Fred's Adventure The doorbell rang. He went down stairs to open the door, and there she was: the girl of his dreams. His mouth fell down. She said, "Hi." He just stared. She said, "Would you like to go to the dance with me?" He said "Yyyess." She said, "Good, pick me up at 9:00. See ya." Fred said, "Ssee yya."

At 9:00, he went to pick her up. She laughed in his face and said, "You thought I would go to a dance with you?!" She slammed the door.

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