slightest movement from Harry's direction. This wasn't just his breathing.
This was more of a voluntary
motion. She
straightened up and looked down into Harry's emerald green eyes.
Harry felt
a jolt passing through his body, and then another. He opened his eyes.
Someone was holding his head in a
firm hug.
By the smell of honey and daisies, that someone was Hermione. She released
her hold, not letting go of him
completely,
and detached herself from him just enough to look into his eyes. Her own
eyes were red and swollen.
Harry reached out for her and stroked her hair. "How long have you been crying?"
"Oh, not very long," Hermione answered. "But I was very serious about it." A bashful smile played on her lips.
Harry didn't
feel particularly strong, but he was strong enough to pull her closer to
him. It was especially easy since
she showed
no objection. His hand was on the nape of her neck, holding all of her
hair but a few soft strands that
fell over
his face. He could feel her breath, or rather the lack of it. Their noses
collided, stopping their lips from
meeting. They
both tried to tilt their heads to the same side, and then to the other.
After several attempts they were
actually successful
in putting their mouths to each other's, but by then their mouths were
too busy with embarrassed
laughter to
be able to kiss.
"I'm sorry,"
Harry said after Hermione sat straight again. "I shouldn't have tried this.
I know you're with Viktor
Krum -" Her
odd look made him stop talking.
"It was as
much my fault," Hermione said in a detached tone. "And anyway, I broke
up with Viktor just before we
left."
The awkward moment just turned worse. Harry had nothing to say to this that didn't sound like probing.
"What happened
to you?" Hermione asked, both because she was trying to break the silence,
but also because she
simply wanted
to know.
"Nothing,"
Harry answered quite foolishly. Hermione struck him with a look that made
him burst into another fit of
laughter.
His laugh sank rapidly into a pang in his chest.
"What is it?" Hermione asked as she saw Harry press his fist to his chest.
"It's probably just a little cut," he answered. "It's where the curse hit."
"What curse?"
She watched Harry swallow hard. He didn't offer her an answer. Realisation
dawned on her. "Is this
why You-Know-Who
said that he failed again in his attempt to kill you?" Harry nodded. "Was
this the - Avada
Kedavra curse?"
she choked over the question. Harry nodded again.
"How were you able to escape it?"
"I have no
idea." Harry shook his head. "For some reason it caused the same Priori
Incantatem effect that occurred
when I used
my wand against it."
"But you didn't have your wand."
"No."
"Then it's not possible. Only twin wands cause that effect. If you didn't have a wand, how could it happen?"
"I don't know."
Hermione prodded
Harry to sit, and moved slightly away from him. She measured him thoroughly.
With this
comprehensive
examination, she could see the blood on his chest, making his black robes
look wet. There were
tiny bits
of ash all over his front. "Take your robes off," she ordered.
"What?!"
"I said, take
your robes off. I want to see your wound, and I think I have an idea what
was it that saved you." Her
lips curled
to form the beginning of a playful smile, which she wiped off immediately.
Harry knew
that determined look on her face. He knew he was about to lose the argument,
and didn't feel like going
through its
full length before doing so. He unbuttoned the neck studs and pulled the
robe over his head. The
stretching
motion made him groan with pain. He folded into a ball and bit his lower
lip.
Hermione placed
the robes behind him and tenderly rolled him onto them. She did her best
to ignore the Snitch that
was flapping
on his boxer shorts, although she had the urge to reach out her hand and
stop its rapid flight. She
noticed that
the wizard chasing it bore a disturbing resemblance to Harry.
"It's not me," mumbled Harry, following her gaze.
"Who's not
you?" Hermione tried to look innocent, but her flushed face betrayed her.
Her blush was replaced with
unhealthy
pallor as she unfolded Harry's arms, and exposed the wound underneath.
There was a
deep gash across his chest, right above his heart. It was still bleeding,
although Harry was no longer
rapidly losing
blood. She thought she could see rib bone peeping from the deepest area
of the cut, but she wasn't
sure. One
thing was certain - It had the shape of a lightning bolt.
"So, you're
going to have another one of those," she tried to joke, mainly to keep
herself from fainting. Harry dared
a look, and
turned a sickening shade of white. He took a few deep breaths to relax.
Hermione tore off the cleaner
hem of her
robes and used it to wrap Harry's chest. The improvised bandage stopped
the bleeding completely.
"This actually hurts less," Harry made a feeble attempt at a smile.
Something caught
Hermione's eye as she tied the edges of the bandage over the cut. Something
was glowing on
Harry's skin.
