Looking Through the Smoke in
"Sonny's Blues"
Robert A. Berens
James Baldwin's story of redemption
and musical epiphany is filled with gritty realism and thematic uses of music
and imagery. One of the strongest themes throughout the story is the use of
cigarette smoking as a symbol of interpersonal barriers and depravity. The
specific act of smoking not only provides substance to a number of characters
within the story, but also symbolizes the dishonesty and unapproachable nature
of each particular smoker. Likewise, each time a cigarette is tossed away or
extinguished, the act is accompanied by brutal honesty and revelation.
Cigarette smoke, then, exists as a character in the story rather than a mere
byproduct of another habitual vice.
As the cliché phrase "smoke screen"
suggests, the presence and creation of smoke are a character's subconscious way
of distancing him or herself from others within the story. Nearly every scene
depicts a character in the act of smoking, particularly when confronted with
difficult dialogue or when attempting to hide his or her feelings. When the
narrator first learns of Sonny's arrest, he immediately encounters a former
associate of his brother's. After learning through his narration how angry and
contemptuous the narrator feels toward this shady character, "...now,
abruptly, I hated him" (75), it becomes apparent how further irritated he
is by the boy's smug manner. His reply to the boy's "repulsive" grin
is to effectively disassociate himself from him through a wall of cigarette
smoke: "I offered him a cigarette and I watched him through the
smoke" (75). It is as if the unsavory drug addict and his irritating
familiarity with the narrator's brother are only tolerable through this
protective veil.
The boy is aided by the smoke in a
different manner. Through his "smoke screen," he is able to deceive
the narrator regarding the fate of his brother. He retains the cigarette as a
means by which he can skirt the issue of what is to become of Sonny. At this
point, the boy becomes openly honest only as he finishes the cigarette:
"’Maybe he'll even think he's kicked the habit. Then they'll let him
loose’ -- he gestured, throwing his cigarette into the gutter. ‘That's
all.’" (77). With that disposable gesture, it is as if the boy is either
able to or can't help telling the painful truth.
Baldwin's narrator, feeling his
mother's burden of protector and keeper of his little brother, seems to have
always utilized this strategic and subliminal defense mechanism. As the
reminiscent order of the narrative shows, this is a device that has been used
by Sonny and his older brother throughout their relationship. Following the
death of their mother, the first time that the older brother must act out her
request, the conversation between him and Sonny is punctuated by the lighting
and smoking of cigarettes. Beginning openly and honestly, the brothers discuss
Sonny's future plans. When Sonny suggests that he dreams of being a musician,
tension is created between the two. The narrator, feeling that his authority is
being questioned and threatened, displays a tone of condescension, imploring
Sonny to "Be serious". He further preaches to his defensive little
brother: "Well, you may think it's funny now, baby, but it's not going to
be so funny when you have to make your living at it, let me tell you that"
(84). His lack of understanding and parental chiding increase the unease
between them, and, almost as if on cue, the cigarettes appear.
At Sonny's mention of one of his
favorite Jazz musicians, his older brother is bemused and lights a cigarette
while smugly quipping, " 'You'll have to be patient with me. Now. Who's
this Parker character?' 'He's just one of the greatest jazz musicians alive,'
said Sonny, sullenly, his hands in his pockets, his back to [the narrator]"
(85). As the narrator creates his protective screen, behind which he is able to
dole out authoritarian advice, Sonny further distances himself by literally
turning his back. Possibly recognizing his error, the narrator attempts to
rationalize with his brother asking, "Doesn't all this take a lot of
time?" (85). The emotional damage, however, has been done.
Sonny responds: "He stopped at
the kitchen table and picked up my cigarettes" (86), ironically not with
just any cigarettes but the very ones which the narrator uses to create his own
impenetrable veil of smoke. Testing his "courage to smoke in front of [the
narrator]," he questions the very integrity of his supposed guardian (86).
Sonny turns the tide of the conversation, inquiring about his older brother's youthful
activities, "Come on, now. I bet you was smoking at my age, tell the
truth" (86). Grinning defensively at having his dreams of Jazz discounted,
he jabs his elder where he is most sensitive. He threatens to join the army,
which is his brother's worst fear. When the narrator is able to ground him with
the mention of school, the honesty returns, as Sonny relinquishes his cigarette
and begins to reveal what is happening to him there.
