Cover Letters and Other Business Letters

1. Writing a Cover Letter

Cover letters are an essential component of the job-search process; however, many letters are poorly written, thus affecting the chances of obtaining a position.

Your resume provides a general summary and description of your experience to date, but it alone generally will not suffice as a personal statement of your interest in a specific job or field. Therefore, whenever you are inquiring about opportunities in an organization, it is important to write a letter of application or interest to accompany your resume. Although it is a good idea to direct each cover letter to a specific individual or organization, you may be able to develop one or two basic model letters that can be used for several different organizations within a general field. When writing a merge letter, make sure the test addresses the qualifications for the job. Many students err by sending inappropriate or "form" cover letters.

You will want to send cover letters and resumes to:

  • people with whom you could talk informally, to learn more about a field, and who could assist you in your search, even if you are not interested in their particular organization;
  • organizations recruiting on campus, to express particular interest prior to their visit;
  • organizations not recruiting on campus for which you would like to work.

In most cases, cover letters should be brief and to the point - three to five paragraphs on one page. If you are serious about an organization and have done considerable research on it, you might want to make the letter longer. Although there is not one best format, you should include several basic points:

  • introduce yourself, describing your student status and expressing your interest in internship and/or permanent positions;
  • indicate, as specifically as possible, why that particular organization is of interest to you and why you think it should be interested in you;
  • discuss aspects of your education and/or experience (referring to your enclosed resume) that you feel would be significant to that organization. Make specific reference to your follow-up ("I will call your office next week.").

Always direct your letter to a particular individual, such as the primary contact or to someone who has the authority to hire you. For private sector companies, look for a vice-president in the area in which you are interested; directories such as Standard & Poor's and annual reports will often provide a name. On the public and non-profit side, look for program managers, staff directors, and the like; use the Government Organization Manual and agency files, etc. Articles in periodicals can also provide names of key people as well as an indication of what departments of an organization are expanding, changing, merging, etc.

In general, it is not a good idea to write only to the personnel or college relations departments. Your letter is less likely to reach someone who would be interested in hiring you. The major exceptions to this statement are those organizations that have extensive recruitment programs coordinated through these offices, such as those that will be represented in campus interviews, or others that have advertised an internship program. Even in these areas, feel free to write another letter directly to someone in the office or department that interests you.

There are several general reference works in most libraries that contain sample cover letter formats that might be helpful. It is a good idea to get a friend, faculty member, or staff member to review your draft of a model letter before you send it out.

2. Tips on Writing a Cover Letter

  • Each letter of application should be original, typed in business form on a standard-sized paper and directed to a particular individual by name and title, preferably to the person who has the authority to hire you.
  • Your letter should serve as an introduction to your resume. Draw attention to a particular skill or accomplishment that has meaning to the organization. Its inclusion in the cover letter communicates that the writer has researched the organization, knows the organization's needs and can fulfill those needs. Limit your letter to a few paragraphs. If you have done considerable research on an organization, you may want to make the letter longer.
  • Use simply, direct language and proper grammar. Clearly state why the organization is of interest to you. Let your letter reflect your personality, but avoid appearing too aggressive or humorous.
  • Close with a statement that indicates some action - preferably yours. Your control the communication when you indicate that you will call the reader's office to set up an appointment at a convenient time rather than to wait for the reader to contact you.
  • Proofread your letters for errors! Keep copies of all correspondence.

3. Tips for Writing a Letter Following an Interview

  • Express your appreciation for the interviewer's time.
  • Mention the position and the date on which you were interviewed.
  • Reaffirm your interest in the position and state what in particular attracts you to the job and firm.
  • Highlight the qualifications that you think particular suit you to the position.
  • Indicate any further research you may have done since the interview, such as a discussion with alumni and faculty members or reading of periodicals.
  • Close by stating your availability for further discussions.
  • If you were interviewed by more than one person, letters ideally should be sent to all. If that is not feasible, write to the person who has the power to hire you. Indicate in that letter your appreciation of the time given you by the other interviewers.
  • A letter should also be sent if, after the interview, you are no longer interested in the position. Be sure to express appreciation of the interviewer's time and explain why you are no longer interested in the position.