Hermione touched it, and looked at her hand. She had gold and red powder
on the tips of her fingers.
She looked
frantically around, but saw nothing. Without realising she was doing so,
she pulled Harry's robes from
underneath
him.
"Ouch!" protested
Harry, but his protest died when he saw the shocked look on Hermione's
face. She was making
an effort
to release something that was tangled inside his robes. Eventually, she
pulled it out. It looked like a thin stalk
with few shining
red threads attached to it.
"What is it?" Harry asked.
"Exactly what it looks like!" Hermione breathed.
"A straw that was left with the red laundry for seven years?" Harry tried.
Hermione didn't look amused. "No," she said. "It's a torn up, scorched phoenix feather."
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"What are you doing here?" demanded Sirius, lowering his wand further.
"What do you
think we're doing here?" grumbled Remus. "You went without saying
a word… left a message that
you'd be back
yesterday afternoon… I was worried." He took a deep breath. "We saw the
blasts inside from our
observation
point and ran here as fast as we could."
"Well, we had
to leave in a hurry, and you were -" Sirius looked at Lee. "Busy." He took
a step into the room. "We
had to stop
that Skeeter woman from publishing whatever it was Voldemort wanted published."
Lee winced to the
sound of the
name. "Oh no," groaned Sirius. "I guess it was published yesterday, wasn't
it?" Remus nodded reluctantly.
"Do you have
a copy?"
Remus pulled the folded piece of paper out of the pocket of his robes. "It's not very pleasant," he warned.
"Well, and
I expected Voldemort to say something nice," mocked Sirius. His sardonic
smile evaporated as he
scanned the
Daily Prophet article. "That's bad," he said, dispirited. He passed the
paper to Mundungus. "That
could
explain a few things, though."
"So I take it Harry is here," stated Remus.
"What?" jumped Sirius. "How do you know?"
"Because you
didn't ask how he is taking it. You're always so worried about him. If
you didn't know he's not at
Hogwarts,
you'd have asked about him."
"Is Ron held here too?" Lee intervened.
"Not exactly," said Sirius. "From what Harry told me, he is posing as a Death Eater. But -"
"What?!" cried
Lee. He strode to the centre of the room and looked around. "I'm taking
him home right now. Where
is he?"
"That's what
I've been trying to tell you," muttered Sirius. "None of them is here.
Harry and Hermione were taken
someplace
else, and I think Ron and Draco are the ones who took them."
"Draco? As in Draco Malfoy? What's he got to do with this?"
"Apparently he's been helping them. I have absolutely no idea why."
Remus shrugged.
"Whatever. We'll take him with us too, but I can't promise anything about
the state of conscious
he'll be in."
Both he and Sirius smiled at the thought. "So, where do we find them?"
"Snape here
told us he'd draw a map." Sirius approached Snape's unconscious form. He
was lying on the flagstones
in a somewhat
grotesque posture. The dog-shaped hair stains on his cheeks were already
half-an-inch long. Sirius
kneeled by
his still body and started searching his pockets. The others stood by and
watched him.
Finally, Sirius
found what he was looking for. He pulled a small package out of Snape's
chest pocket. The package
was wrapped
several times with a large piece of parchment. He pocketed the inside of
the package, and unfolded
the parchment.
It carried a crudely drawn map. Sirius stared at it, then turned it by
ninety degrees and stared at it
some more.
When he turned
it again, Remus stated his annoyance, "Oh, just give it to me." He snatched
the map from Sirius' hand.
A brief look
was all he needed. "All right," he announced. "We have about two hours
walk ahead of us. Is everyone
up to it?"
He looked specifically to Lee, who wasn't used to such missions, and had
already needed to rest often
during the
one-mile walk back to the house.
The reservation
came from an unexpected source. "Sirius has injured legs," announced Arabella.
"I don't think he
could -"
"I'll be just
fine, thank you," Sirius cut her off. "Let's go." He went out the front
door and stopped a few yards away
from the house.
He really had no clue which way to go without Remus' navigation.
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Hermione rolled
the battered feather between her forefinger and her thumb. She raised her
eyes to Harry. "How did
it get into
your robes anyway?"
Harry opened
his mouth to say that he didn't know, but he suddenly remembered how the
feather could have found
its way to
his robes. "I was in Dumbledore's office. Fawkes was moulting. He was about
to combust. He stood on
my shoulder
seconds before he did it. He was shedding feathers all over the place.
One must have caught in my
robes."
Hermione nodded.