There is a notable change in Sonny's
and the conversation's tone at this point. Sonny's mood becomes remarkably
somber, and through his uncharacteristically serious comments, he reveals the
very root of his problem. He implies that he feels trapped and helpless,
accented by his discarding of the cigarette. The narrator remembers:
"I ain't learning nothing in
school," he said. "Even when I go."
He turned away from me and opened the window and threw his cigarette out into
the narrow alley. I watched his back. "At least, I ain't
learning nothing you'd want me to learn." He slammed the window so hard I
thought the glass would fly out, and turned back to me. "And I'm sick of
the stink of these garbage cans!" (86)
Sonny's desperation and awareness of
his fate surface as he flicks his cigarette symbolically into the alley below.
Landing amid the "stink of [the] garbage cans", the fading source of
enveloping smoke seems to remind Sonny of the inescapable street, "black
and funky and cold," that he is resigned to (92).
Later, the narrator witnesses the
depravity of the street firsthand while watching a tambourine revival meeting
that takes place below the window of Sonny's room. As the revivalists dance and
sing praise, he notices the contrasting element of "street" people
who are unable to be moved by the joyful noise. Again, the appearance and
mannerisms of cigarette smoking are used to describe some of the more detached,
unmoved spectators: "The barbecue cook, wearing a dirty white apron, ...
and a cigarette between his lips, stood in the doorway, watching them"
(89). Baldwin's narrator continues to observe the cold reaction from some of
the street members-- "Neither did they especially believe in the holiness
of the three sisters and the brother"-- and the seemingly small degree of
enlightenment that separates the revivalists from them: "The woman with
the tambourine, whose voice dominated the air, whose face was bright with joy,
was divided by very little from the woman who stood watching her, a cigarette
between her heavy, chapped lips..." (90). The narrator observes the
changing effect that the music has on one particular bystander: "The
barbecue cook half shook his head and smiled, and dropped his cigarette and
disappeared into his joint" (90). Ironically, he spots Sonny among the
crowd "very faintly smiling, standing very still" without the
habitual cigarette (90). The remarkable air of peace that he gets from the
music is even further portrayed as he appears in the house to invite his older
brother to accompany him that evening. In the absence of smoke, in the soothing
atmosphere of the revival's musical redemption, there is a comfortable
understanding between the two.
It is in this figuratively "smoke
free" environment that the two final scenes of revelation take place.
Somehow finally able to communicate, Sonny explicitly describes to his brother
the need to play music, and its relevant similarity to his drug addiction. The
narrator begins to realize Sonny's plight, and arrives at a moment of
understanding and forgiveness:
I wanted to say more, but I couldn't. I wanted to talk about will
power and how life could be -- well, beautiful. I wanted to say that it was all
within; but was it? or rather, wasn't that exactly the trouble? And I wanted to
promise that I would never fail him again. But it would all have sounded
--empty words and lies. (92)
Recognizing his
lack of compassion, the narrator ultimately sees Sonny's implicit humanity.
Thus, when accompanying him to the nightclub "[squeezing] through the
narrow, chattering, jam-packed bar to the entrance" with "all that
atmospheric lighting," it is interesting to note that nowhere in the
description of the setting is the mention of smoke (94). With the brothers' new
understanding of one another, the smoke literally fades, and even in a barroom
atmosphere it is unnoticeable to the narrator as he observes "Sonny's
world. Or, rather: his kingdom" (94).
Baldwin's story of "Sonny's
Blues," the story of ultimate salvation, ends in a very clear field of
vision. Having finally been able to comprehend and accept one another, the
smoke between the brothers dissipates, and clarity is reached. The narrator
passively observes Sonny's musical triumph. Baldwin achieves the greatest
effect by first allowing the reader to view life through the cloudy film of his
characters' lives. Each of their personal withdrawals and withholdings of
emotion is accented by their communication through this seemingly perpetual
smoke. When Baldwin clears the air, in a literary sense, at the conclusion of
the story, there is a very real, refreshing feeling of honesty and openness
that might not have been achieved without the integral part that cigarette
smoke plays throughout. It is this masterful device that allows the reader to
almost unconsciously experience the discomfort of the murky discord and the
comfort of resolution. When "the smoke is cleared," the reader can
not only observe but also experience and feel.
Work Cited
Baldwin, James.
"Sonny's Blues." The Story and Its Writer: An Introduction to
Short Fiction.
Comp. Ann
Charters. Fourth Edition. Boston: Bedford, 1995. 74 - 97.