4. Examples

Proper Form for a Cover Letter

Date

Name
Title
Organization
Address with zip code

Dear _____:

Pique the curiosity of the employer by alluding to what in your experience relates to the job for which you are applying. Indicate where you heard of the position opening and why you are particularly interested in this employer. Mention your student status and whether you seek a permanent or internship position.

In this paragraph show that you have done some research on the organization. Demonstrate that you know its needs and understand its products or services. State what you can contribute to the organization, how your academic background, skills, abilities and personal qualities make you an excellent candidate for the position you are seeking. Mention pertinent work experience so hat the reader may infer that you are qualified for the position.

Refer to your resume, expanding upon what relates to the position or employer. State that additional information can be provided as requested.

Indicate your eagerness for an interview, stating you will call on (give a specific date) to arrange one. Be sure to include a telephone number where you can be reached.

Sincerely,

 

Full name (typed)

Enclosure (your resume)

Letter Requesting Informational Interview

Date

Name
Title
Organization
Address with zip code

Dear _____:

My interest in marketing and publishing leads me to apply for the Magazine Publishers Association Summer Intern Program. I am a first-year student at the Program in International Relations at Yale University and am particularly interested in working at Hearst Magazines Division as a summer intern.

Three major areas of Hearst's strategy specially interest me: your success in marketing your magazines in the international market; the establishment of a cable communications division which can utilize your magazine's editorial and research sources as bases for video programming; and, finally, your development of distribution channels to non-traditional retail outlets. I believe these areas will be the key to your continued success, and I would like to work with you on the implementation of these strategies.

My resume will show that I am thoroughly familiar with international marketing programs. As a program manager for CARE, the international development organization, I had total responsibility for developing and implementing programs in Africa and Latin America. I quickly learned that resources alone did not ensure program success. Rather, "selling" the project to government officials and local residents was of primary importance. This ability to understand and effectively operate in other cultures is an important qualification for anyone who hopes to enter the international arena. As Hearst moves forward with its global expansion, employees with these skills will do much to further that expansion. My courses in policy development, international marketing, and economics enable me to make an important contribution to the company as it moves forward.

During the second week in March I will be in New York and would appreciate the opportunity to speak whit you. I will telephone your office within the week to see if it is possible to set up an appointment. I look forward to meeting you soon.

Sincerely,

 

Full name (typed)

Enclosure

Letter Requesting Informational Interview

October 17, 1995

Ms. Ann Thomas
Country Manager
Human Rights Watch
485 Fifth Avenue
New York, NY 10017-6104

Dear Ms. Thomas:

I am a student at the Program in International Relations at Yale University committed to building a career in the field of human rights. I am writing to inquire if I might come to New York to discuss with you Human Rights Watch's strategy for Central and Eastern Europe and positions that might be available in that region. Beth Lyons (IR '89( of the UN Center for Human Rights, whom you have met in the past, suggested that I contact you.

My commitment to a career in human rights stems from the work that I did in Boston, while an undergraduate at Boston College. I participated as a volunteer in several programs for asylum seekers. These ranged from teaching English to translating documents to assisting with legal issues. As I became more involved with the programs, I was convinced that my career should be in the field.

I enrolled in Yale's program for further my training in international relations and specifically chose Yale because of the Schell Center for International Human Rights where I understand you have spoken in the past. At the center, I am actively involved in several projects, including leading a team of student researchers on human rights issues affecting several of the Eastern European countries.

I am looking forward to meeting with you in the near future, and will call your office next week to see when that might be possible. Thank you very much for your consideration in this matter.

Sincerely,

 

Robert Chutney

Thank-You Letter Following Informational Interview

November 13, 1995

Ms. Rose Preston
Vice President
Lancer Calvert & Brown
55 Thouron Avenue
New York, NY 10022

Dear Rose:

Thank you for the wonderful dinner last week and the chance to get to know more about Lancer Calvert & Brown. The more I look at summer associate opportunities, the more I am convinced that Lancer Calvert & Brown is right for me. Certainly the firm's emphasis on emerging markets intrigues me and is consisitent with my program of study. But I am just as impressed by the innovation and teamwork apparently everywhere at Lancer.

I look forward to meeting with you again in New York and await news from James Jackson as to interview times. Thank you again.

Sincerely,

 

Robert Reisman

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