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___________ April 16, 1999 CST #120 of 122 (criticism of the
lack of punctuation and double negatives in the
above, deleted for lack of permission to reprint)
tomcoleman - 01:02pm Apr 16, 1999 CST (#121 of 122)
!,.:;'-"? a fraction of the punctuation I would be pleased to
provide if I determined where it belonged and was so
inclined while I wrote and chose to illucidate, mate, but,
sometimes obscurity is preferred or else puNctuatioN slows
down the flow the burst despite the curses of the reader
trying to grasp what can make a flash in the pan but the
words carry on so long and yes we have no bananas them old
no we aints can provide a mood indicate a looseness of
speech a failing to maintain the King's English is perchance
indicative of the anarchy of the mind or the failing of the
synapses- the willingness to let it out just as it
comes to mind Nietsche ain't got nothing on me,__ , I'm not
about to go mad these thoughts are let loose with little in
the way of gray matter chasing after them sometimes the mood
is fleeting and. Man, I'm sorry if my flailing is seen as
failing,___ , but thats where its at baby!!!!!(Is this
enough punctation for you, my man(?), if that be what you
is!?
tomcoleman - 01:14pm Apr 16, 1999 CST (#122 of 122)
The above seems hostile
when really I'm fine
with the comments you offer
- some are helpful.
& I take it as some form of praise
that you bother to comment,
so, thank you.