By: Onyinye Akujuo
The Criticisms of Period 6


Introduction
Hello Ms. Mayo and my fellow Period 6 peers. As you know this is critiscism page. It is not to be used against you but to help you. I created this page because ever since Ms. Mayo awarded me WebSite of the Day I felt it was my upmost duty to help all you guys achieve the wonderful gift of home page building like I have.
Our dear students my criticisms have arrived.........
Students
Emily Pangan
Hello Em, kudos to your web page, the jumping Pooh Bear is a 10!, but I felt that you should have read the book and then get to your color of water memoir. Oh well at least you were honest! On your wired page I also gave you a 10.I loved the background purple is todays color and I feel you are right. What does the world come down to today when the seniors don't know how to act when they get such a good class like this.Emily overall your page is really nice. You re a good buddy.
Overall Score:8.5
Lisa Scully
Hi Lisa, I read your story about how to make Oats Cereal, Three words Lis, I understand babe. My parents make me do things because I am the oldest right now.I give you a 9. It is really good but you should finish. Your racism page is great I give it a 10. I also feel racism will still be the year 2050.Your page for when I was Puerto Rican is a major success. I gave you a 10.Your wired page is very honest. I understand that this class was hard because of all that coding but look on the bright side your page is the best so far.
Overall Score:10
Patrice Burgher
Hi Patrice!!!, I read your "What it like having a interactive classroom". I am sorry Lisa ,screw your page, Patrice has the best so far. You basically used descriptives to decribe your page. You are also honest and I feel you have distinguished yourself amongst everyone in the class becasue you have added all your links to the end of your page. You deserve a round of applause. I read your color of water page, I think your page is very nice. You get a perfect 10. I can't say no more.
Overall Score:10+
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