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Name (not necessarily your real name) : Rapina
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e-mail : Rapina@GameBox.net
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URL : http://www.geocities.com/rapinah/contents.html
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s) : Rapina, Thane, Nathaniel
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Comment : After reading the Dark Icon guest book I thought, "Why not?" Thus here is is, a place to post comments on the Rapina/Pedigree stories. If you are reading this, then I must have finally got it working :)
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Name (not necessarily your real name) : Rapina
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Date (mm/dd/yyyy) : 03/03/2002
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e-mail : Rapina@GameBox.net
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URL : http://www.geocities.com/rapinah/contents.html
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s) : Rapina, Thane, Nathaniel
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Comment : I added a Date field to the form so I have some idea of how far along the stories/characters being commented on were at the time of the post.
-Rapina :)
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Name (not necessarily your real name) : Stephen
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Date (mm/dd/yyyy) : 03/04/2002
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s) : Nathaniel, Rapina, Thane
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Comment : I've liked these stories so far. Keep up the good work! Personally, I'm sorta routing for Nathaniel in any conflict between him, blaymore, and zade (last two being from darkicon) but feel somewhat guilty about it ...
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Name (not necessarily your real name) : King Kong
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Date (mm/dd/yyyy) : 3-5-2002
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e-mail / URL : mighty_kingkong@yahoo.com
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s) : Well certainly rapina and maybe jamal from pedigree
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Chapter(s) : their is no such thing as a less important part of the body so their is no lesser part of the story----wize quote form some sage type dude.
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Comment : Pedigree is pretty good the writing is better that rapina I think. But rapina way cooler any day.... now whens the next episode due?
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Name or Nickname : Eduardo Perini Muniz
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Date (mm/dd/yyyy) : 03/05/2002
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s)/Chapter(s) : epm@iqsc.sc.usp.br
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Comment : Rapina started quite well, then it lost a lot of consistency, it became more "What would be the reasonable thing for this character to do?" and less "I am the character, what will I do?". Anyway, if Rapina is a cold person you are doing right. It is bette
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Name or Nickname : Rapina
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Date (mm/dd/yyyy) : 3/5/2002
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s)/Chapter(s) : Rapina, Thane, Nathaniel
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Comments -fill box only- : Okay, okay, thanks to King Kong's prodding, and Dark Icon's not finishing the next part of Captive Souls yet, I have finished off [Rapina]046 on, The Best Laid Plans
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, : page http://www.geocities.com/rapinah/laid.html
I'm working on Jooldig next.
-Rapina
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Name or Nickname : Rapina
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Date (mm/dd/yyyy) : 3/5/2002
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s)/Chapter(s) : Rapina, Thane, Nathaniel
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Comments -fill box only- : On the Pedigree front, I love that you're rooting for Nathaniel, Stephen, -giggles- I can give Dark Icon a poke and a grin because of it :)
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, : -Rapina
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Name or Nickname : Rapina
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Date (mm/dd/yyyy) : 03/05/2002
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s)/Chapter(s) : Rapina
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Comments -fill box only- : Okay, for Eduardo whose message got cut off by the geo code. I am sorry if Rapina seems a little cold lately. Earlier she was in more one on one scenes so her warmth
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, : could come out. Lately with the whole tribe of orcs it has been a survival situation with less one on one. The (coming) smithy scene should be more personal. -Rapina
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Name or Nickname : Stephen
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Date (mm/dd/yyyy) : 03/05/02
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Favorite Rapina/Pedigree Character(s)/Chapter(s) : Rapina, Thane, Nathaniel
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Comments -fill box only- : I thought i'd add a thought on Rapina's char. development. Although overall it makes sense, esp. given Thane's char., I think more depth could be added through a flaw or
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, : weakness. Not a tragic flaw, but perhaps some sort of limit (ex: magic strength) that forces char. development other than increasing independance and self-reliance.
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Date //Nickname // e-mail : 3/6/02 // Rapina // Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : I am still experimenting trying to get the Geo code to give us more room for messages, but so far filling two boxes without overflowing them to any appreciable degree appears to give
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, : the greatest number of lines in a message so far. I'm not really happy about that, but at least we know what we're up against. Two boxes seems to be the definate limit
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Date //Nickname // e-mail : 3/6/02 // Rapina // Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : I'd like to hear more detail on what you are saying, Stephen. The fact that these geo guest book messages have to be so small leaves your post confusing to me.
