Here's an idea that is new to me, though maybe not to you. It's not a round robin, but it will be a continuing story in which I am asking for assistance and ideas from the readers--though I'm not sure now long the final story will be. The idea is to read the story, then vote on what course the next segment will take. Hopefully this will involve not only people at are presently writing fantic but those that haven't taken the plunge yet as well. Instructions follow at the end of this part. Keep in mind that I love happy endings with intriguing and surprising plots. So here it goes, I hope I hear from a lot of you. And I hope this is a success. Note that the title is not etched in concrete--it is subject to change depending on the final outcome of the story. An Expression of Their Love by PJ in NH (with the help of other PTF members) Rated NC-17 The breeze from the lake wound its way across the shore and up the hillside to the field where Tom and B'Elanna lay where it drifted over their flushed, naked bodies. Tom had folded up his clothes and was using them as a pillow and B'Elanna was resting her head on Tom's stomach. Both were deliriously happy after spending the last hour expressing their love for each other. "Have I told you today that you're beautiful, B'Elanna Torres?" Tom drawled as he stroked her hair with his left hand. Crinkling her nose. B'Elanna pondered the question. "Let's see you told me you loved me." "And I do love you." Tom tweaked her pert nose with his long fingers. "Then, I think you told me that I was ummm ....I think the word was....inventive?" Tom sighed at the thought. "Yep, I'd say that inventive describes that last hour quite well." The half-Klingon rolled over on her stomach and gave her lover a raspberry to his belly button. He laughed at her childish antics. "Then I believe you told me that I was insatiable," she reminded him and using only her fingernails stroked the inside of his bare thigh. "Yep, you certainly were that. An insatiable half-Klingon, you know what a chore it is to keep up with your needs." he let out a dramatic, pitiful sigh that caused B'Elanna to laugh. "But 'beautiful'? I don't believe you said I was beautiful." she admitted equally dramatically. "Then I've been neglecting you, my love." He sat up and pulled her into his arms and kissed her passionately. His lips wove a path from her mouth, down her cheek and to her neck. B'Elanna growled expressing her delight. Then her heard it. He opened his eyes and there before the still nude pair was . . . * * * * * * * * * * E-mail me at kelhapam@lr.net and let me know your opinion on what Tom sees. Keep in mind they can either be on the holodeck or on an alien planet. It could be an alien, a Voyager crewmember (you tell me which one), or something entirely different. If you want you can elaborate on your idea. You have until next Saturday morning, November 7 to send me your ideas. I will then take a tally of the vote and proceed to write the next piece of the story during that weekend. Note the decision of the judge (namely me) is final. Also, a special thanks to Marleena for agreeing to post this story as it develops. Her site addy is http://www.geocities.com/Area51/Rampart/6467/ She helps to make this all possible. Wish me luck.