The explanation sounded, albeit improbable, true. "Harry, this feather
saved your life," she said.
"But this
isn't enough to stop the curse. Did you try to use any magic?"
"Not exactly," Harry muttered. "I did say 'expelliarmus' or something like it."
"Well, that
must have been it." Hermione looked at his chest again. In a closer look,
it was covered with fine
red-golden
powder. "Were there beads of light, like the ones you told me about last
time?"
"No, no beads,"
said Harry. He was very aware of her gaze on his bare skin. "It didn't
start in the middle, like last
time. The
spell started on my side. It was as if I had lost the battle before the
first bead appeared."
"Oh," said
Hermione. "At least there were no dead bodies in your closet." She reached
her hand to take some more
of the powder,
but got more than that. As her hand touched Harry's chest, he placed his
hand over it, pinning it to
him. Hermione
could feel the beating of his heart under her palm. It was strong and steady,
although a little too fast.
She had a
sudden urge to listen to it directly, and that's exactly what she did.
She put her ear over his heart and
listened.
She didn't
have a chance to do it for long, as Harry held her upper arm and pulled
her up. She found herself inches
away from
his face, her heart rate closing in on his rapidly. This time there was
no awkwardness in their kiss. Their
mouths found
their way to each other's, their lips connecting in an unbreakable lock.
Things were
very easy on Hermione. Since Harry was already undressed, she allowed her
hands to roam his back
and shoulders
freely. She noticed that without the concealing school robes, his shoulders
looked much wider. Harry
had his hands
on Hermione's waist and he felt that with a bit of an effort, he could
surround it with his fingers.
They rolled
on the floor kissing and fondling each other, lost inside each other's
warmth. Hermione found Harry's
kisses different
than anything she had experienced so far. Draco's kisses were harder to
control, but they came from
someone she
despised. These were closer to Viktor's kisses in their warmth and feeling,
but they were so much
more. She
closed her eyes and surrendered herself fully to the unreal happiness that
was transferred to her through
his lips.
Their passionate interlock was broken with a loud blow coming from upstairs.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ron passed
the next several hours in a cloud of haze. From time to time he rolled
up his sleeve and looked at his
newly branded
mark. Every time he looked at it - every time he thought of it, restored
the wonderful sensation he
had when it
was burned on his skin. He felt sick to his stomach by this sensation.
He would have much preferred
it if the
mark had caused him unbearable pain.
Draco spent
some time with his socializing, but was mainly standing right by Ron, keeping
an eye on him, worried
that his new
situation might cause him to do something desperate, like cutting off his
hand. If that happened,
everybody
would know Ron was not a real Death-Eater, and then they would know Draco
had betrayed them.
Draco had
no intention of letting that happen.
Lucius Malfoy
approached the two and placed paternal hands on both their shoulders. "Don't
worry, boys. The
banquet is
about to begin, and after that you will be free to play with your Mudblood.
I suggest you take turns," he
said very
seriously. "It could get embarrassing if you're both with her together."
He winked at Draco. "Take it from
me."
At that moment,
the flames in the hearth changed their colour to green, marking that there
was someone on the way.
Every eye
in the room was turned toward the fire.
Even Voldemort
stopped listening to Dr. Simon Branford's grovelling and watched the swelling
flames. "Are we
expecting
anyone?" he hissed at Dr. Branford.
"Not that I know of, Master," said Dr. Branford and lowered his head with submission.
As the preliminary
signs indicated, a moment later, one woman stepped out of the hearth, letting
the flames abate
behind her.
She was a woman of average height, but that was the only average thing
about her. Ron immediately
decided that
she was the most beautiful woman he had ever seen. She had long black hair,
curled in thick
corkscrew
curls that came down to her hips and created a wonderful contrast to her
milky-white skin. Her eyes
were large
and cat-like. He could not make up his mind as to whether they were green
or blue. She was wearing
a tiny leather
outfit that hardly covered her most essential assets, and that surely could
not have been much good
against the
cold. In addition to all that, she also looked extremely angry.
"Malfoy!" she hollered even before brushing the ashes off of herself.
Both Malfoys
looked at her. Everyone else in the room looked at the two of them. Only
then Ron noticed that
Draco looked
particularly pale, and that he was standing a few feet back, as if he was
caught in the middle of
getting out
of room in a hurry. "Run" he mouthed at Ron, while he himself was pinned
to the spot.
Ron stepped
closer to Draco. "What's wrong?" he asked in a whisper that was drowned
in the murmur of the other
Death Eaters.