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, : A little more detail would be good. You know my email address if you feel like elaborating. I wish I could get more space for these posts but it looks like 2 boxes is it.
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Date //Nickname // e-mail : 3/7/02 Rapina quoting geo help on guestbook lameness
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : You may notice that some Guestbook entries that are rather long get "cut off". This is due to the fact that
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, : there is a character limit per
Guestbook entry (approx. 200-250 characters). At this time, there is no way to increase this character limit.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : King Kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Yay!! Captive Souls is out at last.
Now on to reading it.
bye.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : King Kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Rapina,Rapina where art thou fair Rapina? Do my mails not reach you?
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, : You can blame it on net congestion :)
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 3/21/02 Rapina Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Oops, I misplaced your message but found and answered it. Sorry about that. It had nothing to do with internet congestion, more like brain congestion :) -Rapina
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : King Kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : 'Smith'? I thought jooldig was next up, is Rapina going to meet the Republica's top agent?.
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, : Just making wild guesses there :)
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 3/24/02 Rapina Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Not agent Smith. I mean real smiths that work metal.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : king kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : oops, thats what comes of making wild
guesses. So have I learned any thing?
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, : No, I now guess Rapina gets a magical armour suit that changes shape ans size to always fit her perfectly.
;)
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 3/26/02 Rapina Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : She might wish she could get magic armor, but that requres more than smiths; that requires mages, and is out of anyone she knows' price range :)
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, : On the other hand, you have the general idea right. Her breast plate isn't fitting her lately, too many orcs.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : king kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Ack!!! Evil tainted metal forged by evil creatures on Rapina. nooooo.....
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, : Perhapts you should write a chaperone into the story... you know to 'save' Rapina from he orcs and herself.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : king kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : The above post was only posted since I am now convinced of the power of my esp, to gues future plots.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : Lord Dreamer
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : When will the next updates on the Pedigree and Rapina stories come out? I thought that the Pedigree chapters were going to be speeding up.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 4/4/02 // Lord Mace // iegmcclu@hotmail.com
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Just finished reading Rapina's chronicles over the last two days - EXCELLENT! When's Jooldig due? I'll start on the other saga shortly, but I'd like to know :) Dark Icon takes too long to update the Crusade, and
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, : The Adventurers saga on peldor.com has ended for now at least (I can only hope he decides to start writing again), and I need something to keep me occupied! Ok, complaining done, kudos to you. Great work.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 4/3/02 Rapina Rapina@MageBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Thank you Lord Mace, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Right now DarkIcon and I are drafting, Captive Souls, but DI also has some other projects going and we both
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, : have mundane things that take time when we could be writing. I'm not sure when Jooldig's first installment will be out as it depends on time spent drafting Captive Souls.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : King Kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Hey Captive Souls 4 is out
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, : Most excellent
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 5/27/02 Stephen
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Hey, so I really hate to be pushy, but I thought I'd ask if you've got any idea when the next rapina update is coming? I realize that you do, most unfortunately, have a
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, : life outside of this story ... but I (and, no doubt, many others) would be quite happy to see the story continue!
Good Luck, Stephen
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 6/20/2 Rapina Rapina@MageBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : I've been doing little bits of Rapina and they are adding up, but haven't had a lot of time lately. I'm going to try to finish a smallish part and post it so readers
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, : will get something new. DI and I are also working on the next Captive Souls. -Rapina
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 6-20-02 // Stephen Byrd
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Oh good ... I'm looking forward to updates on both stories. I'll just ignore the phrase "smallish post" and blissfully assume the post will be massive until I find
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Vote Rapina For Troll Leader!!!
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 6/26/2 Rapina Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Jooldig is now up on the page :)
-Rapina
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 6/28/02 Stephen
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Fun for everyone! Although, now that i think about it, giving rapina armor that allows her to wear it while having sex is evil ... imagine a battle where the
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, : enemy soldiers approach only to see rapina with a troll (or two) -- instant brain-freeze creates easy target!! More seriously, I liked the post, thanks for writing it!
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : Rapina 8/6/2 Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : The next episode: [Rapina]049 Land of Desolation, is up on the web. I still have to give it another read to take out any minor glitches, but I put it up to keep things moving :)
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-Rapina
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 8/7/02 // Stephen
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Wow, Land of Desolation is very good. Despite its disappointingly short length -- I'd have prefered several hundred pages worth of update :) it was engaging and
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, : exciting. I'm quite impressed. Will R.'s calling upon the god of the dead get Thane's attention? I hope the next update comes soon (and that R. gets her body back)!
