The Man I Want To Be


           First of all, the most important thing is the title. I called this "The Man I want to be." Which means that the actions of the lead character (the nameless guy) are actions that I believe should be the type of actions of a man of God and are actions that I myself would like to possess and potray.

           This story is also special in another way. And that is that I put several characteristics of myself into him so that he is very much like me. I am, by nature, I think, a rather caring person and would be willing ANYTIME (literally) to listen to someone who needs a listening ear. I put this into the story by having it take place at night and show him willing to come out at night to listen to her and show he cared.
           I also am a pretty shy person. Which, of course, is the main thing that seems to inhibit me from being able to live up to the lead character's standard. I showed this in the story by him passing her the first time. That is something I would probably have done. Passed by and prayed.. I probably wouldn't have had the guts to go up to her and give her my phone number and tell her to call me, though. That is the only thing that seperates me from what the lead character is.
           The whole phrase he says after hearing the beginning of the conversation ("I wish I knew what to say to help. I wish I knew what to do to help you. I wish I knew a way to ease your pain. But, the truth is, I know no way. I can't even say I understand, because I don't. But, I am here, and if a listening ear and caring arm will help, I'm here.") is a typical type of statement that I will make when I'm helping someone. Because I always know I cannot know what the pain is that they're going through, and that all pain I've experienced is nothing like what they're going through. And I always like to let them know that I care and will do anything I know how to help them.
           The last way he is like me is in the amount that he prays for someone. He prayed for her when he saw her in the hallway, and for the rest of the day. I am the same way. When I see someone struggling or see someone who looks like they need a friend (remember, I'm rather shy) I will always say a prayer for them.

           This story was written for 2 reasons. 1. to show the type of person that I really want to be to and 2. to show the type of man that I am. God bless you and if you'd like to reread the story after the acquired knowledge.. just click back..

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