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Author: Rising Sun

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Rated: G

Summary: Mac’s POV using commercials.

Spoilers: People vs Rabb, Soul Searching, Goodbyes, JAG-A-THON

Classification: Romance: Harm/Mac

Disclaimer: JAG characters portrayed belong to JAG, CBS and Paramount Television. No copyright infringement intended.  All other characters depicted are purely fictional and any similarities to actual people are purely coincidental.  That goes for all commercials featured here.

 

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We interrupt the JAG debate for this commercial break

 

Also known as

For the sake of a commercial…

Story written – April 27, 2002

 

Spoilers: People vs Rabb, Soul Searching, Goodbyes, JAG-A-THON

 

Getting Harm off a charge of murder = $500.00 per hour.

Helping him buy an SUV = $20,000.00

Taking care of his plants = $0.00

Beating him at JAG-A-THON = $0.00

Harm saying I LOVE YOU = priceless

 

For everything else there’s MasterCard.

 

We now return you to the JAG list…

 

 

Title: Texas

Story written – April 27, 2002

 

Harm and Mac were chasing a killer. They had had to abandon their vehicle and follow the man on foot through thick bush bordering on jungle.

 

“When this is done I need me a steak.” Mac announced.

 

“You would.” Harm chuckled. “What I’d like is a bath.”

 

“You’d need it.” She replied.

 

“You trying to tell me something Marine?”

 

They crested the hill and suddenly there was the city.  Mac looked at the jungle behind her and the concrete jungle facing her and drawled.

 

“Things are sure different in Texas!”

 

 

Title: Ahhh... the power of cheese (revisited)

Story written – April 27, 2002

 

Mac and Sturgis entered her office where she was greeted by a bouquet of roses. She read the card and smiled.

 

“Anyone I know?” Sturgis was dying of curiosity.

 

“Oh yes.” She teased.

 

“Not Harm!” He was truly shocked.

 

“Oh yes” She repeated.

 

“What did you put in his coffee?” he accused.

 

“I didn’t give him coffee.” She cooed, “I gave him cheese.”

 

NARRATOR: Ahhh... the power of cheese.

 

 

STATIC

Story written May 2, 2002

 

AT THE MALL

 

Mac spotted the CIA clone and headed straight for him hauling Harm all the way.  She tapped the trench-coated man on the shoulder.  He turned.

 

Mac handed him Harm’s cell phone “I’ve had it.” She said. “He’s been calling me all day about gloves. I need your glove. My glove is to much for me there is enough for two etc. etc. etc.”

 

“Static ma’am” the man spoke in a flat tone.

 

“Damn straight. Fix it!” She ordered.

 

“Sir.” The man informed Harm “You need to change to Sprint.”

 

“That way she’ll hear LOVE and not GLOVE?” he asked.

 

“Yes sir.” The man continued in a monotone.

 

“Love?” She gasped.

 

“Four thousand minutes for $39.99” The man campaigned.  “What price love?”

 

“Love?” Mac repeated.

 

 

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