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 8/7/2 Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Thanks a bunch for your encouraging comments, Stephen. I think most of the reason I continue to write is because of my wonderful readers. I did a quick edit on Land of Desolation.
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, : Not much of substance was changed but I did add a paragraph during the scene with Vulvilea on the pentacle that shows what slimy T’zar’s actual master plan was :) There is a new segment in process.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : Stephen
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : An edit??? How unfortunate, I am forced to re-read all of Land of Desolation ... poor me :).
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 8/12/2 Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Two small new chapters have just been posted to the, Land of Desolation, page. They include [Rapina]050 Lady Doe and [Rapina]051 Leeched -Enjoy :)
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 8/18/02//Eduardo
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : The last twist in Rapina's history was nice, good job.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 8/31/2 Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Thank you Eduardo. Encouraging readers keep me writing. This part has been difficult. Too make later parts you have not seen run smoother, I had to revise/add to the little blurbs where
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, : the mystery woman is remembering things in, 051 Leeched. No huge changes here, but important nuances for later. I’ll post a lot of new once editing is through.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 9/19/02 Stephen
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Sigh ... well, the story was very well written but it has a definite flaw. You see, its not finished ... a significant problem. I think Rapina should
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, : drop everything else and focus on getting this portion of the story to a resolution. Of course, the current high quality of writing should be maintained!
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 9/19/02 Stephen
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : On a side note about the latest update, when Rapina has to strike Dorety of her list, she swears "a blue streak." I suppose that I just might never have heard the
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, : expression, but I was thrown for a bit upon reading it. Perhaps "a stream of expletives?" might have been better -- or it could be my failing for not knowing the phrase!
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : King kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Hi, I got the mail about 'Dark as sable' but I cant seem to find it on the site... :(
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, : So I'll just reread land of desolation again.. ;)
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 9/20/2 Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : [Rapina]052 A Night As Dark As Sable has been posted on the, Land of Desolation, page. You can yell at me for the things I left out of the story either here or on one of the Dark Icon message boards. :)
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, : It should be there King Kong. I see by the posts that others have read it. It is the last part of the, Land Of Desolation, page. Make sure you hit “refresh” on your browser so it does not load an old version of the page
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 9/20 02 Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Thank you Stephen for your kind remarks about the Sable episode. Positive feedback is definitely what keeps me writing. Hmm, swearing a blue streak may be an idiomatic phrase
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, : limited to certain areas of the USA during a certain nebulous era in the past. I’ll change that to “swore like a pirate.” Thank you for bringing that to my attention.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : kingkong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : thanx rapina, it did the trick. This reminds me of the old joke ...
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, : Dial a wrong number on the phone and then keep trying to connect by pressing redial. :-)
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 01/10/2002//eduardo//epm@iqsc.sc.usp.br
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Well, I have to admit that the first time that I've read the last episode of rapina I thought: OK, now it is with a horse, and so?
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, : Only now I started to think that it is with a horse in the midle of a place where this kind of behavior is very dangerous. It will be interesting.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 01/10/2002//eduardo//epm@iqsc.sc.usp.br
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Very nicely written also, I am waiting for the next one with all patience that I can.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 6/10/02
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : I just love each of the stories, I think that they are both original and ensnaring in their readability. Keep up the good work
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : Oct. 13//Stephen
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : As usual, the update is well done and leaves me impatiently waiting for the next one. I like how you've worked several different character types into the family.
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, : It's interesting to see the father balance his opinions and his wife's. On a side note, is it possible to make the recent guestbook entries appear first?
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 10/13/2 Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : [Rapina]053 Summertime, has been posted. Thanks for the comments Eduardo. Although important for her survivial, I couldn't write much about Rapina's Andalusian and
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, : any close calls because such things are so hugely taboo in the States that Geocities would string me up by my toes and delete my page. Thus it's mostly left as implication :)
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : 10/13/2 Rapina@GameBox.net
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Thanks Stephen. Geo's guest books are kind of lame. This explains why actual conversation about the Rapina story often takes place on the Dark Icon boards.
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, : I double-checked to see if I can display the latest entries first but I can't. The best one can do is bookmark the page with the most recent entries.
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Date // Nickname // e-mail : kong
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Comments -fill each box w/o overflow- : Excellent post, in facs forget Rapina why not write about Bellany from now on!!! :)
Just joking!
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