I haven't tried Haiku for a long time, so I'd appreciate comments on improvement and Criticism.

A CHAIN OF HAIKU

One man, One woman,
sing a chain of triads; Lock -
two bodies and sound.

Loving on the grass
shadow of my finger slips
over your white hand

Shadow of a twig
dropped by a bird, No longer -
is part of her nest.

See that home we'll have..
The shadows in the corners
We'll cover with love.

Two sound bodies; Love -
putting it's chain to unlock
One man, One woman.

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