April 18, 2000

Here is a copy of my screenplay for my short film.  I begin filming Friday.  If you haven't read a screenplay before remember it only tells you what the camera sees.  Also, I have this journal set up in a set style so it won't print this out right...but you get the picture.
 

The Doghouse
A screenplay by:
Blissley Bythewaye's Creator
 

Fade up from black

Ext:  Bus Stop  Mid -day

A young man, Garret, walks down a sidewalk in a business area.  He carries a bouquet of red roses and a book bag.  He comes to a bus stop bench and sits down to wait.

At the bench a mature gentleman, Jason, sits holding a bouquet of roses also.  He casually notices Garret as he sits down.

Jason

You in the dog house?

Garret

Yeah

Jason

What did you do?

Garret

Uh.  Well.  My wife wanted me to go shopping with her…

 Jason

You hold her purse?

 Garrett

Yeah.

Jason
(nods)

And then…
 

Garret

She asked me if I thought those pants made her butt look big…

Jason

You didn’t.

Garrett

I did.

Jason
(laughing)

Oh man!

 Garrett

Well--- she asked.

 Jason

There’s no right answer to that question.  Your best bet is to stall and hope a sales person will bail you out.  Then excuse yourself and run like hell to power tools where you will be safe.

Garret

Well I wish I had known that.

Jason

Things been pretty rough at home?

Garret

Yeah.  She won’t talk to me.  She slams doors and drawers.  And she keeps the bedroom locked at night.

Jason

Well I’m not so sure roses alone are gonna do the trick.

Garret

Oh I thought of that already!

Garrett reaches in his pocket and pulls out a jewelry case and shows Jason.

Garret

Cubic Zerconia!
 

Jason looks at the jewelry and then to Garrett and snickers.

Jason

Maybe she’ll cut you some slack for being new at this.

Jason hands the box back to Garrett.

Garret

You think?

Jason

Yeah the combination of the two will get you off the couch.

A few minutes pass.

Garret

What are you in for?

Jason

Me?  (laughs)  Oh I’m not in the doghouse.

Jason then gets serious faced to deliver his favorite joke.

Jason

In fact I haven’t spoken to my wife in two weeks.

Garret

Really?  How come?

Jason

I didn’t want to interrupt her.

Garret

I walked right into that one.

Jason

But really, I’ve had my share of nights on the sofa.  When Nancy and I were first married she had her folks over for dinner.  She made rolls for the first time.  They turned out hard and flat.  So after dinner her dad and I took turns skimming them off the pond.  That got me a week of cold shoulders.

Garret

What did you do?

Jason

That’s when I discovered that a bouquet of flowers covered a multitude of sins.

Garret

Well I hope they work for me.

Jason

Oh they will.  (pause)  I also discovered that surprising her with flowers for no reason always had extra benefits for me.

Garrett

Oh yeah?

Jason
(a sly smile)

Oh yeah.

Garret

Oh yeah!

Both men chuckle knowingly.

Jason

So after the kids left home, I just got into the habit of bringing her flowers.   (looks to the flowers) I still do.

Garret

Here comes the bus.

Both men stand, gather belongings, get out bus fare and look towards the right down the street.
 
 

         Cut to
Ext:  Small House  Mid day

Garrett carries his roses.  He walks down a sidewalk to the front door of a small house.  As he fumbles for his keys, the front door opens.

Amanda opens the front door and steps out onto the porch.  She leans up against the house.  She wipes her hand on a dishtowel she holds.  Then she folds her arms across her chest.
 

Amanda

Flowers huh?

Garret

Yeah.

Amanda

Let me guess.  The card is to Mrs Fat Ass.

Amanda takes the flowers.

Garret

Oh Amanda.  You know I don’t think that.

Amanda
(remains sullen)

Garret

Here.  I got you this too.  Amanda, I am so sorry.

Garret hands Amanda the box.  She looks at it and fingers the jewelry.  She looks at him and it is hard to keep from smiling.

Amanda
( reluctantly letting go of her anger)

Oh come on in.  I just made my first attempt at rolls.  They are just about ready to come out of the oven.

Amanda turns and goes in the house.

Garret pauses to think about what Amanda has said about the rolls.

Garret

You did?  They are?

Garret breathes deeply and goes in the house.

         Cut to:
Ext:  Cemetery  Mid-day

Jason carries his roses.  He walks over to a cemetery head stone.  He stoops, brushed some leaves away and then lays the flowers down.  He sits on a marble bench besides the grave.

Fade to black.
 
 
 
 
 
 


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