ATTACK ON THE CRIMSON AVENGER


The lil' Crimson Avenger is having doubts again on if he should tell the others or not. Deep in thought, he sorta gets kidnapped by the little man (just some nameless odd little human that seems prevailant in all my stories). The problem is I never came up with a good excuse why. The weird little human just DOES stuff like that! Knocks ppl out and kidnaps them only to release them the next day? What the heck is up with that?? And that is the reason why it would need heavy revision before anyone sees it. So, continuing on, the others are looking for Cubbi and Tummi, also in the know about Douner, goes to the Whistling Caves to ask if he's seen him. Nope. The little man discusses secret identities and defender stuff with the little caped crusader, and gets introduced to Jen, a very large golden eagle-like bird. Little man takes Cubbi/CA back to Gummi Glen by way of Jen and told that if he wants to know more about him (the little man), then ask Zummi. However, I don't like this idea any more. Eh. Like I said, _heavy_ revision.. :)

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