Dionysus


PART ONE (Analysis)

Well, at first, this appears like a story about one Amanda. She was murdered last night beside the river 1992. The Storyteller was there when they "discovered" her body, they tied him up at once and called the police to take him in for questioning and forensic analysis.
    "Why did you kill her?" the police chief said.
    "I confess, I killed her, isn't that enough?"
    "I prefer to know also how and why you killed her."
    He became bored. Like last night, when Amanda stood beside the current, naked, and told him: "Jacob, that's just my story. It's a boring life I've been leading. Kill me. That'll add excitement into my life story."
    Because he loved her, he had to decide which special stone to use to bash her head with, also what shape, what color, looking for it while holding his flashlight. Finally he saw the right stone, the triangle stone, or was it rectangle? and bashed her with it. Immediately she was moaning; he bashed her again.
    Silently, he mused over titles.
    In the morning the villagers discovered a dead body---"hah!"---Amanda's body, on the riverside, drenched in blood and water, some of the blood earlier in the morning occasionally visiting their laundry. A few meters away from the body they found the Storyteller sleeping, tired was he from a whole night of crying like a genius, holding his rock trophy of achievement.
    "Okay, Mr. Storyteller," the villagers said, waking him up, "now you've made your point of creating a story out of real life. What do you want us to title this---The Mystery of the Adventure Girl's Murder?"
    The chief of police couldn't get anything out of him. The Storyteller kept saying, "The story is just what it is. It is its own genius, it answers itself." So the chief tried to argue him out of it: "You create a story, you create an event. But do you stop there? Don't you use the story for something else? Don't you use it to protest something? Or protect something, your religion perhaps? Tell me, aren't you at least a unionist?"
    It was useless. The people at the police station left him. So that now, the Storyteller, touching for the last time the rock award of achievement on the table of evidences, did nothing but wait for his lawyer, Atty. Go Pao Ke (that respected critic of traditional law), to settle the bail, so for the Storyteller to spend another day of "reckless storytelling" better known hereabouts as fiction art.
    Now, our story doesn't end here. There are yet rumors of a councilor's efforts to try to pass a bill that would deem reckless storywriting a crime, and even render critics of, actually from, traditional law accomplices to the crime. But as of this writing the bill is still pending first reading, and the legislature has already recessed to a week of gossip and flattery, devoid of heroes in this town of artists.

 

PART TWO (The Savior)

What the town understood too well was how the Storyteller was---like them---possessed of noble intentions. To some it was clear he murdered Amanda to sort of protest the failure of feminism. To others the murder was about returning to nature what only properly belongs to nature, not to be owned by any generic man. In this case that thing was life. Still, to some, the murder was really all about the love-hate relationship, within each of us, between the innate bourgeois senses and our instructive missionary zeal to liberate generic mankind from boredom, whatever that may mean to you, a reading close to the Storyteller's announced intentions.
    Actually these are all fine, as they go, good readings (or gossip) by teachers left and right of this town.
    But what deus ex machinos like me have noticed about these provincials who call themselves Artists-reading-other-Artists is how they always fail to convince upstarts to the scene of the integrity of those readings everytime murders like Amanda's occur. This is an urgent matter because we in heaven simply cannot allow, anymore, this senseless proliferation of sensationalisms, mostly murders, headlining forever within the expanding industry of publishing journals or magazines of sin.
    Now, since no living hero in this town is taking the matter into his hands, for one reason or another (cowardice's excuses, rather), I as a deus ex machino find it high time, after having gotten fed up, to give notice of a root problem here. Thus my clipped wings. Now, in case you're---uh---you know, worried, there is really nothing to worry about. I should be safe from any democratic Filipino villager's attempts at stoning my person, since I'm already dead, and, besides, this is only a story which, were my security threat-absorbing, I can always rip off.
    So, then. Let's hasten and go straight to the issue of the Storyteller, now near success in evading all analysis by the literary police. I suspect, should everyone be right then that the Storyteller has indeed a point or two (or more) in doing the things he does, that what final message he may have for us here would be nothing else but one from an Unchristian sort of art, one with a done discourse that's also shallow, confused, sinful, underinformed, maybe even stupid or immature. In short, somewhat Pompeiian in its indulgence. I suspect, finally, he's got nothing really but showy elegance up his sleeve, or murderous technique, dangerous flattery. I know---or can suppose---he has themes, oh a collection of them I'm sure, ladies and gentlemen in this town. But my present allegations (pardon my omniscience, people) is now running like a bunch that would love to urgently strike with a bolt of lightning this Storyteller for using holy themes for the purpose of flaunting . . . NEW TECHNIQUES! Do his techniques hold together, in the name of the Lord? Do you notice how he keeps on evading POINT, beloved townspeople, oh God's beloved, preferring to discuss your AWE?! Granted, he's for that that they call "an open text," as it were, but . . . open to whom, townsfolk in this parish? Which Christ is he deceiving? Closed are the eyes of your councilors to text, all you have are critics of traditional law who think fine and pop, art and entertainment, and the sculptor and the juggler, occupy the same room in heaven (though I know they're equal in importance to God), who think all fiction is knife technique, burial plot, dead characters, and then holy theme, linguistic suspense, and damn logic left or right, damn priestly discourse, damn magnificence of vision upon a theme in Israel, and so hail the sacrifice of more virgins bored in this town of free artistry! Hoping a significance within this circus might finally drop like manna from some Somewhere Out There! Ping! Bang! Carpenters all! And so, Josephs? Living on as faithful to an unrecognizable objective.

