The bad: Judge #2 and #3 agreed that some of the characters acted out of character, and Judge #2 questioned the relevance of X-Force's opinions of the movie industry.
The Summary: X-Force is sitting around the breakfast table when the topic of Movie Stars comes up. What follows are their opinions on several movie stars.
The good: A hilarious look at one of those blessed events, birth. Includes a “worried father, pissed-off mother, and a range of humorous friends.” Oh, the quote this time was from Judge #2. The first part is my opinion…yes…I get to throw in my thoughts if no one thinks a story is bad or good.
The bad: Uhm…after reading this I thought that Judge #2 didn’t enjoy this story very much. “This was really just a loosely tied-together scribble. The same "I'm giving birth" story you could see on a dozen different sitcoms."
The summary: This is a look at how X-Force responds when Elizabeth (an original fic who is Shatterstar's live in girlfriend, and Jimmy’s daughter from the future) gives birth to her and ‘Star's son.
The good: Judge #2 wanted to say that, “This was great! All the characters were written wonderfully, it was a completely original idea, and I'm a sucker for detective novels.” This was the only story to get a 100 from a judge. You also enthralled judge #3 who just had to say that, it was “a good story, mostly because I like to laugh at things, and the story had that humor. There should be more Ric stories.” Did we forget to mention that this won Best Comedy????
The bad: (Sigh) No one wrote any bad comments about your story! So……… I would like to add that if you notice you only got a 14/15 for the spelling/grammar part. Bwhahahaha!!!! Sorry, got carried away there as evil moderator like person. May I suggest you find a beta-reader strong in grammar and spelling? Uhm…that’s about it.
Summary: X-Force has a problem, a ghost haunts their new
headquarters, and only Rictor knows it! How will Rictor save
the group…and how on earth will he survival the strange next door neighbor?
