Timeline of the Story...Timeline of the Story...
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7th December, 2000
17th March, 2001
Chapter 27 posted!
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I'll get to this later...:) Anyway, hope you enjoy the latest chapter!
Chapter 26 posted!
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Comments? Am I kind of cruel? Sadistic? What do you guys think of the final obstacle between Fei and Quin? I'm sorry I couldn't keep my promise about the "no more hospitals" thingie...I really didn't think I'll be using that bit. My original plot involves Ching Ching coming back with as a widow and with a baby(not Fei's, though) But I couldn't being myself to write about Ching Ching again, like I told you, if I have to write her again, I'll either scream, yell or jump into the lake.
I'm not trying to be sadistic here, but I thought this is a pretty good obstacle. A miscarriage is the worst thing that could happen to a woman. And there will be worst news resulting from Quin's miscarriage. To find out what it is, stay tuned.
As for the story of Chi San and Man, I think it's progressing pretty well, in MY opinion. It's turning out the way I want it to be.
If you readers have any views on both my plots, please leave me a note in the guestbook!
Chapter 25 posted!
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Well...wrapping up the case kinda soon, huh? :) I told you, I stink at writing cases, and the point I want to bring up is the conflict between Chi San and Man. Hence the murder case...well, it's solved! :p
Fei and Quin fans, cheering yet? I betcha! :) I had fun writing about their time together, and I have to say I'm really kinda satisfied about how it turned out...just hope all of you felt the same. But...fate has not yet done with them...or maybe it's more sufficient to say that June-Ling has not yet done with them...har har. Look out for the next obstacle Fei and Quin will have to endured in the next chapter. I can promise you that it's NOT any form of life-threatening disease.
This chapter is a bit longer than the usual ones, cos I got a little carried away while writing it...hehehe...anyway, I've planned to end my story at Chapter 30, but it looks like I'll end sooner than planned. Maybe around Chapter 27, 28...and I'll be inserting an epilogue to round things up. Thanks for supporting me all this while, and I hope you'll stick with me until the end of this story! Toodles!
Chapter 24 posted!
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I know, I know. I stink at writing criminal cases and mysteries. I pretty much admitted it myself. I bet you guys will be able to guess the murderer pretty easily. But I'm not focusing on the murder itself, though. I actually just wanted to bring up the issue of Man's past, that's all...you know, her being in jail previously and all. It will be quite interesting to expand on this particular obstacle between Man and Chi San. But tell me, is it boring?
Bear with me, bear with me...I think I'll probably have to make an about-face and swallow my own promises. On Fei and Quin's part of the story, I'm sorry, but...I'll have to bring in the dreaded...HOSPITAL!! *groan* I had hope to avoid it, but my idea and plot required it...:p. Anyway, I'll keep it very, very short, cos I'm not going to stress on the stupid hospital. It is the matter that is important.
Anyhow, hope you'll stay tuned!
P.S. About the new character in my story, Josh Chan Hau-Wah, I am lazy to think up an actor for him...anyway, he's a dead guy, remember!?!? Just envisioned whoever you like, and forgive my laziness...:)
Chapter 23 posted!
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Well, what do you guys think of this chapter? I guess you already guessed that Chi San and Man's obstacle is going to be about the murder. Also, what do you think of the way I settled things between Fei and Quin? I'm not really happy with the way I've written it, though. I've rewritten the part about 5 times, and finally settled for the one I posted...;)
As for the final obstacle between Fei and Quin, I've decided NOT to bring up Ching Ching again. I'm getting really sick of her. Their obstacle is going to something entirely different, and I kinda like what I had in mind now...hope you guys will be satisfied, too.
Leave me any comments in my dreambook!!!
Chapter 22 posted!
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Well, I really don't know what to say about this chapter of mine...it isn't one of my best works, I wrote this while stuck at an airport...so, do any of you think Quin's behaviour is kinda overeacting...I don't know. For me, I don't think so. (Hey, if I'd thought so, I wouldn't have written it.) Honesty in a relationship is very, very important. And frankly, Fei did lie. From my perspective, the thing about Ching Ching is really quite a big deal.