"That's Saitaina Moricia," whispered Draco back. His voice was trembling.
"You attacked
me, Malfoy," Saitaina was closing in on Draco, and it was now very clear
to which Malfoy she was
referring.
"You stunned me, and left me in the communications centre locked up and
wearing this!" She pointed a
disgusted
finger towards her leather skirt. "Why on earth did you turn my clothes
into this?"
Every Death
Eater in the room had drawn out his wand and pointed it at Draco. Voldemort
had completely
abandoned
his conversation, and commenced taking small steps towards the two shaking
boys.
"I thought
this would look nice on you," Draco smiled nervously. "The others were
right behind me. I had to stun you
and hide you
so they wouldn't kill you."
"Yes," Ron
supported Draco's story. "Harry Potter would have killed you if he knew
there was a Death Eater in the
house."
"You could have told me that instead of stunning me!" Saitaina glowered at them.
"There was
no time," explained Draco. "I didn't want to take the chance that you would
start screaming when you
heard that
Potter was coming. It would have risked your life."
"Then why didn't
you enervate her before you left?" demanded Voldemort. By now, he was standing
very close to
the two boys.
He was the only wizard in the room who did not point his wand at them,
but he held it with a firm hand.
"We couldn't,"
stammered Draco. "Potter and the Mudblood didn't let us out of their sight.
I think that by then they
were suspecting
that we were your servants."
"Are you a traitor, Draco?" asked Lucius Malfoy. His wand, like everyone else's, was pointing at his son.
"No, Father," breathed Draco.
"Liar!" rasped
Voldemort. "You know Potter would never kill her. He didn't kill Pettigrew,
he wouldn't start his
killings with
a petty communications clerk." Saitaina scowled at being called that. Voldemort
turned his back to the
two. "Kill
them," he hissed. "But make it a slow, painful death."
The first curse
was shot from Lucius Malfoy's wand even before Voldemort was done speaking.
It caught Draco in
the back and
sent him toppling to the floor, biting his lips against the scream of pain.
Ron dropped
to the ground beside him. "Stay down," he advised Draco while warding off
a well-aimed curse.
"We'll try
to crawl out of here. That way less curses can get us." As he spoke, another
curse had hit Draco's back.
"Come on!"
Ron urged him. "Roll over and fight!"
Draco gritted
his teeth, but did as Ron had said. He managed to send several curses back
to their initiators, but
several others
were able to penetrate his defences. He felt weaker with each curse that
hit, and every time rendered
him less capable
of defending himself. He heard Ron cry out beside him, and knew that he
wasn't doing very well
either. All
I wanted was to have a few rounds with Hermione, Draco mused bitterly.
It really shouldn't have come
to this.
With another
successful curse, his vision had begun to blur. Ron's shouting had stopped,
and so had the flashes that
had previously
shot past him, aimed at Ron. He barely managed to ward off two more curses
when the third hit him
in the head,
and he knew no more.
A/N: If you didn't recognise it, the ceremonial room was the same one from chapter #3 (go refresh on it!).
All right,
so I couldn't kill Harry. I love him too much. But you do realise this
isn't necessarily true when it comes to
Draco/Ron.
I'm not sure it'll happen in the next chapter, but I am warning you - there
is someone who will not survive
the end of
this fic.
Thanks to:
First and foremost, the wonderful, patient, caring beta-readers who gave
meaning to my writing and who
had make virtual
summersaults to get to beta this chapter. They all went to extreme trouble
to overcome my current
mail delivery
problems: Dinah, who yet again is trying to blow up my head, and
who thanked me for not putting a
cliffhanger
in this chapter (guess you don't like Draco and Ron much, huh?). Isabelle,
who is suffering immensely
because of
my UK spellchecker, and who's already half-written into chapter 9, and
will star alongside Dr. Branford
in chapter
10 - watch out for her.
Parker, who dropped everything to help me,
made inhuman efforts, and sent me
such worthy
corrections that I put off a meeting and updated the chapter.
Jeralyn,
whose remarks I should frame
and hang over
my bed for reference when I'm down.
Special thanks
to Ginny Love, who didn't review (shame on you) but mailed me a
very helpful list of the weaker
points in
this fic. Most of the Draco-pondering in this chapter is due her remarks,
as well as more-important
less-noticeable
changes.