 

    In heaven, . . . as on earth, I believe you people ought to see the light, that your councilors and mayors and the uncorrupted among your police may in turn see the real recklessness in all your forms of expression. These expressions do make a laughingstock of your self-awarded, idolized stock of trophies. For to people outside of this planet of dilettantism and pretense, no more valuable are these than volcanic stones from Pampanga, . . .
    Okay. Tomorrow, then, . . . children of Yahweh, . . . I dictate, that you all lie naked in the park for an hour. To show your repentance! Then, sitting up, start to write a hundred stories each. Yes. These stories shall have to explore everything that you need to explore in life. And in art. Go ahead. And explore the entertainment, cathartic, escapist, fantasy, and other like values in each story or fable you make.
    Now, then. Having become bored with that, for you and your religious market (or non-market, therefore non-religious) are sure to see boredom in the consumption of these, the way your Storyteller got terribly bored with the usualness of all the plots then available to him, . . . I'll proceed now to teach you the lesson. And the lesson is simple. It's just a pity your Storyteller had not the fortune to attend this fellowship. But you are fortunate. You can thank me for that. Your deus ex machino.
    Believe me, God's townspeople, you ought to kill not your stories before they've lived. Simply use your story. The way you use your temporal credit cards. That is to say, beyond Unchristian gossip, beyond popular wisdom, beyond boredom. Simply value any story's value the way you may overvalue your enemies. That, from now on unto eternity.
    But. . . . I smell danger. A risk. That this, my above "punishment," . . . may only excite you. Worse, only tickle your flesh. But, what am I worried about? For wouldn't that lead you to just another lesson yet in this my holy maze? Leading to the same light? The lesson that now, townspeople, one of you can at last face the priests. Face them and tell them to their faces . . . how you've always wanted to be a romance novelist really, or an adventure novelist really, perhaps a mystery novelist really, and so on; I guarantee that none of them can fail to forgive you. For such directions in the maze of life are no sinful directions, my children. Simply other crafts are these, that you need not be guilty of empty-headedness in the practice of them. Nor is fine fiction "about life" more fine than these, the `fine' being just a word-flag to label a difficult boat---difficult, that is, to identify in the broad sea. A random name it is, from a random thought.
    But, wait, let's pursue that said difference. That this abovementioned guilt not proceed somehow to collect any like crimes as the Storyteller's in that recent hour. Now, the business of fine fiction, brothers and sisters, are the lessons and further lessons (and maybe further yet) in stories, a story. While the business of such a non-sin as, say, suspense-adventure fiction are the quick and subliminal lessons, the little and big how-to's for entering the daily heaven's. Your sin, it was in your ignorance of this. A sin it was, in that it delayed the work of librarians. You offended my God, because he said, as it is written here, you shall worship no other Trophies before me . . . I am the Lord your God, and all art have commandments.
    Ergo sum: Today, you ought not be surprised to hear me say, "Amanda . . . oh Amanda! Simply, arise!" . . .
    I divinely hope no one here throws bread at me. Or I'd be washing my holy hands in some bowl of the most sour grapes. And, forthwith, leave you all . . . to be mocked in Rome!

 

PART THREE (Epilogue)

"Mr. Deus ex machino," they said, "tell us, then, please. Do we forgive the Storyteller? Do we crucify him?"
    "Ladies and gentlemen," I said, sitting down, "the killing of a woman in a story is not good or bad per se. Believe me, the justification for the killing is that which will justify the fiction."
    "Mister, please speak to us clearly. We do not have your taste for parables."
    "Kill anybody you want," I said. "Just be ready with the moral."
    "Kill?" they all asked, flabbergastedly. "Kill? Did you say kill? You are saying it is all right to kill!"
    I'd throw my bet that they could have "killed" me more quickly than they would have their own chickens. Simply by stoning me there, armed solely with the solidity of their righteous angers. Though I'd just ascend to heaven.
    "No! It is not okay to kill!" I almost defended my position with rare divine nervousness.
    I went up to a rock for dramatic emphasis. I said, with cinematic, nay, theatrical gesturings, "It is okay to write of killing. You see, the point of fiction is not even a cousin to the point of reality. The one accomplishes philosophy through language, the latter philosophy through sleep."
    We were then gathered there beside the river 1993. Where everything I said was said. And all was goddam done, man.

 

 

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Cover Page | Acknowledgment | Abstract Souls ('a novella') | Alone | Archipelagic Short Stories Would Lead Us Nowhere | At The Funeral | Before Lunch | Bus | Dionysus | Di-Pinamagatan | Eating Eagles And Monkey, We Fly Across And | Finding Books | Out Of Season | Pleasure, Film, What, Has | Psychiatrist | Sincerely | The Primitive | Vexed | Who Cares For Markets | Bus 2 | Psychiatrist (Reprise) | AFTERWORD: Vicente Interviews Himself | About the Author


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