I already got the kind of ideas and plots I wanted, thanks to anyone and everyone that offered suggestions...anyway, just stay tuned...Fei and Quin's problems will be resolved soon enough, of course, Man and Chi San, and Man's secret. I don't want to say much, if anything, you can either e-mail me or leave me a note in the guestbook.
Chapter 21 posted!
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Okay, okay. So the part about Chi San and Man's reunion was, to put it frankly, illogical. You might say, "whatttt!?! How can Tong Sum come back...blah blah blah..." but then again, hey, this is just fiction. Anything can happen. Besides, there ARE sightings of angels proven to be true, you know. (That clears up another point, in my story, Tong Sum is an angel, and NOT a ghost) Hey, I've seen such a plot in a movie before! :) Anyway, I know it wasn't too good, I admit it myself, but I was so sick of writing about self-guilt, loyalty, blah blah...(and I bet you are sick of reading about it, too) I just HAVE to do something about Man and Chi San. Hey, on a perspective, Tong Sum-as-an-angel IS acceptable. Obstacles still lay ahead for them, so don't rejoice too soon, Man and Chi San fans!
Okay, back to Fei and Quin. The first hurdle is coming up. Yup, the Ching Ching thing. Most of you is probably going to kill me for bringing up Ching Ching again, but please, bear with me! She was the greatest conflict in Fei and Quin's relationship, and she always will be. I thought it was really one thing I can really expand on. The first hurdle is going to be a short, minor one, the huge one was yet to come. But PLEASE don't yell at me for bringing back Ching Ching. She won't have any major part, just her presence, okay? Well, whatever...you guys can always leave me notes and comments in my Dreambook or e-mail me personally.
Chapter 20 posted!
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Either you're going to kill me, or scream at the sight of reading about YET another hospital scene. Believe me, I'm getting tired of it myself. But it seems to be that's the most plausible way of Quin regaining her memory. I promise, no more hospitals! At least, on Fei and Quin's part. I can't promise about Chi San and Man.
So, Fei and Quin fans, happy now? They are back together after a whammy to Quin's memory. BUT...remember the unsettled issue of Ching Ching. Just let me remind you, Quin hasn't regained 100% of her memory. When she remembers, there's going to be another story to tell. And please, don't kill me for another obstacle(s). Just let me tell the story my way! If you find any loose ends, you can feel free to comment.
The story of Chi San and Man! I think I can progress it somehow, and make it more interesting! Just stay tuned!
Chapter 19 posted!
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Personally, not too happy about the way this chapter turned out. I'm not satisfied, but then again, I can't think of a better way to write it. The part about Tong Sum in Man's dream was really kinda stupid. But I can't think of a better way for Man to realise what she has to realise.
4 people had e-mailed me, stating their surprise over the turn of events in relation to Quin's amnesia. They had thought I'll make Quin start all over again with Fei, and NOT make Quin stay away from Fei. Well, life's full of surprises! I have thought about both plots, and finally I decided on the one I have written. It will be easier for me to continue on with the rest of my storyline.
*Man's Dream of Tong Sum* idea credit given to Jung Thanks for the idea!
Chapter 18 posted!
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Quin still remained in an amnesiac state. Just a note, she wouldn't snap out of it as fast as you hope, and as fast as I myself hoped. I will just continue writing the story along my carefully planned-out map. But I can assure you I won't let Quin remain "duh" for like, 10 chapters. :) While writing this chapter, I tried to make the situation hard for Fei and Quin to get together again. Quin doesn't remember who the heck he is! How can they have any kind of relationship? Just stay posted!
I still needed ideas on the Man-Chi-San plot. Please e-mail me with your ideas!
Chapter 17 posted!
