Wow......this is the start of a amazing story. The character sounds pure evil. Dilandau better watch out!^_~. I think this is a very neat start for another great fiction and I hope you will enjoy it as much as I did!

Evil Walks the Vione
Prologue

By RoseWater345

Authors Note: Hey!! I was in the mood to write a kind of scary, funny, love type fic!! This was kind of taken from the Movie The Good Son if you haven’t seen that movie I STRONGLY recommend it!!

I don’t own ANYTHING close to Escaflowne! =( I do own the plot and Maile Grey(Krys)!! I really hope you enjoy this fic and I would REALLY like a few reviews!!! Peace out!! =)

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A young girl of age seven was sitting on her father’s knee as he told her a story.
"You see Maile? That’s why we have to slay dragons." Devin, Her father, said.
"But that’s REALLY mean. I can’t believe we do that." Her hands formed into two fists in her lap. Maile’s mother stepped through the kitchen door holding her baby brother, Brad.
"All right you two that’s enough of that dinner’s ready." Her mother said walking back into the kitchen. Maile jumped off her father’s knee.
"YEAH!!" She yelled running into the kitchen.
The Krys family all sat down at the table at their usual spots. Her mother walked over to the stove and brought two plates back and gave one to Devin.
"Mmmm. Looks good honey." Devin kissed Geslin’s cheek.
"Thank-you, dear." She set the other plate in front of Brad. She brought two more out. Put one in from of her spot then gave Maile her plate, ..last. Mail shot Brad a dirty look.
"Now, Now, Maile." Her mother said.
"Sorry, Mom." Maile said. She began to eat her dinner.

~~>THAT NIGHT<~~

Brad was in the bathtub for his evening bath. His mom walked out of the room. Brad was splashing around in the water. Maile walked in. Bra smiled and did a little baby laugh when he saw her. he was always happy to see her. She walked up to the bathtub. Her brother splashed her.
"You, Bastard." She said. She put her hand on the back of his neck. He wasn’t sure what she was doing. She pushed his head forward pushing his face into the water. He was trying to get his head up to breath. But Maile wouldn’t let him.
"Die. Die right now!" Maile said quietly but yet strong.
She watched at her brother died right there. He stopped moving. She left the room as fast as she could. Her mother walked into the bathroom. She saw her dead son in the bathtub. Maile heard her mother scream. A evil smile crossed Maile’s face. Not her usual angelic smile. Her mother picked Brad up. His face was blue, his lips were no longer pink, his heart stopped, and of course his pulse was gone. Brad was dead. Devin ran into the bathroom and saw his wife holding their dead son. He ran to the window in the hall and yelled for help since on Gaea you don’t have phones.
When the Paramedics arrived it was WAY to late. Brad was dead and Geslin and Devin were in tears. Maile didn’t care. At least that bastard was out of the way. She would get the attention now. She didn’t know now everything was going to go wrong.

~~>!THE NEXT NIGHT!<~~

Maile was laying in her bed. She was listening to her parents arguing. She heard a door open then slam shut. She ran to her window and saw her dad walking away.
"That’s it! I’m not going to be nice anymore!" Maile smiled her now evil smile. Which people will now see A LOT of.

~~>WHEN MAILE WAS 13!<~~

In Zaibach you are legally an adult at age 13. So know Maile was on her own. Her mother was ill and in a hospital in Fenalia. So now Maile made some decisions of her own. She took her beautiful long mid back brown hair and took a sword and cut it so it was shoulder length brown and choppy. She dyed the bottom half of her hair rose red. She got her belly button pierced and wore nothing but black, red, and other dark colors. She taught her self black magic. Her powers became so strong she could kill a person with a single touch. She also changed her last name to Grey.
"Look out Gaea. Here I come. I hope your ready." She clenched her fist and laughed her insane evil laugh that would give anyone nightmares.

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