Longest review
award this time (stolen from Al) goes to Mwalimu. Way to go! Oh,
and you're doing a wonderful
job as a Daily
Prophet editor in TiP. :)
Sanna:
Thanks for making the effort to review. I know how difficult it is. That's
why I've begun my little writer's
strike. Have
to do some catching up. I'm glad you think Draco kissing Hermione is not
OOC :). You're right about
getting you
confused - I'll add the ending of the last chapter from now on. I'm sorry
that I've had you confused. I'm
afraid you're
going to get a lot more confused by the end of next chapter. You'll let
me know if this becomes too
difficult
to follow? Please? Oh, and I owe you an apology - I know I promised to
put my theory about James' house
in chapter
8, but this was too long as it is (hey, you're the one who's always complaining,
in the nicest way, about the
length of
these chapters). The section is already written into chapter 9.
Tessie:
kill Lucius? Hmmm. Interesting notion. I'll give it serious consideration.
Banana
Republic: All right, so this chapter had it's sad/emotional moments
as well, but I promise you lots of laughs
in the next
chapter. :) Your faith in my goodness is remarkable, but don't be so sure
of anything. Er... I thought I
mentioned
how Harry got his mark. All right, I hope this chapter set is straight.
If not, let me know. I don't like
keeping loose
ends. I can't seem to decide about this fic's ship either.
Megan:
Thanks! I had no intention of killing him *evil grin*.
Amanita
Lestrange (AKA Pipin): I can't believe I just now realised you're Pipin.
How thick can a girl be? Good
job on the
Paradise parody :). Glad you liked the conversation with the snake, it
might turn out to be more than that.
What giant
squid? *scrolls back to search the chapter* oh, that. all right, point
taken. Note to self - put more giant
squid in story.
:)
suzzy:
Saved him, and it had nothing to do with the MQ. I'm glad you didn't find
the MQ thing too childish.
Cassandra
Claire: yeah, it would be difficult to make it Harry/Draco if Harry's
dead *winks*. So, does that mean
that DS is
about to turn in that specific direction? I'm afraid the slash here is
going to remain only as an indication
(less subtle
in this chapter) and I meant the Harry/Ron scene to be the slightly slashy
one *sulks*. Do you actually
read all the
'thank you' notes? That's good, but I didn't think anyone actually had
the patience to do it. :) I guess you
have to grow
remarkable reading capabilities when you get 300 long reviews for each
chapter.
Noctua
(Isabelle): That's a great user name. Wish I'd thought of it first.
I beg your pardon. My Harry not too
sexytodie?
Honestly, you've got him mixed up with other Harrys. I need to show you
my very private sketch of the
hot scene
between him and Hermione... That was a very cruel joke you pulled on your
friend. Served you right that
she killed
you. So now, you're my ghost beta? :)
diddly
day: you should thank Ebony (AngieJ) for the hot H/H scene here. Hope
it filled your storage for a while.
GinnyPotter:
ROFL. Got the hint. Well, I said someone's going to die... No promises
made. Harry's living had
nothing to
do with his MQ, but I'm glad you didn't find that notion silly. Thanks
for the zealous review!
dagan:
first of: If you've been trying to contact me, something was terribly wrong
with my e-mail, and nothing came
through. Now
everything's fine, so you can try it again. :) careful where you point
those germs! Of course I catch
your drift,
or, might I say, you caught mine well. (apologies to anyone who's reading
all the 'thank you'-s) Harry's
MQ had nothing
to do with his save, but I'm glad the MQ-thing caught up and didn't send
you irritated to someone
else's fic.
Mwalimu:
Great cameo in TiP! Thank you so much for making huge attempts to help
my writing. I really appreciate
it. Naturally,
I've made all the corrections you suggested, and as always, your explanations
opened my eyes. Thanks!
And thanks
for the enthusiastic review as well.
magical*little*me:
Well, that was a passionate plead for Harry's life. Your request for D/H
was registered.
Currently,
you're on the winner side.
The Game:
That's a very interesting plot you suggest. Hmmm... too bad my a/plot is
already planned to the rest of
the story.
You'll just have to wait and see.
Lizzy/Tygrestick:
you're the main reason I regret not squeezing some of the next chapter
here, to help you relax a
bit. I'm really
sorry, but it just didn't work. ;)
Katie:
*smile* ship preference registered. You are in the minority, however.
RatheraMutemwiya:
Hee hee. Sorry for not obliging you by killing Harry. Well, if you like
Malfoy (which one?)
you're going
to have a few nerve-wrecking weeks (or not...)
Macbeth
Wanda Cauldrina: Wow. Thanks. Between you and Dinah I'm going to get
sooo big headed. Hope you
survived this
long chapter as well. Thanks for making the effort of reviewing past chapters.