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Boy, am I going to get punched for this! Most of the fans are dying to read about Fei and Quin's reunion, so why is this stupid author writing about Quin with amnesia anyway!??! Actually, I just want to write about another test of the love of Fei and Quin. Can they endure this obstacle? But just hang on to your seats, I will be writing about and Fei-Quin reunion very, very soon. But who said that reunion will mean end of the story? There's still a lot for me to tell...:> Anyway, I didn't have an easy time writing this chapter. Part of me was worrying about the hate mail I'll receive. Hehehe...on a serious note, it WAS hard writing this chapter. I thought so long and so hard about Quin's amnesia.
Some readers have e-mailed and asked me when am I going to end the story. Well, I have planned to make it about 30-plus chapters. As for the time, depends on my mood of writing.
Once again, I appeal for the help of readers. It is for YOU to decide the outcome of Man and Chi San. Please leave suggestions in the guestbook or E-MAIL me and tell me! I'm eager to hear about all creative ideas!
Chapter 16 posted!
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I had quite a time thinking how to write Fei and Ching Ching's break-up. In the previous chapter, I had written about Ching Ching wanting to see Fei, so in this chapter, I wrote about Ching Ching telling it to Fei face to face. I had thought about making Ching Ching just leave without saying anything, but then again, somethings are better to be said and sorted.
So, Man and Chi San are back in the story. No doubt some of you might be sick reading about their self-guilt, but do bear with me for a while! I hadn't really thought about how to progress their relationship...quite stupid, huh? I created a conflict...but how to get over it? The wheels in my brain are still turning in meantime.
So, if any of you have any ideas to progress the Man-Chi-San story, do E-MAIL me and tell me! I'll be sure to give you the credit for the plot!
Chapter 15 posted!
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So, am I killing off Ching Ching kinda fast? Maybe, maybe not. Depends on you readers! But for me, I think I can stop writing about her. After all, I don't think I have the mood to write about a whining, unreasonable and irritating Ching Ching to moon around Fei with Quin in a coma. No offense! Anyway, isn't it nice BOTH Ching Ching and Fei came to their senses? Even though it took a tragedy for them to stop being stupid...
Chapter 14 posted!
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Most of you are probably going to kill me for creating YET another obstacle for Fei and Quin. But, trust me, I know what I am doing! So, why did I make Quin get shot, anyway? Love at its best. It may seem cliche and boring, girl loves guy, girl dies for guy, blah blah...but to me, I think life is the most precious gift one can ever give. Quin's love for Fei is so strong, she didn't even think twice about getting sacrificed for him. Like I said, love at its best.
Chapter 13 posted!
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In this chapter, I revealed the past of my villian, John Wang Kei-Chung. Is it a plausible past? I honestly don't know. What do YOU think? A guy, out from prison, changed his name, and can become a tremendous business success? You may ask me, err...isn't that a little stupid and unbelievable? Well, I can't think of anything better, cos I want to stress the fact that John had tried to pull this kind of stunt before. But since I mentioned that he set up his own company and all, perhaps, it is STILL believable. Anyhow, I want to make him seemed nuts, too, like, I quote Gigi from my story: "A raving, insane lunatic." A complete physco. Hey, only someone nuts can carry out such a plan! :p I wasn't too pleased with this chapter, but...I've written worse stuff!
Chapter 12 is up...
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I thought long and hard while writing this chapter. The question is: WHY is Quin kidnapped? I had to make up a convincing reason, right? And as mentioned in Foreword, I totally stink at writing mysteries. So, I went for the jealous ex reason. A bit clique, I know, but let's face it, there are worse reasons. The kidnapping was a tough bit. Why, when, where, how...all those questions. Anyhow, I managed to produce something...
Chapter 11 posted...
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So, I added a dark twist to the story. Why is Quin kidnapped? All of you may be curious to know...but, I don't intend to give away the story this early! :) When I first got the idea, I thought long and hard about it, what can I develop from Quin's kidnapping? Anyhow, I do know how to make use of this incident...not saying anything! :) As for that part about Fei and Ching Ching, I only wanted him to feel more and more guilty, as to create a conflict.
Chapter 10 posted...
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People has e-mailed me a lot, asking about the part Ching Ching yelled at Quin. So, why did I write that? To make Ching Ching seemed like an insecure woman, afraid and scared that Fei will leave her. I don't intend for you to hate Ching Ching, although I do admit this particular "Ching Ching the hated witch" effect has on readers. Actually, I wanted to portray Ching Ching's insecurity and her lack of confidence towards Fei, and the sacred little girl inside her. As for the little part at the end, I admit it was a little stupid, but I couldn't resist myself to make Fei feel jealous, once again, of Chi San and Quin's friendship.
One reader, Adelyn, has a very interesting question: Ching Ching, as portrayed in the show, is a very strong character. So why is she insecure? Well, my answer is, people DO change and changes all the time. I made the Ching Ching in my story seemed insecure because she lost her leg, her career, and her dream. To her, Fei was all she has left, and that's why she clinged to him so tightly and refused to let go, even when she knew his heart wasn't with her anymore. And knowing that Quin was the one in Fei's heart, naturally, she hated Quin.
Chapter 9 posted...
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Wow, I had a really tough time writing this chapter! To create an emotional heartbreak is definitely not easy! Life is not as simple as it seems. Two people in love cannot be together, because they have to think of others, or in this case, just one other. Even after Fei and Quin shared a beautiful night together, it only shattered their hearts, when they came back to reality. This, for me, is intended to be an emotional chapter.
Chapter 8 finished...
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In this chapter, I want to emphasize Chi San and Fei's friendship, and the bond they share, hence the scene in Chez Maman. As for the rest of the chapter, I concentrated on writing about Quin and Fei, the love they share, the strong love that exists between two characters.
Double chapters update, Chapter 6 and Chapter 7
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In Chapter 6, I cleared up Fei and Chi San's misunderstanding. I intend to make theirs a solid best-friend friendship, for in times of need, a friend is truly important to us. Fei also made a decision, yet again, between Ching Ching and Quin. His decision was a painful one, one he didn't even tell his best friend. Not knowing that, Chi San set up Fei and Quin, but only made things more awkward. For Chi San as well, when he saw Man. He wasn't expecting to see her, and that was the element of surprise.
In Chapter 7, Ching Ching and Fei's relationship continue to deteoriate, owing to Fei's unforgettable love for Quin. As for Man, her old memories of days with Chi San came back, and she wasn't so sure that she was over Chi San anymore. Why did I write that? Just a step towards the story of Chi San and Man! To reassure herself, Man met Chi San, and told him, indirectly, that she only wanted to be friends, and nothing more. I tried my best to portray Man's indecision in this chapter.
Chapter 5 was up...
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In Chapter 5, I attempt to colour the rosy picture of Fei and Ching Ching's relationship, by inserting the memory of Quin and the coffee cake. I also portrayed the special friendship Chi San and Quin shared, hence Chi San's great concern for her. I thought it would be funny for Fei to be jealous, although I don't intend to make it permenant.
Chapter 4 available for reading...
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I made Fei and Quin met in Chapter 3. So, in Chapter 4, I thought of ways for them to deal with each other. In the end, I decided that a passive Quin was the best idea, this way, I can make my story progess along the way. I also inserted in Man's return to Hong Kong, and how she developed a closer friendship with Quin. I had an easy time writing this chapter!
The Continuation: A DIF5 Love Story was officially launched. On this day, I have prepared Prologue, Chapter 1, Chapter 2, and Chapter 3 for all readers.
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When I decided to write this story, I decided that it had to be GOOD. I had a tough time planning a rough sketch of my story. How I want it to be, the setting, characters, the main plot etc...It wasn't easy writing the first few chapters. I've thought of many ways to write Fei and Quin's meeting after 2 years, for it has to be something plausible and realistic. And how can I make Man re-enter the scene? Finally, I managed to produce something to my satisfaction. I could only hope for improvement along the way!
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