Angel:
Thanks for making the effort of reviewing past chapters. Your roaches review
just went to my "most hilarious
reviews" list.
You've stopped reviewing after that chapter, did this point bother you
that much?
The person
who hates you [me] very much now: Luckily, I'm not paranoid, so your
review went to my "most
hilarious
reviews" list as well. :) I hope the cliffhanger this time doesn't break
you completely. I promise no major
cliffie next
time.
The Great
Hermione Fan: Am I making it easy on Draco? I didn't mean to. Well,
we'll see if he survives another
chapter. *evil
grin*
AngieJ
(AKA Ebony): Wow, reviewing all the chapters! You're the greatest!
Well, who would have guessed you're
a H/H? Oh,
right, EVERYONE, captain! The H/H scene in this chapter is dedicated to
you. I have a quick doodle
based on it,
but I'm not sharing. What is OBHWF? I've registered two H/H votes for you,
but you're still in a
minority.
Burrow
Gurl: You still write the sweetest reviews. Makes me feel really bad
to leave you with cliffhangers. I promise
next time
won't be half as bad. I hope this chapter answered your 'Ron as a Death
Eater' question.
Ice Dragoness:
(if you're still with us) Thanks for reviewing previous chapters, and you're
guess was right. I hope
you found
that out by reading the remaining chapters.
Kat:
Your vote was registered, but I hate to say it - the D/H voters are currently
louder. (Which means nothing,
actually).
Al:
There is nothing I can say about reading chapters late. I still have ToT
in my pilot, waiting it's turn after TiP6, and
I'm dying
to read "Snitch!" after seeing that pic. Guess my reviews will come in
extremely late. 'course, if ASA13
comes out,
they'll be delayed even further. Did I mention I'm on a writer's strike
until I've read them all? I'm so glad
you liked
the MQ thing. Coming from you, it's very reassuring. I only notices that
the 'Mad Quill' has the same
acronym after
I've named it. Odd coincidence. Oh, I'm afraid I'm beginning to lose that
Draco you loved so much.
I hope he
doesn't disappear all together. Drop me a note if you feel he does.
Stark-raving-loony:
hmmm... you're right, it can't be a 'Harry Potter' without the Harry bit.
But this fic doesn't have
Harry in the
title... No, I couldn't kill Harry. Not just yet, anyway.
Hermione
the goddess who changed her name from Draco's Girl: Oh, well, Draco
never meant to save Harry.
All he wanted
was Hermione... I thought you liked him.
Bernie
the chio: That's so sweet, still up at 10:20pm. Well, since I'm writing
this usually between 2 and 5 am, I guess
being dead
tired is the only right way to read this. :) Thanks for losing sleep over
my story!
Perdu Ame,
Tualha:
I have! I have! Thanks for taking this so intensely. Now, all you have
to worry about are Ron
and Draco.
Circe:
Thanks for letting me know which points you liked and which you didn't
much care for. It's reviews like yours
that help
me create better chapters (or at least I hope they do)
Elyssa:
Eek... Sorry, guess the name is a bit misleading. You're actually the first
person who'd voted H/K. you're also
the *only*
person who voted on killing Harry. No... wait... there was RatheraMutemwiya
with that vote as well. Sorry
about that
too. You are, however, in the majority with your D/H vote. :)
~*Amanda*~:
Nobody likes it when the bad guys win. The entire Hollywood industry is
based on that. Thanks for
the compliments!
Landry
Anne: Ah, your D/H vote was registered, but if you need a good fic
with D/H ending, you can go read some
of Sanna's
stuff in the mean time. You can find one of her stories (the wonderful
'The Prince's Bride') in my favourite
stories list.
More D/H stories can be found in Sanna's egroup (yahoogroup now *grunt*)
hp4ever. Happy birthday!
Becca:
I'm honoured to be the reason of your de-lurking. You should do it more
often, the reviews are what keeps
most authors
writing. You should also make your H/H vote sound more often, since the
D/H people are leading the
race.
Lana Mavi,
Danika: What a dramatic entry! I loaded my author's page to upload
the new chapter, and found your
reviews. What
a nice surprise! Lana Mavi - you don't have to plead for Harry's
life so ardently :) Your D/H vote
was registered
and added to the majority of the votes. Danika - You've raised several
interesting issues. Much food
for thought.
Thanks! And thank you for the compliments. Guess you won't have to wait
very long this time. BTW -
I'm an extremely
slow reader, which is why I never read my own story :) I *really* need
my betas. Good night!
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